Avatar Battle Royale V: Salmon and his Lackeys

[FireDrake]

I assume this is for the new fortress now? Since I sent it away to the void?

EDIT: Yes, Bayar, I (sort of) blew up the citadel. read both parts of the comic.

I really don't get what you did.

As far as I can tell that was a flashback to somewhere else, and nothing has changed here.

[Bayar]

Gods should not be allowed here...i MEAN, We have a Demi-god, but he does not abuse it...you just want to do things your way, not the ABR way .

[BRC]

Comic isn't finished yet, duh.


I have part 1 ready, and don't worry, A new fortress will be introduced (I'll leave the rest of you to describe it) with a bit less powerful features. Atta, Moa, Dr. Lazurus, and Pilot will be allright though.


And everyone got teleported out, for the record.


I'll get part one posted right now. I'll get part 2 ready as soon as I can.

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Suspensful, no?

Oh, and as to the godmoding, temporarilly, yes. In case you haven't noticed, I'm A GOD!!!


Note the temporarily. I'll lose my god powers soon.

Sweet Plot Hijacking/Godmodding batman!
I call for a vote of non-canonity.
Also, PS, tone down your power level if you want to be in the plot.
Or I could have commie use his immunity do divine abilities (Religion is the opiate of the masses) and knock you down a few knotches.

[Squark]

I just lost all of my god-powers. And the vote is for the new citadel.

[FireDrake]

So let me get this straight:

Squark put the citadel into some void, similar to that in mechafoxes hat. Right?

and now we're in a new citadel that popped up out of nowhere.

I'm confused.

[Squark]

As I've said, I've lost my god powers. As I recall, the fortress of vengance got blown-up, so I claim canocity by virtue of a previous example.


DO I REALLY NEED TO SAY EVERYTHING FIVE TIMES???!!!

[Nameless]

I am completely lost, first there was this whole thing about you wanting my powers, I said I couldn't give them to you, yet on the next comic, I have the new scythe and I didn't get the rest of what was going on...

Now we're all trapped in the void from Dr. Who for a reason I do not fully understand...

EDIT: so we go popped into a catidal that came out of nowhere? I think I need to take a break...

[BRC]

I just lost all of my god-powers. And the vote is for the new citadel.

So whats the point, We kind of had the plot going strong, and you just changed the citadel for no discernable reason.
this is why things make no sense, everybody wants a big moment.

[Lyinginbedmon]

I'm a biased source, but I'm tempted to agree on the Citadel here, it's kind of a mainstay now, we had a lot going on inside.

Also, for fans of the world map, here's something new:

[Squark]

So let me get this straight:

Squark put the citadel and everyone in it into some void, similar to that in mechafoxes hat. Right?

No. Just the citadel. Everyone else is in a new citadel, besides team salmon. The void is just emptyness. Its my hat that's like mechafox's.


Also, I'm sorry, but I just tried to emphasize my temporary god-powers as such. I also percieved the jovacian missiles and uber-wall of force as overpowering, so thought I'd get rid of them. If you like, the new citadel could somehow be a copy.


Everyone happy?

Please? I'm still trying to get a feel for this place. I didn't see any rules, so how was I supposed to know I violated them.

[onasuma]

Since if either side got hold of them, it would be kind of broken.

Wait wait wait wait wait. YOU'RE talking to US about brocken? I think you invented the word.

Also: Vote of non-cannoninity seconded

[BRC]

No. Just the citadel. Everyone else is in a new citadel, besides team salmon. The void is just emptyness. Its my hat that's like mechafox's.


Also, I'm sorry, but I just tried to emphasize my temporary god-powers as such. I also percieved the jovacian missiles and uber-wall of force as overpowering, so thought I'd get rid of them. If you like, the new citadel could somehow be a copy.

As I said, random big moment.
And nobody else has complained about the missles yet.
In terms of rules, the rules of Improv Comedy would apply, I'll post them later, I gots a test to study for *panic*

[Askaris]

Dude... God... and everone's in a new citadel. Without the bombs and uber-shield. Since if either side got hold of them, it would be kind of broken.

Granted. However, did anyone explicitly say you could blow up a major plot point? Our survey says "MIP MURRRP".


Vote of non canon-icity thirded.

[JasonDoomsblade]

OH MY GOD. 3 more bloody pages sprang up?! I am missing way too much during school.

[Squark]

Fine... The new citadel is identical... But really, is it really nessacery to make it non-canonical? I mean, then we have to rework what happened to me, and I already had some charecter development planned and... I'm sorry, ok? I'm still getting a feel for this place.

EDIT ^ yah... Thanks to me...

[Dallas-Dakota]

Note : as said, there are different universes, this is in a different one, and the fire IS happening here.

I vote Yellow and darker yellow.
New comic up!
The comic : the rise of the castle.

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[Squark]

We could even make the citadel another Bis-anu... The other lost temple... And since the majority of the stuff got teleported out, its just a crazy plot twist. You've done crazier stuff.

Again, I'm sorry If I did something wrong. But you can't just invent rules just because you don't like what someone did within them.


EDIT: Although, that rules thing does give me the idea for a banner.

[Bayar]

Third vote for non-canon. You cant just come and steal the show like that. Even if it makes me puke, it is "Salmon and his lackeys", not "the freaking penguin god that randomly changes stuff because he wants to"...

[Nameless]

Fine... The new citadel is identical... But really, is it really nessacery to make it non-canonical? I mean, then we have to rework what happened to me, and I already had some charecter development planned and... I'm sorry, ok? I'm still getting a feel for this place.

