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2008-09-16, 01:41 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
I like the comic so far. The interviews are nice.
However, I agree with the sentiment that you should not lean on Copypaste for the comic. I suggest trying a to draw a few poses for the characters, starting with a neutral "talking" pose for the interviews. Also, try some expressions, like the eyebrows for being confused, and stuff like that. Trust me, it should be fairly easy, since you have everyone's avatars as reference, and once you get some poses made it should be easy to make tweaks to those for every occasion, like gesturing with their arms as they talk, and changing their facial expressions depending on what they're saying. Just make them move a little bit between panels. Trust me, people will love you for it.
Oh, and one little pet peeve I have with speech bubbles. My reaction to any comic panel is to read the speech bubbles from top left to bottom right. Try and arrange the speech bubbles such that the conversation "flows" in that direction. It's confusing to have all of one character's lines up top, and the other's down below, when the character up top has one line, then the bottom character, then the top one again. It'll work better to, say, have the "first" bubble up top, the "next" one a bit below or to the right of it, and so on.
Just a bit of constructive criticism. You're on your way though, I probably couldn't even do as much as you are.Last edited by Enlong; 2008-09-16 at 01:42 PM.
Awesome Avatar by Shattersnap.
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Many thanks to El Goonish Shive for the banner image.
Give a player a fish, and he’ll probably try to sell it to an NPC fisherman.
Teach a player to fish, and next week he’ll show up with the book, “The Complete Adventuring Fisherman”. He’ll start hunting for some monstrous leviathan to catch and enslave, and he’ll be dual-wielding two fishing poles.
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2008-09-16, 02:50 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
You know if this becomes a party type of situation its going to be like a small army storiming the dungeoun, and with my cheese, and I'll go ahead, and assume I'm nto the only broken one here. I think a encounter 5 lvls above us wouldn't even stand a chance.
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2008-09-16, 05:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
It wont all be interviews for the party (there will only be a couple more) and ill introduse the others through the comic
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2008-09-16, 05:43 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-16, 06:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Sep 2007
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Sounds interesting, and the current comics look promising.
Feel free to use me
Oh, and you can draw me as just a unseeable speck. Atom sized, in other words.
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2008-09-16, 10:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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2008-09-16, 11:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Nov 2006
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- In deNile
Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Heh. I could be a minion if I don't fit in on the "heroic" party or the other one.
By the way, Elrond, what did you think of my suggestions? Too much?Last edited by Enlong; 2008-09-16 at 11:17 PM.
Awesome Avatar by Shattersnap.
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Many thanks to El Goonish Shive for the banner image.
Give a player a fish, and he’ll probably try to sell it to an NPC fisherman.
Teach a player to fish, and next week he’ll show up with the book, “The Complete Adventuring Fisherman”. He’ll start hunting for some monstrous leviathan to catch and enslave, and he’ll be dual-wielding two fishing poles.
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2008-09-16, 11:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Suggestions are good also yeah you'd make a good minion and probably wont make the heroic team (sorry)
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2008-09-16, 11:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Meh. I'm a Kobold wizard with a bathrobe and an odd obsession with rubber duckies. I didn't really think I'd make it onto the "good guy" team.
Hey... that reminds me. Wasn't there some kind of line of Bigby spells outside of the Hands? I remember something like most excellent force sculpture ore something like that, but I just can't remember.Last edited by Enlong; 2008-09-16 at 11:32 PM.
Awesome Avatar by Shattersnap.
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Many thanks to El Goonish Shive for the banner image.
Give a player a fish, and he’ll probably try to sell it to an NPC fisherman.
Teach a player to fish, and next week he’ll show up with the book, “The Complete Adventuring Fisherman”. He’ll start hunting for some monstrous leviathan to catch and enslave, and he’ll be dual-wielding two fishing poles.
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2008-09-16, 11:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Huh???
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2008-09-16, 11:40 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
I'm in (as previously mentioned), wherever I can be!
