Avatar Battle Royale Discussion (Part V)

[Tiffanie Lirle]

Hmm.. I'm practicing a manga style but I don't know which one to stick with.. what do the abr'ers think?

1- More of a super deformed, chibi esq. Close but not quite a chibi

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Or
2- or a ways more anatomically correct?

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I suck at drawing arms. >.<


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Did anyone miss me?

Maybe, kinda, sorta, perhaps'ish, could be.
yes

[Lyinginbedmon]

Hard to say, both are pretty neat

[JasonDoomsblade]

Hey thats really cool.

But I like the first chibi style more. Both of them are really good.
Although I sorta pictured myself having more hair.

[Ninja Chocobo]

Did anyone miss me?

I missed you.

But ABR characters do practically anything anyway. How is there a way not to resemble that?

Or do you mean it's gonna be more like ABR 1 and 2?

Eh. It'll be more like one of a few characters killing hordes of cultists or something.

[memnarch]

Q is promoted to writer. I also promoted Lying to moderator, so he should be able to promote people as well.

Did anyone miss me?

Well, I didn't exactly miss you, but I had wondered where you had wandered off too.

@Tiff

the second one looks kind of creepy, but that could just be the way the eyes are drawn and the floating eyebrow. Otherwise both look really good.

[Fawkes]

I missed you.


Eh. It'll be more like one of a few characters killing hordes of cultists or something.

Thank you, NC. You and Lying get cookies.

Also, that game sounds awesome. I love killing cultists!

[Lyinginbedmon]

Yay cookies! I'm starving...

[Tiffanie Lirle]

FFF:

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nice comic, butI don't understand this whole Q sub plot in the least, could anyone try to explain it to me please?

Also, 2 more done. But I'm not so happy with em, the first one I think it's too plain/bland and the 2nd pic looks too girlish..

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Edit V- Ooohhh.. I get it now.. I think.. maybe.. *shrugs* Thanks.

[Calamity]

nice comic, butI don't understand this whole Q sub plot in the least, could anyone try to explain it to me please?

Well bascially, Q wants to help this all-powerful, overly-green Doom guy (who happens to be some kind of green sphere) destroy the world. But he needs to capture 4 particular characters because they are immune to his world-destroying weapon.

[Lyinginbedmon]

So essentially he wants us gone because we'll give Galactus a bad stomach ache?

[Tiffanie Lirle]

So.. if he wants to capture them because they're immune to said weapon.. why doesn't he just destroy the world anyways? I mean so what if the 4 of them survive, you've just destroyed a whole planet.. mission accomplished right?

[Lyinginbedmon]

I think my "Galactus indigestion" idea there probably says why, he uses the petrified planet and it's inhabitants for sustenance after all.

[memnarch]

Also because you could either stop it somehow or get him back for it later maybe?

[Szilard]

Wait, it just stoneifys the planet right? There's still Fort Longcat...

[Calamity]

Heh, I was just thinkg how the Q's gun looks like something out of Ratchet and Clank.

The all new Petrifier-3000, the latest technology in turning your enemies into lovely back-garden features! From ABRitron.
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[JasonDoomsblade]

The all new Petrifier-3000, the latest technology in turning your enemies into lovely back-garden features! From ABRitron.
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That is...actually a really good idea. I can picture a gun like that in Ratchet and Clank.

[Keris]

I'm not on for a week and the part of the plot I'm in hasn't moved at all?
That does it, I'm going to outer space.

[Tiffanie Lirle]

I'm not on for a week and the part of the plot I'm in hasn't moved at all?
That does it, I'm going to outer space.

Yeah, kinda boring. I think everyones waiting for Fayt to make a comic showing where exactly he was actually going to take you.. Is he even still around?

[Green-Shirt Q]

Basically the "end of the world" subplot is that Vert Doom (the green glow is what hides his true identidy, that is not what he actually looks like) wishes to destory all planets because this gives him power (you are not supposed to know what that is supposed to mean). He cannot do this however since four are immune to the weapon. This is really bad since Vert Doom needs to rest after fireing his weapon, so he would basically be a sitting duck while the four are still arouind to kill him. That is why he needs to blackmail me, my green-shirted compadre, and the King of Parades to bring them to Vert Doom so that he can see that they are destoryed before his weapon goes off.

Also, glad to see you are on board with the great mission Calamity, but you don't have to be if you don't want to be.

Also Calamity, this wasn't made clear, so I understand your confusion, but Jasmina and the rest are currently outside. The grey is overcast. So it is impossible to make a burn mark on a non-existing ceiling.

And, those are really great pics, Tiffanie Lirle.

And the dark cannon (the gun I have) is actually from Super Smash Bros. Brawl.

And one more thing. Keris Rain, getting bored with the same old plot? Getting tired with the plot not moving forward?
Well, there are two solutions:
Join King Bortak's army and fight Vert Doom!
OR
Join Vert Doom's army and fight King Bortak!

