The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)

[Lyinginbedmon]

I don't think you have to make a backstory.

Not really no, but it's something fun to do during the low points.

[Green-Shirt Q]

Not really no, but it's something fun to do during the low points.

It certainly is, but you don't have to do it. He made it sound like had to do it.

[Beholder1995]

*reads last page*

Ooh... this is very nice. I will definitely try and sort of maybe follow this partially.

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[chriky]

I'm sorry but we've had tons of homework and haven't ben able to make a new comic . Hopefully comic 6 will be up saturday or sunday.
But while your waiting her'es Firedrake III and his adventuring buddies Randor and John.

[FireDrake]

Ooh and look, mysterious concept art:

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Sorry, the quality's a bit crap, I did it in my school note book.

[Lyinginbedmon]

Ooh and look, mysterious concept art:

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Sorry, the quality's a bit crap, I did it in my school note book.

Hmm...is that a royal dragon? I assume so given the purple colouring, though it could be a very off blue...

[FireDrake]

Hmm...is that a royal dragon? I assume so given the purple colouring, though it could be a very off blue...

Yeah that is a royal dragon, or at least an impure descendant of one. Come to think of it, I really ought to get Lavidor's permission before I go developing his storyline.

[Lavidor]

Huh? Did someone say my name?

PM me with the broad details and you'll probably get it.

[FireDrake]

The next comic should be up some time tomorrow. (Monday) But we're on our half-term holiday, so we might have another one later this week.

[FireDrake]

Comic #6 is up:

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Thanks to Threeshades for the image of her as a drow.

Also, here's an unleashed banner of FireDrake:

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[Szilard]

Shiney...
Good comic, keep it up.

[The Gremlin]

Good comic, guys.

[master ranger]

Nice backstory you two.

[chriky]

Sorry it's been two weeks without a comic but we are working on one and it will hopefully be up by saturday. We've keep being given loads of homework so we haven't had enough time.

[FireDrake]

Okay, you may have noticed a slight lack in Comics recently, I haven't been putting enough effort into this for the last month or so, so don't expect anything new until after Xmas.

January at the latest, I'll try to stick to that.

[FireDrake]

Comic #8 is up:

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Happy New Year!

This is numbered Comic #8 because there's another comic that we might insert into the gap between this and #6.

This scene was mostly inspired by Lying as it ties in with his comic, Remember, later on. So anything in Remember will have canonicity over this, ie. I might have got some stuff wrong.

We're gonna try to get back into a weekly or fortnightly update pattern. After comics 9 and 10, it's mostly up to Chriky to keep this going because I'm gonna be overloaded with GCSE work.

[Lyinginbedmon]

I'm definitely going to enjoy this little arc

[CrimsonAngel]

Wow nice comic.

[The Gremlin]

Yay! It has returned!

[FireDrake]

Comic #9:

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This comic is meant to represent a large epic shot. I'm not sure if it worked.

[Lyinginbedmon]

Nicely done, nicely epic, though perhaps a couple more frames showing the dragons attacking Dalmosh prior to the big reveal would have enhanced the epicness?

[The Gremlin]

Awesomesauce.

[FireDrake]

AAAAAAnd here it is! The one you've all been waiting for! The first Fire Within with actual, proper fighting in it:

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Comic #10

[Lyinginbedmon]

That's got to be the second worst place to experience the sensation of an acid burn.

[CrimsonAngel]

AGUARD!!!!!

[FireDrake]

AGUARD!!!!!

That's the yellow dragons name (Aguar actually). It's a mix between the spanish words for water and claw (I think yellow dragons use water based attacks).

[Lyinginbedmon]

I don't think I know of Yellow chromatic dragons.

Gold metallic might fit the bill though.

[Mad Mask]

I don't think I know of Yellow chromatic dragons.

Gold metallic might fit the bill though.

They do exist. See here.

[Lyinginbedmon]

They do exist. See here.

Yeah...but it's 4.0. Are you going to listen to a book that gives you a brown dragon?

That sounds like a horrible euphemism, especially with a yellow dragon added.

[The Gremlin]

Yeah...but it's 4.0. Are you going to listen to a book that gives you a brown dragon?

That sounds like a horrible euphemism, especially with a yellow dragon added.

No, the yellow dragon is from the Dragon Compendium.
I actually think that brown makes sense, but I don't like 4E for getting rid of brass.