Avatar Battle Royale V: Salmon and his Lackeys

[Squark]

I have an idea. we declare the second part non-canon, and have me sacrifcie my divine powers to instead somehow put out the citadel. I also got everyone back in time. We then continue with the funeral as I planned. Ok?

[Dallas-Dakota]

No, it isnt blauport city.
As said earlier, there are different dimensions.
In the dimension that I post(ed) comics of, Salmon is dead, Salmon can be raised, and I was his top lackey so I got the castle, but then everybody dissapeared in the fire, so I´m now alone in this dimension.

for everybodys mind, lets call the one I am in, Dimension two, the one you guys were in dimension one, ok?
and there was this something about the void?

And people, calm down the conversation, I thought this was to be ment as a thread where there was a story line and it COULD be contineud but ONLY in comic?

Ok.....then how do other people join the comic? just asking, becouse I´m just wondering if I just royally screwed up...

[Bayar]

Important announcement:
The Citadel of Bis Anu is still in the harbor of Blauport city, it was not destroyed and most definetly not replaced. Threeshades and her party are still in the citadel and no, that's not broken it's part of the creeping plot, and the plot belongs to Salmon and me, since it is our duel and we decide what's canon and what is not. You are all only side characters and we decide how much we let you take influence on the plot. (Lyinginbedmon and Kpenguin are contributing to it in a very constructive manner which is why they have so much influence)

Amin to that sister(brother.....whatever...)

[onasuma]

Oh... Now my comic is wasted.

Well, here it is anyway:


For some reason my speach has gone. It should say: "well, isnt that convienant."

[Bayar]

No, it isnt blauport city.
As said earlier, there are different dimensions.
In the dimension that I post(ed) comics of, Salmon is dead, Salmon can be raised, and I was his top lackey so I got the castle, but then everybody dissapeared in the fire, so I´m now alone in this dimension.

for everybodys mind, lets call the one I am in, Dimension two, the one you guys were in dimension one, ok?
and there was this something about the void?

And people, calm down the conversation, I thought this was to be ment as a thread where there was a story line and it COULD be contineud but ONLY in comic?

love your paralel universe idea...think it was never used in ABR

[Nameless]

I'm trying to work this out... I'm going to reread the last few pages, just so I don't miss what anyone said. I think we all missed something. Also, did every school in the country have teacher's convention, or do most of you just have free-time right now... Because its oddly crowded in here.


I'll try to summarise what's happened.

1. Kheal and Squark teleport in to aprehend Nameless.
2. Nameless is released while Squark gives Threeshades a minor plot expo
3. Squark and kheal arrive at the citadel, unfortunatley allowing Squark's evil twin to come through to this universe.
4. Kheal and Nameless work out an agreement involving Kheal taking over the deathy-type stuff and Nameless borrowing Kheal's scythe. Kheal teleports to Nameless's house (offpanel)
5. Squark's evil twin kills ... Mr. Demigod, who is sent to Kheal's realm and tasked with the redecoration of it in exchange for ressurection.
6. Squark expels everyone to prevent them from being killed by his evil twin (Krauqs).
7.Squark and Krauqs fight a long battle culminating in the banishment of the citadel to the void and Squark's "death" and loss of god powers.

Just to clear something else up, I didn't agree to give him my powers if you look back a few pages.

[Squark]

Ok, Bayar, You need to learn to forgive a mistake... Ok? And realize that not everyone realizes what the posts made while they are trying to post say.

Just my opinion, but you need to calm down.

[Bayar]

Ok, Bayar, You need to learn to forgive a mistake... Ok? And realize that not everyone realizes what the posts made while they are trying to post say.

Just my opinion, but you need to calm down.

I got calmed down. I already stated that you got comic improvement in the last 2 comics...

[Squark]

I think my idea works fairly well, but apparently Threeshades gets the final say.


WOULD SOMEONE PLEASE GET THE RULES ON THE FRONT PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Oh, and Nameless? I assumed you saw the post about how somehow Kheal just assumed your duties, and you wouldn't use the death touch thing.

EDIT: ^Thank you. As those who followed non-comic posts (I don't blame you for not doing as so, I don't all the time), I switched from Paint to Inkscape.

[Nameless]

I think my idea works fairly well, but apparently Threeshades gets the final say.


WOULD SOMEONE PLEASE GET THE RULES ON THE FRONT PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Oh, and Nameless? I assumed you saw the post about how somehow Kheal just assumed your duties, and you wouldn't use the death touch thing.

EDIT: ^Thank you. As those who followed non-comic posts (I don't blame you for not doing as so, I don't all the time), I switched from Paint to Inkscape.

If you look back at ABRIII, I did try and use it, but I keep on missing, it's one of those running puns no one knows about :P



... Sorry, couldn't resist...

[Dallas-Dakota]

People, if you dont come in the dimension I am in, I wont use your character.

just to clear that up.

[Squark]

Ok, here's my canon revision.

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Any problems?

(The change is now that just the fire gets sent into the void)

EDIT: Oh. Just post a conversation with Kheal about that, and I THINK we'll have everything fixed. Hopefully.

And with my... well, I don't want to spoil it... Lets just say it means I'm going to change... Kudos if you figure out what the quote is from and what's happening.

[Nameless]

What diamension are you in Dallas?

EDIT: Oh and there should be a parralel virsion of all of us in there... accept me... there wont be a nother virsion of me.

[Threeshades]

Ok, here's my canon revision.

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Any problems?

(The change is now that just the fire gets sent into the void)

looks alrgiht to me. Welcome to the plot.

[Dr. Bath]

Pow! Random Killings!