[_Puppetmaster_]

Basically the "end of the world" subplot is that Vert Doom (the green glow is what hides his true identidy, that is not what he actually looks like) wishes to destory all planets because this gives him power (you are not supposed to know what that is supposed to mean). He cannot do this however since four are immune to the weapon. This is really bad since Vert Doom needs to rest after fireing his weapon, so he would basically be a sitting duck while the four are still arouind to kill him. That is why he needs to blackmail me, my green-shirted compadre, and the King of Parades to bring them to Vert Doom so that he can see that they are destoryed before his weapon goes off.

Also, glad to see you are on board with the great mission Calamity, but you don't have to be if you don't want to be.

Also Calamity, this wasn't made clear, so I understand your confusion, but Jasmina and the rest are currently outside. The grey is overcast. So it is impossible to make a burn mark on a non-existing ceiling.

And, those are really great pics, Tiffanie Lirle.

And the dark cannon (the gun I have) is actually from Super Smash Bros. Brawl.

And one more thing. Keris Rain, getting bored with the same old plot? Getting tired with the plot not moving forward?
Well, there are two solutions:
Join King Bortak's army and fight Vert Doom!
OR
Join Vert Doom's army and fight King Bortak!

Can I join King Bortak?

[Green-Shirt Q]

Can I join King Bortak?

Dude, of course! King Bortak always excepts new recruits to his army!

[Lyinginbedmon]

Let's all not forget the traditional storyline of finding all of the keys to the Talisman of the Dragon King before the other team.

[_Puppetmaster_]

Dude, of course! King Bortak always excepts new recruits to his army!

Yay! *Uploads comic*

[Tiffanie Lirle]

Speaking of the original storyline, whats gonna happen with Leroy since salmon has officially left the playground? Threeshades is gone to isn't she? Also, where are the keys atm? I know I have the blue one, but I have no clue about the others.

[_Puppetmaster_]

Speaking of the original storyline, whats gonna happen with Leroy since salmon has officially left the playground? Threeshades is gone to isn't she? Also, where are the keys atm? I know I have the blue one, but I have no clue about the others.

I believe Yeril has the orange one.

[Green-Shirt Q]

You know, I was thinking, maybe my sub-plot is too big to be only a subplot.

Is it? Should my subplot be more then just a subplot and maybe become a whole new plot al together?

Anyway, my newest comic is up.

[Lavidor]

You know, I was thinking, maybe my sub-plot is too big to be only a subplot.

Is it? Should my subplot be more then just a subplot and maybe become a whole new plot al together?

Anyway, my newest comic is up.

No. If you do that, regular 3f will die.
Also, I've been thinking: Since Salmon left the playground, and Threeshades hasn't been on ABR in a while, and they're integral to the plot, maybe their characters should be taken on by someone in addition to their regular characters?

[Tiffanie Lirle]

You know, I was thinking, maybe my sub-plot is too big to be only a subplot.

No. If you do that, regular 3f will die.

As much as I hate to say it I think Lavi has a point there, The original 3f only seems to be running on the old abr'ers, the ones that have been here for ages. Lying, Mecha etc. The world seems to have gotten too complex for the small amount of people involved in 3f nowadays. I mean theres are what.. like 7-10 people that actively post in Abr anymore? But perhaps you could find a way to mix your subplot into the main storyline Q?

Also the loss of Salmon and Shades was quite the blow to Abr seeing as they were pretty much the "main characters" gotta figure out how we're gonna get around that.

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[JasonDoomsblade]

As much as I hate to say it I think Lavi has a point there, The original 3f only seems to be running on the old abr'ers, the ones that have been here for ages. Lying, Mecha etc. The world seems to have gotten too complex for the small amount of people involved in 3f nowadays. I mean theres are what.. like 7-10 people that actively post in Abr anymore? But perhaps you could find a way to mix your subplot into the main storyline Q?

Also the loss of Salmon and Shades was quite the blow to Abr seeing as they were pretty much the "main characters" gotta figure out how we're gonna get around that.

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Heh. Nice.

Also, I can see Q's subplot thingamabob becoming a main plot. FFF does seems to be slowly dying off; and considering Salmon and 3Shades arn't really here anymore, FFF will soon be as extinct as say....the dinosaurs. No I'm not exaggerating.
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Just a heads up for everyone: My comp has gone screwy on me again. (It didn't blow up again but the monitor keeps flicking on and off) so I have to use the school computers and my PSP.....again. Bah, I'm so fed up with Windows. I'm going to buy a Mac after school.

[Lyinginbedmon]

We could combine the two. Since both the leaders of the teams are gone, they work to find the Talisman to stop Vert. One to use it to force the dragons to help, the other to find them to ally with them for help.