Rondovania

[Jpw1218]

Hi I just came up with an idea for a fantasy world and will describe it in subsequent posts. I will also try to answer any questions.

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You will be discovering things as I write them, as if you are a traveler from wherever you're from and are visiting.

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As I enter the city through the wrought iron gates I am assaulted by a variety of smells and sound. As the first traveller from my country to visit this civilization I have been told to represent my country well. I gather my thoughts and take another step into the unknown.

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After walking through the gates I encounter another set of doors. As I step over the threshold my breath is taken away.

[Jpw1218]

As I walk forward I come to the edge of a giant sinkhole. After looking around I see an old rope ladder. I prepare for the worst and begin to descend

[Omeganaut]

I'm absolutely not trying to drive you away or anything, but what is your purpose in posting this? Should we evaluate your setting? In that case a 1st person perspective probably isn't the best, and you should try and post larger sections at once. Is this a story? If so it should go in the Arts and Crafts forum.

[Aella]

Why not just RP it? Interaction would flesh out your world waaay better.