For the last time, it stands for Shadow of Darkness!
Thankin' Nevitan fer me babytar!
Kasaad Shadowweb-Chitine Paladin of Freedom (now a clickable link!).
Genderbender week comin' up! SoDess by Bisected8 *applause*
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2008-09-16, 11:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Last edited by Enlong; 2008-09-16 at 11:48 PM.
Awesome Avatar by Shattersnap.
Spoiler
Many thanks to El Goonish Shive for the banner image.
Give a player a fish, and he’ll probably try to sell it to an NPC fisherman.
Teach a player to fish, and next week he’ll show up with the book, “The Complete Adventuring Fisherman”. He’ll start hunting for some monstrous leviathan to catch and enslave, and he’ll be dual-wielding two fishing poles.
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2008-09-17, 05:05 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Oh i dont have PHB2
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2008-09-17, 05:07 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Sorry for the double post but i remind all of you to specify which pic you want me to use to rebresent you in the comic
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2008-09-17, 05:09 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
I do eblieve this one functions well.
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2008-09-17, 05:18 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Ok good thanks
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2008-09-17, 06:07 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Sheridan<( '-' )>College
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
This one should do nicely.
But if that's too much detail you can just use this one instead.
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2008-09-17, 09:11 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
What I'm using as my avatar is fine, just base your stuff off of that.
Awesome Avatar by Shattersnap.
Spoiler
Many thanks to El Goonish Shive for the banner image.
Give a player a fish, and he’ll probably try to sell it to an NPC fisherman.
Teach a player to fish, and next week he’ll show up with the book, “The Complete Adventuring Fisherman”. He’ll start hunting for some monstrous leviathan to catch and enslave, and he’ll be dual-wielding two fishing poles.
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2008-09-17, 09:17 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jun 2006
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- Poland
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Sounds interesting. You can put me in there if you feel like it, in whatever role, represented by my avatar(that's a goblin sapper from my homebrewed setting).
My FFRP characters. Avatar by Ashen Lilies. Sigatars by Ashen Lilies, Gullara and Purple Eagle.
Interested in the Nexus FFRP setting? See our Discord server.
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2008-09-17, 09:20 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jan 2008
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- Hiding in the shadows
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Since you asked which image, here's mine.
Avatar by Emperor Ing
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2008-09-17, 09:23 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-17, 09:33 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Hyrule
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
This should do. ^^Dante, Virgil, and Nero, and banenr by KidKris.
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2008-09-17, 10:57 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Your nightmares.
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2008-09-17, 01:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Just use the one you already used for me; i.e., this guy...
It is inevitable, of course, that persons of epicurean refinement will in the course of eternity engage in dealings with those of... unsavory character. Record well any transactions made, and repay all favors promptly.. (Thanks to Gnomish Wanderer for the Toreador avatar! )
Wanna see what all this Exalted stuff is about? Here's a primer!
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2008-09-17, 02:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Nov 2007
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- Canada, okay?! Yeeesh.
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
I believe I have already given the image of what I wish to look like in a PM, but I do not suggest a copy-paste of it (if "copy-paste" can truly be used as a verb).
If you are planning to copy and paste, I can supply a modern image I have personally drawn, but if you are planning to actually draw it yourself, the images I have given you will do just fine.AVATAR BATTLE ROYALE!
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2008-09-17, 10:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Oky docky
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2008-09-17, 11:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
An image? Sure. The quintessential Fullbladder, by Kalirush.
The above post sponsored by Fullbladder Manufacturing.
And so begins the Age of Extinction! The Year of the Dinosaurs! And the Reign of the Predacons!
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2008-09-18, 04:16 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Last edited by Elrond; 2008-09-19 at 09:45 PM.
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2008-09-19, 09:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Sorry for the double post buy Uhh lake of posting is worrying me
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2008-09-19, 09:51 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Hiding in the shadows
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