EDIT ^ yah... Thanks to me...

I think you just need to reweork your story line, this is a huge change (and very confuseing) for a charicter that has only just joind today.

So, sorry, but I'm gonna cave to go for Non-cannon... even tho I have no ide why it is that we call it that

[Bayar]

I dont want to do stuff my way, I just want to blend in with the others...you want to control the show. It is Godmodding, and it is not allowed...so your comic will not be canon. DEAL WITH IT !!! ....newb

[Lyinginbedmon]

The Citadel's shield and missiles aren't too powerful.

The shield can be repaired if destroyed, granted, but Disintegrate still makes a big enough hole for people to slip through, even if they can't teleport or dimension door inside while it's up (Which extends to the indoors, by the way). You need to kill half the other systems (Including missiles) to get the energy to push the Mirrors of Mental Prowess through the shielding.

The missiles were given a specific 2 mile range from the Citadel. Why? Because it was originally set a good few more miles away from civilisation. Even with the fact that it's now airborne and flying about, the Seen Servants (And, although he's presently largely assumed dead, Lyinginbedmon) control them. Since I'm as big a fan of storyline as anyone, I'm not planning on unleashing them on Blauport City any time soon. They're not even very fast, they only fly by Fly, 30 ft./round (Or 3.4 mph).

This is why no-one has complained about them yet. They aren't invincible and they haven't god-modded, if anything they only seem broken because I'm a compulsive statistician

@V I think we can reasonably assume it's non-canon now.

As for reworking the storyline, how about this:

We have a universe-hopping god bunch, and we have multiple universes. How about the incident in your comics occured within another universe, and the evil Krauqs blasted your beaten and broken corpse into ours.

If DC comics can do it, so can we

[Omicroncubed]

HOLY S**T BAYAR CHILL DOWN ALREADY!!!! I know you got a point but CHILL!

Also 4th vote for noncanon

[Bayar]

umm...we should have a newcomer rule: no exagerated plot twists in the first 3 days....

[onasuma]

[FireDrake]

umm...we should have a newcomer rule: no exagerated plot twists in the first 3 days....

I'll vote for that and the noncanonictity thing.

[Bayar]

Note : as said, there are different universes, this is in a different one, and the fire IS happening here.

I vote Yellow and darker yellow.
New comic up!
The comic : the rise of the castle.

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Is that blauport city?

[Squark]

I'm trying to work this out... I'm going to reread the last few pages, just so I don't miss what anyone said. I think we all missed something. Also, did every school in the country have teacher's convention, or do most of you just have free-time right now... Because its oddly crowded in here.


I'll try to summarise what's happened.

1. Kheal and Squark teleport in to aprehend Nameless.
2. Nameless is released while Squark gives Threeshades a minor plot expo
3. Squark and kheal arrive at the citadel, unfortunatley allowing Squark's evil twin to come through to this universe.
4. Kheal and Nameless work out an agreement involving Kheal taking over the deathy-type stuff and Nameless borrowing Kheal's scythe. Kheal teleports to Nameless's house (offpanel)
5. Squark's evil twin kills ... Mr. Demigod, who is sent to Kheal's realm and tasked with the redecoration of it in exchange for ressurection.
6. Squark expels everyone to prevent them from being killed by his evil twin (Krauqs).
7.Squark and Krauqs fight a long battle culminating in the banishment of the citadel to the void and Squark's "death" and loss of god powers.

[Lyinginbedmon]

Alright already! We get it, he made a mistake!

Granted, a mistake the size of good ol' Sol after eighty billion years of binge eating, but a mistake.

Let's stop riding him about it and work to fix it.

Squark: Not helping

@V Yay! I'm useful

[Threeshades]

Dude... God... and everone's in a new citadel. Without the bombs and uber-shield. Since if either side got hold of them, it would be kind of broken.

Important announcement:
The Citadel of Bis Anu is still in the harbor of Blauport city, it was not destroyed and most definetly not replaced. Threeshades and her party are still in the citadel and no, that's not broken it's part of the creeping plot, and the plot belongs to Salmon and me, since it is our duel and we decide what's canon and what is not. You are all only side characters and we decide how much we let you take influence on the plot. (Lyinginbedmon and Kpenguin are contributing to it in a very constructive manner which is why they have so much influence)

[Bayar]

I'm trying to work this out... I'm going to reread the last few pages, just so I don't miss what anyone said. I think we all missed something. Also, did every school in the country have teacher's convention, or do most of you just have free-time right now... Because its oddly crowded in here.


I'll try to summarise what's happened.

1. Kheal and Squark teleport in to aprehend Nameless.
2. Nameless is released while Squark gives Threeshades a minor plot expo
3. Squark and kheal arrive at the citadel, unfortunatley allowing Squark's evil twin to come through to this universe.
4. Kheal and Nameless work out an agreement involving Kheal taking over the deathy-type stuff and Nameless borrowing Kheal's scythe. Kheal teleports to Nameless's house (offpanel)
5. Squark's evil twin kills ... Mr. Demigod, who is sent to Kheal's realm and tasked with the redecoration of it in exchange for ressurection.
6. Squark expels everyone to prevent them from being killed by his evil twin (Krauqs).
7.Squark and Krauqs fight a long battle culminating in the banishment of the citadel to the void and Squark's "death" and loss of god powers.

very cute...maybe it will be a secret comic...I personally think the whole godmodding and citadel changing is rubbish...but your last 2 comics has art improvement...I give you credit for that