ABR Disscusion thread XII: Not to be confused with important stuff

[master ranger]

I'm back Everyone!

[Green-Shirt Q]

I'm back Everyone!

I warn you, you may be shot for being disliked.

[Lyinginbedmon]

EDIT: And MR, your character is a pancake... Why?
You also cannot reality shift into the citadel.... Ugh.... I feel like a broken record...

Citadel would be easier, Vendetta is the hardest option at present. Moreso when you reality shift right infront of the person you just recently slaughtered so many.

[The Gremlin]

I have read the archive
give me my phylactri Gremlin

I'm pretty sure it's 'phylactery'. So you're a lich?
Anyways, glad you've read the archive. Some of it was a bit frustrating, due mostly to broken links. I still don't really understand what happened in the Citadel. But I found that it was much more fun to partake in ABR after I read the archives and understood everything.
@Nobody; That's pretty clear. So what you're saying is that they're basically part of Nowhere, but when Nowhere was shattered they were 'disabled'. But if Nobody wants, he can always 'remake' them.

[master ranger]

I warn you, you may be shot for being disliked.

got that Q.

[Green-Shirt Q]

got that Q.

Personally, I think you should practice your comic making with something else before joining ABR. Like, starting your own forum-based webcomic. Just so people don't want to gut you as much.

'cause, don't take this personally, but I think your comics aren't very good. It dosen't matter that much since you are obviously new at this, but you aren't going to do very well here if your comics look like a drunken monkey made them by finger painting with his own droppings.

[Mina Kobold]

Then why, Keveak, do you constantly forget about things already in place, such as God-modding, Random-killing in canon, and just asking "can I join your team plz plz plz" rather than just saying "I was already working for/with this person (with their permission)", or "Threeshades killed my family," etc. The archive has examples for joining...

EDIT: And MR, your character is a pancake... Why?
You also cannot reality shift into the citadel.... Ugh.... I feel like a broken record...

What do you wan't me to do. Re-enter the plot?

[master ranger]

Your comics look like a drunken monkey made them by finger painting with his own droppings.

Hey!!!!!

[Green-Shirt Q]

Hey!!!!!

Hey, I said it's okay since you're just beginning. Don't blame me.

[Mina Kobold]

Hey!!!!!

You had it comming both of us have used Trazois guide but my first attemp (my kobold mage in green clothes) is better than everything of yours Ive seen

[The Gremlin]

You had it comming both of us have used Trazois guide but my first attemp (my kobold mage in green clothes) is better than everything of yours Ive seen

Yeah, say what you will about Keveak, but he's much better than me at drawing.

[Mina Kobold]

Yeah, say what you will about Keveak, but he's much better than me at drawing.

Thanks
the phylactery part was to seem if I could confuse you (I could) or was it...

[Green-Shirt Q]

Yeah, say what you will about Keveak, but he's much better than me at drawing.

Personally, I like your style better, Gremlin. I don't think yours is bad, it's just different.

But as for master ranger, I have you say you can do a lot better. Just take your time and keep trying. With time will come experience and with experience will come wisdom and with wisdom will come greatness. Usually.

As for Keveak, I don't think his style is the best, but it's certainly not horrible. I think you have a way to improve, but it'll come pretty quick as you don't have that much to travel. You've started off pretty well, you just have to make things a tad better with a few minor details, mainly regarding grammer.

How's THAT for advise, eh?

[Mina Kobold]

Personally, I like your style better, Gremlin. I don't think yours is bad, it's just different.

But as for master ranger, I have you say you can do a lot better. Just take your time and keep trying. With time will come experience and with experience will come wisdom and with wisdom will come greatness. Usually.

As for Keveak, I don't think his style is the best, but it's certainly not horrible. I think you have a way to improve, but it'll come pretty quick as you don't have that much to travel. You've started off pretty well, you just have to make things a tad better with a few minor details, mainly regarding grammer.

How's THAT for advise, eh?

I'm from Denmark most 14 year old people here can't even enough english to read the comics. and what other details?

[Green-Shirt Q]

I'm from Denmark most 14 year old people here can't even enough english to read the comics. and what other details?

I'm sorry, but there is no need for a furious face. I'm just saying, the lack of english skills make your comics look worse then they are.

Other then that, I think your comics are pretty good. Sometimes it's a little rough looking, but that will disappear in time. The grammer is the only thing, really.

The lack of grammer gives the big illusion of suckiness. Your comics aren't sucky, but the lack of english grammer may convince otherwise. I suggest you get somebody else to proof-read your comics. I volenteer.

[Mina Kobold]

The lack of grammer gives the big illusion of suckiness. Your comics aren't sucky, but the lack of english grammer may convince otherwise. I suggest you get somebody else to proof-read your comics. I volenteer.

Well I don't know anybody who can help with grammar buut I have words with english grammarcheck-thingy so. And it was a small furrious smilie so not that bad ment

EDIT. Loved the non-cannon cannon Gremlin.

[Green-Shirt Q]

Well I don't know anybody who can help with grammar buut I have words with english grammarcheck-thingy so. And it was a small furrious smilie so not that bad ment

Well, a furious face is still a furious face, no matter how small.

[The Gremlin]

Well, a furious face is still a furious face, no matter how small.

Did you just quote 'Horton Hears a Who'?
@Keveak; Thanks. It's fun to draw it.

[Mina Kobold]

Well, a furious face is still a furious face, no matter how small.

goes of mumbling.

[Green-Shirt Q]

Did you just quote 'Horton Hears a Who'?

Yup. I like that Dr. Seuss.

[The Gremlin]

Yup. I like that Dr. Suess.

Really? You don't like that Theodor Seuss Geisel fellow?

[Green-Shirt Q]

Really? You don't like that Theodor Seuss Geisel fellow?

I do. