Slice N' Dice (A non-OOTS-Style Comic!)

[Nameless]

The detail is very well well done, and the backgrounds look pretty good too.

The only thing I can suggest to improve, is the movement, though I know how hard this can be useing a mouse.

[Wreckingrocc]

Comic 6 is up! This one only took about 2 hours to make but it also has fewer jokes/puns in it.

Comic 1-6: Unexpected Aid

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[Lyinginbedmon]

Yes, let's suggest going to sleep immediately prior to mentioning that carnivorous animals prowl the area...

[Wreckingrocc]

Good idea.

(The ranger knows how to scent areas around the camp and hide the camp, so they'll be safe. It'll explain it better in the next comic involving Grogg and Avir.)

Or should I change the comic?

[Bayar]

It is actually better to have a story than to break the wall. Nice comic !

[Wreckingrocc]

Wow. Three in a week.

Again, this one took like 2 hours to make.

Comic #1, Page 7: The Random Encounter

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[Shadowcaller]

"It certainly is roomy in here" hope thats not his last words.
Great comic by the way.

[Wreckingrocc]

Ten bonus points for whoever can guess what it is up there (It's pretty obvious, but...)

EDIT: OK, so maybe it's not so obvious.

[Szilard]

bats? Darkmantles?

[Bayar]

The dwarf's face looks odd.

[Wreckingrocc]

Szilard: Look very close and at different angles and you might see it.

bayar: What Dwarf?

[Dallas-Dakota]

I thought that was dirt on my screen

I think he means the gnome/halfling/wizardy guy.

[Lyinginbedmon]

I see tentacles, sectioned eyes, and a bulbous main body/head, so I'm going to say whatever is up there is likely physically reminiscent of octopods.

[Wreckingrocc]

Kafizzle is a gnome. Why do you think he looks old?

Livinginbedmon, you were close.

Anyway, the answer lies in the next comic, which I am now posting.

Comic #1, Page 8: Lunch Time

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[Lyinginbedmon]

...I'm arachnophobic

[Szilard]

^Just another fact to add to the interesting facts about random people on the internet list.

Anyway, that spider is awesome!

[Catharsis]

Three little things--

1) Nice spider indeed.
2) The spell (ray of enfeeblement?) could use a bit more contrast. In the first reading, I didn't see it at all and thought that nothing happened in that panel.
3) What does indeaded mean?

[Dallas-Dakota]

...I'm arachnophobic

Really?

[Szilard]

indeaded- v. to have made indead.
indead- n. opposite of undead.
undead- n. a being previously dead brought back through evil means.
So indeaded is basically that they killed the spider.

[Wreckingrocc]

Yeah, I updated #8. Thanks for the criticism. It really helped

I kinda cheated on the spider though. I used 'Google Image Search', copy+paste, then traced.

I made the spell (supposed to be magic missile) look more contasting and I aimed it at the spider's head instead.

Indeaded was supposed to be a made up way to say 'Killed', but, Szilard, did you assume that or is it a real term?

Thanks for the Spider compliments, too. I did the eyes/hair myself

[Szilard]

No, I made that up, I assumed indeaded was the opposite of undeaded.

[Wreckingrocc]

Sorry to the fans (Do I really have any fans?), but comic #9 will be delayed due to large amounts of things to do. The next one should be up Saturday, and for all those people who for some reason like knowing what to expect,(Not what material is in it, just what it's about):

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the next comic will be about looting the spider. Yes. It has loot. Look it up in the Monster manual.

But between now and then, feel free to debate anything about the comic (or anything not about the comic if it means keeping this thread up there on the Arts & Crafts Forum for the sake of extra views/fans ).

[Lowin]

Nice drawings. You should have someone that is like the oppisit of Grog like a smart annoying fey spellcaster or something (i think you know what i mean). oh and instead of smashing things he could like i donet know hmmmmmmmm oh shot fireballs at some unexspecting people.

[Devigod]

J, your first post? You spelled opposite wrong.

Keep up the good work, Drowzy

[Wreckingrocc]

Well, it's four days late, but it's up nonetheless. My next one probroably won't be 'till Sunday. All based on my homework load

Comic 1-9: Looting the Beast

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[Lyinginbedmon]

It's the world's deadliest pinata!

[Lowin]

Awsome the last line is great.

[ImpFireball]

Like others said about my comic, this comic isn't funny. At all.

I mean really, it's less funny than mine in my opinion. At least I tried.

[Nameless]

Do you just go up to random comics and say you don't like them for the simple reason that they didn't like yours...?

[XenoTherapy]

@^^ Watch it, Nameless is calling you out. *Cowers in fear of Nameless's wrath.*

Anyway, great comic. ^___^ Breaking the fourth wall by not breaking the fourth wall. Genuis!