Constructive Criticism

[Pyro]

Yeah y'all, I just made my first avatar, but it doesn't look quite right. For one thing its alot smaller than everyone else's, but I'm sure I put it at 117 pixels. Yeah and feel free to rip it apart. I don't care.

EDIT: Here a larger one in case you need it.

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[Nameless]

That is awesome for a first try pyro, very good

Try making the hands a bit bigger, ( I say that to everyone )

[Pyro]

Okay so I made the hands bigger (thanks!), made the lines thicker, and brightened the color scheme. It still looks somewhat small in comparison to other peoples. I may enlarge the head next.

Edit: O yeah I just remembered. I change the file type from a png. to gif. to upload and there seem to be some weird specks of color. Anyone know how to fix that.

Edit 2: Turns out photobucket can load up .pgn files. Duh....

[Nameless]

It's looking much better, the sizes don't seem to bad though, I think it's fine.

[MrEdwardNigma]

This is actually really good for a first try. Well, it sure as hell is better than mine was...
I see a great future for you as an avatarist.

[Pyro]

I'm pretty happy with it, but it took the whole afternoon!