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2008-09-19, 10:11 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
'Lack of posting' methinks. We can't rightly post until we have things to praise/snark/suggest/converse about.
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And so begins the Age of Extinction! The Year of the Dinosaurs! And the Reign of the Predacons!
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2008-09-19, 10:37 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
I really dont know i just but it in
Oh ok ill have one up soon staring RandomizerLast edited by Elrond; 2008-09-19 at 10:40 PM.
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2008-09-20, 01:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Sorry about the double post yet again but i have finished another ITP and it is up now comments please
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2008-09-20, 03:24 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
LOL, "My head is made of jelly"
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2008-09-20, 03:54 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Next comic is up enjoy
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2008-09-20, 06:20 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Just a few minor nitpicks.
1. I hope you won't take this to harshly, but grammar is very important in these kinds of comics, and would you PLEASE cpitalise the beginings of your sentences.
2: The Chainsaws on Rand's arms are by far to short to be effective; perhaps you could change it to make them longer in a later comic?
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2008-09-20, 07:22 AM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2007
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Ooh, comic. I will be reading this.
*requests to appear in the comic.*SpoilerAvvies by Z-Axis, now bearer of 3 divine rank.
So you may have heard of Lord Herman. Well, he's pretty awesome.
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2008-09-20, 07:55 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Who wants to be mah bus buddie!?!
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2008-09-20, 07:58 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 08:01 AM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2007
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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Don't mess with a Primarch
Sometimes I make avatars too. Shoot me a PM if interested.
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2008-09-20, 08:06 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 11:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Hey! They move! Sweet.
Nice coupla comics, Elrond. One minor nitpick on the last one: When I read the first panel, I tried to read left-to-right and ended up reading the word balloons in revers order 'cause of it. Do you think you could arrange future word balloons in top-to-bottom/left-to-right order?
Otherwise, the comics are coming along nicely, and I'm real glad you decided to draw the characters; they just look better now. I do agree with FF fanboy though, in that you do need to properly capitalize and punctuate your sentences, a little grammar, goes a long way.
Keep truckin' Elrond, you're doin' fine.Awesome Avatar by Shattersnap.
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Give a player a fish, and he’ll probably try to sell it to an NPC fisherman.
Teach a player to fish, and next week he’ll show up with the book, “The Complete Adventuring Fisherman”. He’ll start hunting for some monstrous leviathan to catch and enslave, and he’ll be dual-wielding two fishing poles.
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2008-09-20, 11:34 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Indeed it is nice to have some captilization, capital I's were the biggest problem as far as I could see.
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2008-09-20, 01:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
The way Rand says "As you wish" in the last panel...reminds me of the WoW voidwalker .
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2008-09-20, 02:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Looking intermanestin.
Any room for another character? Doesn't look like it, but... Well, asking never hurt, right?
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2008-09-20, 03:29 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
@Eldrond
you should work on your speechballoon placing. People usually start reading on the left, so the first thingsaid in a panel should be above and/or left of all the other speechbubbles. then go from left to right and then add lines underneath.
You can put the first bubble on the right and the second on the left, but then you should put the first one very clearly above the second.
I really recommend you to do that, because so far I've been reading the speech in the wrong order in almost every panel.Last edited by Threeshades; 2008-09-20 at 03:29 PM.
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2008-09-20, 03:59 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
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2008-09-20, 04:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 04:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 04:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 04:08 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Dark Souls Remake in a Nutshell
Don't mess with a Primarch
Sometimes I make avatars too. Shoot me a PM if interested.
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2008-09-20, 04:09 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 04:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 04:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 04:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 04:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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2008-09-20, 05:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
I have a feeling the bus isn't going to be going anywhere At least, I doubt it'll be going anywhere safely.
Note my avatar.The artist formerly known as Tired N' Drowzy, master of puns.
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2008-09-20, 09:51 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Ive been trying to get the speech bubbles in the right order and ill work on my grammar.
Also next comic is up (it long). Enjoy
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2008-09-20, 09:57 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
Threeshades' advice includes responses to other text boxes. "Fine" should have been placed after "I don't care..." If it helps you can extend the lines connecting the two boxes of "No-one else here" and "Fine" and the place the object underneath that of "I don't care..." so it overlaps. That's fairly standard practise.
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2008-09-20, 10:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic
I like how 'kill celestial creature' is a spell AND how he knows it.
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