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    Default Re: The Two Brothers: A non-OotS style webcomic

    Naw, that was an add on.
    and I was talking about something else with the paranoia, but I'll think about making one.
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    I will revive this thread!

    I have an Idea for the guest strip, I'll try to finish it today.
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    Default Re: The Two Brothers: A non-OotS style webcomic

    Hey, I've just read through the archive and I can only say: Awesome. great work, Beholder.

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    Well I'm a huge fan of knights, and I like most of what you've done, but I do have a few complaints.

    the first are your speech bubbles, or rather, lack thereof. in some scenes it makes it difficult to tell who said what, and in others it looks like background scenery, such as your t-shaped stars, (I've drawn stars like that too... they really shiny ones do indeed seem to take a t-ish shape) are part of the text.

    the second is that in some scenes you're a little too simplistic, and it's hard to distinguish certain objects. shading the night sky would also be helpful.

    third is a problem real knights shared on the battlefield: it's hard to distinguish one character from another while in full plate. Real knights used family or personal emblems, but the Teutonic knights, to my knowledge, did not, which I assume is why you did not implicate any such means of identification. however, since the comic doesn't take place on earth, I think it would be acceptable to give each knight a different pattern on his or her surcoat so we can tell them apart while they have their helms on.

    fix those, and It'll be awesome.
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    Default Re: The Two Brothers: A non-OotS style webcomic

    You forgot 4th: There's no comics.

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    Default Re: The Two Brothers: A non-OotS style webcomic

    Eh, can't you see them on the front page gremlin?
    If you want a OotS style Touhou avatar, send me a request.

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    He means no New comics, as Beholder has stopped updating.
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    Default Re: The Two Brothers: A non-OotS style webcomic

    Quote Originally Posted by Nevitan View Post
    He means no New comics, as Beholder has stopped updating.
    And he hasn't been online for almost three weeks.

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