Also: Seriously. Seriously. Seriously. Cut down on the text only/one or two line posts. We're a fifth of the way through a new thread. In a day. Come on! That's ridiculous!

Squark, I haven't been bothered with your comics mainly because I didn't read them, the text was bad or not in the comic and the art wasn't good enough to make up for your Godmodding and irritatingness. Before coming into this thread try and get your artistic levels to a reasonable standard. Start with easy things, not massive plot bending epics. This is not the best place to start out as an avatarist.

[BRC]

Rules of ABR (up for confirmation), some of which are based off the rules of improv
Rule 1: never act incautiously when confronted by a smiling old man with a broom
Rule 2: Don't talk about ABR
Rule 3: Commie can only make 3 joke rules.
Rule 4: Don't Deny, if somebody does somthing not breaking the other rules you can't just ignore that it happened.
Rule 5: Don't godmod others, It's okay to have somebody else say things, but don't have them make any big decisions.
Rule 6: NO SHOWBOATING! in Improv every member is trying to make the rest of the ensamble look good, not to try to make themselves look good. You can still do awsome things, but don't completally overshadow everybody else.
Rule 7: Build Up, if your going to change the plot in a major way, Don't do it all in one post, start it, making it clear what your trying to acheive, if other people want to stop it they can and we dont have to vote your post non-canon.
Rule 8: Nothing is canon if it is not in a comic, we don't know the backstory youve cooked up, don't post a comic, then when somebody stops it say "That wouldn't work because of XYZ" unless your previously stated XY and Z.
Rule 9: Don't finish lethal or incrediably dehabilitating attacks against other PC's, start them and give the other person a chance to react, its not "I cut your head off", its "I try to cut your head off", it's up to them whether or not you succeed.
Rule 10: accept weakness, we are not all superman, we are not all invincible, its no fun if nobody loses anything.
Rule 11: Get over yourself, there are other people in this plot to, so don't plan more then one post ahead and then get mad when people don't feel like going with what you want them to do, I don't care how awsome it seems.
Amendments can be allowed, rules can be changed according to votes, ect.
Their mostly just handy guidelines anyway.

[Nameless]

Can we add rule stating that all pickle jars should be respected as one of us?

[Threeshades]

Squark, I haven't been bothered with your comics mainly because I didn't read them, the text was bad or not in the comic and the art wasn't good enough to make up for your Godmodding and irritatingness. Before coming into this thread try and get your artistic levels to a reasonable standard. Start with easy things, not massive plot bending epics. This is not the best place to start out as an avatarist.

You know... That is actually true. Bath has a good point here.

However:

[BRC]

Can we add rule stating that all pickle jars should be respected as one of us?

I second the Pickle Jar Amendmant.

[Nameless]

You know... That is actually true. Bath has a good point here.

However:

You broke rule 9!!!

... once again, sorry, but I couldn't resist

Also:

I third the pickle jar thingy.

[BRC]

You broke rule 9!!!

... once again, sorry, but I couldn't resist

The rules are only for plot posts incase anybody thinks otherwise, Classic, pre-plot ABR is still allowed and no rules are needed for it.

[Dallas-Dakota]

There are two, nay, apparently twelve dimensions.

So, now that I have your attention, a few things.
The fire also happened in the second dimension only there were no good guys to stop the godmodding and the planet was set on fire.
Salmon is dead, he can be ressurected, I(dallas-dakota) am alive and kicked up the fortress´s floating engine, there are some others alive but wandering in the fortress unknown to me becouse I dont have full power of the fortress, only Salmon had it and can have it.

New comic up!

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Note, I spoiler all my comics, so that you dont have to scroll through extra space you have already read.

[Lyinginbedmon]

Well, I can amend this for the other rules, but I think it has the most important ones

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[FireDrake]

Woo, I posted a response before Bath:



Hmm? Hmm? Whatya say to that?

EDIT: Current Colour Poll Results:

Grey/Red - 3
Pink/Blue - 1
Green/Blue - 1
Same - 1

The Voting will now finish at 8pm GMT

[Squark]

Another less plot-breaking comic.

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Also, if someone has objections to my art, let me ask you a question. How good an artist where you when you had a whole... 2 days to practice? Any help would be appreciated, but ultimately, I just need time. sorry.


And yes, the first few stunk. No arguements there. Anyone who argues otherwise is (probably) related to me and a good deal older than me.


EDIT: Suggestion: Could Onasuma get the rules on the front page?

[Ne0]

Hey, Mal, did you respond already or not. I figure it's your turn right now. Meanwhile, I'm making a template for your character.

P.S: Sorry for the one-liner. I, too support less chit-chat, and more actual comics.

PPS: I was thinking about a small summary of the entire situation right now. I'm willing to do it myself, if nobody would mind PMing me the info of what and where their characters are. How does that sound?

Edit: I vote for Grey/Red!

[Dr. Bath]

Lunge!

Yellow and Yellow

[Almighty Salmon]

I vote for an even brighter shade of yellow and yellow. Just for the irony of it

[Nameless]

Aaaaaaannnnyway.... back to the plot...

[Nameless]

There are two dimensions.

So, now that I have your attention, a few things.
The fire also happened in the second dimension only there were no good guys to stop the godmodding and the planet was set on fire.
Salmon is dead, he can be ressurected, I(dallas-dakota) am alive and kicked up the fortress´s floating engine, there are some others alive but wandering in the fortress unknown to me becouse I dont have full power of the fortress, only Salmon had it and can have it.

New comic up!

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Note, I spoiler all my comics, so that you dont have to scroll through extra space you have already read.

Actually if you look back at ABR 3 or 4 can't remember, there are 12...