In the Playground (ITP) OOTS style webcomic

[Elrond]

Threeshades' advice includes responses to other text boxes. "Fine" should have been placed after "I don't care..." If it helps you can extend the lines connecting the two boxes of "No-one else here" and "Fine" and the place the object underneath that of "I don't care..." so it overlaps. That's fairly standard practise.

Ill take this into account for next time

[SoD]

Looking good, can't wait to see the next few updates! Also volenteering for an appearance (I know it's about the third time, but my name isn't on the first post, and others have been added...).

Here's my standard avatar, if it helps:



Rogue/Sorcerer (or was last time).

[Ghastly Epigram]

As others have said, try and make sure the speech bubbles are in the correct order so they are read properly, and the grammar could use a little work.

But overall, good stuff! Definitely interested to see where this goes.

[Dallas-Dakota]

*wonders when he'l come into the comic*
Ps, you can feature me as a barbarian who's pretty silent and devoted to Cookiemanjaro. But still the cookiemonster.

[ThePhantom]

When are the villians going to show up?

[The Tygre]

Rakshasa mage, humbly at your service.

[Elrond]

When are the villians going to show up?

Soon soon i just gotta finish up some stuff with the Heros then they will be in

And SoD ive made up your character and he will be in soon
dokkata be pashient ill but you in as soon as i can fit you in

[Trizap]

if you ever need a mad scientist position as either a villain or whatever tech kind or science kind of purpose done, don't hesitate to use my avatar, no wait don't hesitate to use a better drawn version of my avatar, my avatar looks horrible.

[D_Lord]

Odd villainest cut aways that don't make sense is what I do alot. 5 plans a day, and can't get around to using all of them.

[Enlong]

Yeah, it's me again. I'm liking the direction that the comic is moving in ("slay Celestial Creature" heheh.) and as always, I have one minor nitpick. When that red-coat-guy shot at the archon, there wasn't really any effect other then the sound effect to show that he had fired. Perhaps in the future you can show a bit of muzzle flash to show that he's fired. Oh, and it's spelled "earlier" Otherwise, you're improving. I like how the characters are making subtle movements, like Nameless pointing his other arm to cast, or your character standing on tiptoes to talk to the celestial.

[TheCountAlucard]

that red-coat-guy

...Err, Alucard? Does no one watch Hellsing?

[Nameless]

Dun Dun Dunnnn!!!

[Elrond]

Yeah, it's me again. I'm liking the direction that the comic is moving in ("slay Celestial Creature" heheh.) and as always, I have one minor nitpick. When that red-coat-guy shot at the archon, there wasn't really any effect other then the sound effect to show that he had fired. Perhaps in the future you can show a bit of muzzle flash to show that he's fired. Oh, and it's spelled "earlier" Otherwise, you're improving. I like how the characters are making subtle movements, like Nameless pointing his other arm to cast, or your character standing on tiptoes to talk to the celestial.

Ok thanks for the nit-pickin

[Dallas-Dakota]

dokkata be pashient ill but you in as soon as i can fit you in

*wonders who this Dokkata guy is*
And I'm kinda impatient sometimes...

[BisectedBrioche]

There's soem good advice on text bubbles here BTW;

http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/

[Enlong]

Yeah, I know Alucard*. I was just being paradoxially lazy enough to not say the name but say the concept instead.

*From Dr. McNinja though, not Hellsing.

[Elrond]

There's soem good advice on text bubbles here BTW;

http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/

Thanks but i cant see it

[Bayar]

Yeah, I know Alucard*. I was just being paradoxially lazy enough to not say the name but say the concept instead.

*From Dr. McNinja though, not Hellsing.

Even though I havent seen it (yet, it will run on Animax soon ), he is easily recognised:

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I love those glasses.

[BisectedBrioche]

Thanks but i cant see it

It works for me.

[Elrond]

Oh ok

[Elrond]

New comic is up enjoy

[Gourtox]

I liked the the summon stool for midgets thing.
When's the next comic?

[Elrond]

should be up soon it will be introducing some of the other characters

[Fan]

should be up soon it will be introducing some of the other characters

Pssh, don't rush yourself. Yoyu have to put times intos these things, and wer cant rush quality.... especially me seeign as i have the art skills of a monkey with no fingers.

[Wreckingrocc]

Pssh, don't rush yourself. Yoyu have to put times intos these things, and wer cant rush quality.... especially me seeign as i have the art skills of a monkey with no fingers.

Psshaw. Fingers are overrated. A nose, a face, and patience are all you need. Lots and lots of patience.

[Fan]

Psshaw. Fingers are overrated. A nose, a face, and patience are all you need. Lots and lots of patience.

You have a point just look at the guy who does Anti heroes..... I personally am, still waiting for my inevitable apperance, but it is still a awesome comic written by a GOAT.

[Dallas-Dakota]

Noses are overrated.

[Elrond]

The next ITP is up (its a long one) also how are my speech bubbles going?

[Bayar]

The next ITP is up (its a long one) also how are my speech bubbles going?

Not that great, it is really cumbersome to read...

[Wreckingrocc]

That was only one character though....