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    So, this is my new webcomic. Enjoy, updates once a week, I hope. The story changed a lot since the style thread I opened earlier this week.

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    It's set in a strange universe where 6 totalitaristic states control its seemingly 2-dimentional citizens. The nations are in a perpetual war with each other and use these "wire"networks to spy on the other nations and quickly transport the information to the capital of each state.

    Story: Heartbeat
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    Comic 8: Fire
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    Comic 9: Chase
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    Comic 10: The Same
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    Comic 11: Heartbeat
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    Comic 12: Justice
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    Comic 13: Map
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    Comic 14: Changes
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    Comic 15: Luck
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    Comic 16: Nothing
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    Comic 17: Guilty
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    The first one doesn't work

    Or is it just me again...
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    I'm seeing them alright Nameless. And I must say, I'm quite interested already

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    Oh there ir is :)

    Look's quite good

    Although I'm not understanding the endings...
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    The way they talk reminds me of the Transformers in that recent 3 hour movie and the things that made the monoliths from the 2001 series, but that doesn't matter. Cool comic.
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    I dont know what it is but I am strangely drawn towards it (guess the quote )
    nice comic...really inconsistent (it is a compliment btw)

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    Its hard to concentrate on the characters when they are all symmetrical rectangles.

    I miss the line art. =o
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    I'm confused but intrigued...I'll withold my judgement until I've seen more.
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    Quote Originally Posted by banjo1985 View Post
    I'm confused but intrigued...
    That was what I was going for.

    Comic three: Map
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    You'll need some pretty good dialogues to make up for the lack of facial expression...But I like it.

    ...Is that a map?
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    It looks like a screenshot from an old Atari console game...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ne0 View Post
    You'll need some pretty good dialogues to make up for the lack of facial expression...But I like it.

    ...Is that a map?
    Indeed, it is a map. A whole comic page of map. Indeed, it is confusing.

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    know we know what the orange zone is.
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    No offense but..I don't get it all. What is it, some rectangles talking?
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    It reminds me of flatland - which was... interesting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kagan View Post
    It reminds me of flatland - which was... interesting.
    I was influenced by both Flatland and 1984 when I first wrote this story, my story is set on an other dimension with 6 totalitaristic states controlling its seemingly 2-dimentional citizens. The nations are in a pepetual war with each other and these "wire" networks are used to spy on the other nations and quickly transport the information to the capital of each state.

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    3 comics in and you already have some fanart!


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    3 comics in and you already have some fanart!

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    Damn that is awesome yeril
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    Yeril, that is way more awesome than any of my comics yet.

    And I can tell you this, the name will link into the plot quite smoothly.

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    Wow. This comic looks quite impressive.
    I mean plotwise, off course. The art is not badly done, but it's still just blocks.
    But the plot? It intrigues me. Seems quite original too, and I have no idea how it will work yet (which is more than I can say for most webcomics).
    I'll be watching how this develops.
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    Comic number 4

    Comic Four: Nitric Acid
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    "Why did you send two?"
    "There are two wires"


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    New update...

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    think Green wants to say something in the lines of: "The world will be destroyed.Good thing no one will blame us..."

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    comic 5 is the best one yet

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    Another 2 updates!

    Comic Six: Flux
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    Comic Seven: Map
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    EDIT: I will also reveal the name of this story arc: Heartbeat
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    This is a bump and an update. I can see people are reading (or at least opening) this. Please comment....


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    Think you have a unique way to craft the plot...wonder which wire is wrong...
    think the second one, since killing all the orange zone would take some effort IMO...but I could be wrong.

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    Let's see, it would be more difficult to destroy the orange zone than for a mistake in intelligence to be made, so I'm going to go with Occam's razor and say that the orange zone survived.

    However, I'm certainly intrigued about what happens next!

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    I'm finding this brilliant so far.

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