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    Chaos Laws.
    The most irrational, political incorrect, insane and bloody oots-styled webcomic ITP.

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    Updates 2-3 times a week.
    Introduction might be a bit boring, but its needed to understand whats going later on. the story starts before the "heroes" (wow, thats a bad definition here.) are first shown, slightly before any of them is born actually.

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    Chapter one, Genesis

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    2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.

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    You may want to change from a yellow font on a white/gray background, it's really tricky to read

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    I love the Old english font too, but please use white...

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    I like the fact that the first chapter is called Genenis, this is done to often. Really cool and all.

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    This is looking pretty good

    But I would use blue for the font.
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    Note taken, will look for ways to make it clearer without ruining it. (it has to be yellow. maybe darker BG?)


    Quote Originally Posted by Cormag81 View Post
    2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.

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    Maybe a musterd colour?
    Dear Princess Celestia,


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    Maybe...I'll run tests until Tuesday. (the next page release. Its done by now, but I want to have a reserve in case I cant make some for a time for some reason.)


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    2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.

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    Oh look, Nobody's down there with the little mortals

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    Get used to see people like ABR people around, but they will always take a minor role.

    NEXT PAGE!



    Quote Originally Posted by Cormag81 View Post
    2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.

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    Revelations isn't very believable, yeah.
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    I know, You thought the "john" on the chapter logo was someone else?


    Quote Originally Posted by Cormag81 View Post
    2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.

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    Must...resist...urge...to go on...Christian rant...

    I've read Revelation about 12 times (no exaggeration). I know everything there is to know about it, and I really, really want to contest you about that comic.

    But I like this comic and don't want it locked.

    @V: Seriously, be careful about this. Too many religion jokes (especially talking about being an atheist, etc.) could get this thread locked.
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    Well, this IS parody, and I SAID its politically incorrect in many points.

    In any case, a part of the "religion jokes" is coming from me being an athiest, and the type that sees religion as a joke. (but being born as a jew I allowed myself a jew-jitsu joke back in ABR.)


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    2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.

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    Du-dudu...

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    I'm sorry, but you gotta change that font. I have no idea what the punch line is in the second page.

    "Okay, what the heck?"
    "You are ?____? now."
    "I signed nothing."
    And just so you know,

    Well, this IS parody, and I SAID its politically incorrect in many points.
    That don't matter to the mods if comments regarding religious topics get out of hand (as they often can in parodies)
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    Doubt that he will be taking advices, since this is a dead thread...

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    A shame really, he seemed pretty stoked about this.

    ...oh darn. Well I was reading through the index anyways...

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