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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 2nd strip posted!

    Awesome comic. I would like to see more (even though I got to read the first two comics, but I'm in a hurry)
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 2nd strip posted!

    Your luck is in Omicroncubed, because I'm just about to put up the 3rd strip!

    Strip 3- Is dey Gonna be Okay?
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    As always your opinions and comments would be greatly appreciated, I'm really glad to be getting some feedback, both compliments and constructive criticisms!

    Cheers and thanks again
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    Plot thickens \o/

    I can already tell that Beech is probably going to be my favorite character beech thog's friend
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    Alright I just read it So far It's been wonderfull.
    EDIT: Oh and by I'm in a hurry meant: ''Me being forced off the computer''
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    I like it, I wil certainly keep reading it.

    The style I find maybe a bit confusing and the pictures look a bit messy, but I am confident that will change in future comics as you are getting used to a certain style.

    It looks great.

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    What's with the line on her face in panel 3?

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    Yeah sorry, I'll be the first to admit my art looks a bit busy, but I'm hoping it will settle down as I carry on and get comfortable with a certain style!

    Shadic - The line is supposed to be her arm with her hand over her eyes, as in a 'duh' moment because of Beech's dumb comments, though looking at it that isn't clear!
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    I'm getting more and more curious :)

    To make her look like she's thinking he's dumb, maybe you could close her eyes. You know, use lines instead? And I think it might be clearer if her arm wasn't on her face, only her hand, if you know what I mean. That line is a bit hard to interpret as it is.

    I really like your art, though, and I think it looks better from one strip to the next, so keep going :).

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    I've just lost my progress on strip 4, damn computers! This may delay me a while, I was hoping to post it tomorrow but may be towards the end of the week now
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 3rd strip posted!

    Scratch that, I've had a burst of creativity and strip 4 is finished!

    Strip 4 - Way to Break the Mood
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    It was a bit of a rush, so the art might be a bit rough around the edges, but please as always give me any feedback you see fit!

    Hope you enjoy
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    Oh my word. That is funnier than The Day the Music Died (its a bbc radio program, look it up). Seriously, really good stuff
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    Serieously, this is great.

    (I already see your artwork improving, great!)

    This was funny.

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 4th strip posted!

    I think the art and composition pulled together better in the last one (though why does her hand glow green?)

    I liked the darkness of it (very consistant) and the line widths worked well with the close-ups and farther-away shots. It was easier on the eyes to follow what was going on.

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 4th strip posted!

    Sweet

    You make really great comics.

    No wait... I don't think you deserve one small grin...



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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 4th strip posted!

    Wow, thank you all, I'm a little embaressed by the compliments to be honest, little old me and my silly famcomic

    But thank you all, your helping me improve my art and my positioning etc, and keeping me motivated to carry on drawing!

    Ava - That green is the star on her armour, but the way her hand is it really does look like her hand is glowing!

    I'm not sure what to do next, clear up previous strips or start the new one, I'll see how I feel later today.

    Thank you all again for the comments and tips!
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 4th strip posted!

    Hello all you forum types, I've got a strip ready to put up, but I'm not particularly happy with it, so don't expect too much! I wanted to make it a double length strip but it was going to take me too long, and I didn't want the trickle of interest to dry up!

    So I'm posting up the frst part of strip 5, with part 2 to come up sometime over the weekend.

    Strip 5 - A Blatant Plot Device (Part 1)
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    As always comments of pretty much any kind are welcome, mainly so I know that people are reading!

    Cheers
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 1) posted!

    That's... Elan!?

    Heh heh, Beech ate black mushrooms...

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 1) posted!

    Elan????

    Cool

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 1) posted!

    Heh-eeehh, NICE! Well, it ain't fan-work without the occasional cameo!
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 1) posted!

    AHA those are great! Keep making them!

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 1) posted!

    Awesome comics. Keep up the good work and thanks for making them.

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 1) posted!

    Thanks again for the nice comments!

    I've had a very busy last few days so progress on part 2 of strip 5 has been very slow. However I'm about 3 panels in, so I should get it posted by the end of tomorrow at the latest!

    Cheers for putting up with my tardiness
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 1) posted!

    Roll up all you forumites for the next strip is here! Sorry that it's slowed down recently but I'll do my best to not slow down any further....

    Strip 5 - A Blatant Plot Device (Part 2)
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    As always any comments are welcome, whether their tips, criticisms or just to say you enjoy what I'm trying to put together! It's always nice to know you're wanted!

    Cheers all

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 2) posted!

    Sweet. It really is Elan.

    I'm looking forward to the next one!
    I'm VERY busy due to real life and whatnot, so I'm taking a break from all WWs and SGs. I should have warned y'all beforehand, and I apologize if I've inconvenienced any of you due to my many autolynches. I really should have stated how busy my life is.


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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 2) posted!

    Just a quick character creation while I'm working on the 6th strip (which will be along soon).

    I tried a different art style to se what jenna came out like, and here it is:



    While I think I'll have it as an avatar I don't think I could do a comic in the same style, it would take forever! However if anyone prefers it then I might make an attempt in coming strips.
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 5th strip (part 2) posted!

    I've finished work on strip 6, this one I'm happier with, and I think it starts to give a little bit more of the plot...plus you get to see the evil guy for the first time!

    Comments have dried up a lot over the last few strips, I'm hoping that's not because I'm getting worse? A comment or two would make banjo a much happier man

    Anyhow here's the comic:

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    Edit- Damnit 7th comic and my first spelling mistake, re-hosting it now with sword spelt right!

    Even more than normal, any comments are welcome, about the story, questions, comments on my art style or humour, anything really!

    Hope you enjoy...

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 6TH STRIP posted!

    Looking good!

    And Strip 5 made me laugh loads. Keep up the good work!

    EDIT: Oh, and your spoiler in your signature is going weird...whenever I click to open or close it, two extra tabs open in Firefox with Roland St. Jude's profile...
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 6TH STRIP posted!

    I like it. I like all of them, although I find the plot quite complicated.

    The artwork is improving, although I somehow think all the pictures look a bit blurred, I am sure you didn't do that on purpose. Maybe you should try uploading 1 of them in Imageshack and see the difference.

    I like it and I am certainly going to continue reading them.

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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 6TH STRIP posted!

    Oh god yeah I've just noticed my signature went all screwy, think I've cleared it up now though!

    As for ImageShack I might have a go, I'm using Photobucket, but I'm getting loads of complaints about the blurriness, it's not like that when I'm drawing it that's for sure!
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    Default Re: Whitefeather OOTS fancomic - 6TH STRIP posted!

    You misspelled 'sword' ... 'swrods vorpal'

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