Dragon: an OotS-Style Webcomic

[Doopliss]

Y'know, if you take "plot" as "plan", it's still not necessarily breaking the fourth wall.

[Phase]

Okay! Next!

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[Green-Shirt Q]

I think you forgot the little points to connect the speech with the people.

[memnarch]

Eh, I still understood it.

[Phase]

Oops! One moment!

EDIT: That's better! Sorry about that.

[TheCountAlucard]

Getting to borrow someone else's computer briefly, I decided to view your comic... QUITE AWESOME. Now gimme a dollar.

[Lyinginbedmon]

He's a dragon, the innkeeper's lucky he doesn't breathe fire.

[Phase]

Getting to borrow someone else's computer briefly, I decided to view your comic... QUITE AWESOME. Now gimme a dollar.

*Gives a dollar*

Glad you could finally make it!

[sheepofoblivion]

You re-use panels a lot, and however many milliseconds it saves, it seems like you didn't put in as much work. Even a different expression on 2 or 3 characters will change it.

I'm not saying it's easy, and I have tried making a webcomic, and I know it's near impossible to make one as good as this, but just take a few extra seconds to turn the smile on someone's face into a

[Phase]

You re-use panels a lot, and however many milliseconds it saves, it seems like you didn't put in as much work. Even a different expression on 2 or 3 characters will change it.

I'm not saying it's easy, and I have tried making a webcomic, and I know it's near impossible to make one as good as this, but just take a few extra seconds to turn the smile on someone's face into a

You'll be really annoyed at the next comic, then!

[Lyinginbedmon]

I've suffered lazy artist syndrome before, and it annoyed the heck out of me that I looked really lazy doing it. I've since done my best to avoid it, though long conversations in the same location are still largely my specialty.

[Wreckingrocc]

Mine only has 8 panels/page. I can pretty much fill a page completely with text if I want to. I'm basically immune to that problem :)

Keep us the good work, Phase. This is gunning for 3rd favorite comic on the forums IMO!

[Phase]

Okay. Two things. One, I've run out of my buffer of comics. No big deal, if I have a comic worked out in my head, the art should take about an hour. The real problem is that school will be starting up again. At the beginning of the school year, I plan on shifting the schedule from Wed/Sat to just Wed. I doubt this move will be permanent, but I need to establish my own education before this leisure activity.

That being said...

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[Uncle Festy]

Nice.
Needs more rule of threes, though.

[Dallas-Dakota]

Heheh, damn you evolution.

[Oregano]

Nice, I'm not concerned with the schedule, I have to catch up on the comic anyhow and I wholeheartedly agree that your education is more important.

[nhbdy]

I just found your comic, and it looks great

PS

NOT DRAMATIC IRONY NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Zeebiedeebie]

I love this comic.

[Phase]

I love this comic.

And that worries you?
Did I accidentaly make a comic you're allergic to?

[Phase]

Sorry if things are going slowly. That's what a change in schedule does.

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[memnarch]

*has no idea why he found that funny*

[sheepofoblivion]

*has no idea why he found that funny*

my thoughts exactly

(btw phase, you didn't change the avi! see?!)

[Uncle Festy]

*laughs*
Ah, that's great.

[B-Jay]

OMG!! why do i see this for the first time! made my nightshift a bit more bareable!! Good commic!

[Phase]

I try to make the world a more bearable place!

[Uncle Festy]

Don't you mean more bearable?
*is run out of the thread by angry mob*

[TheCountAlucard]

Still doing a nice jeargb, Phase.

[banjo1985]

Custard the Cat approves of this latest strip. It tickles his funnies.

[The Gremlin]

I've been reading this comic for quite some time, I have it in my sig, but this comic is incredible. Please continue featuring the two kobolds!

[T-O-E]

Don't you mean more bearable?
*is run out of the thread by angry mob*

You, however, make the world a LESS bearable place.

By that, I mean you kill bears... for fun. And then eat them.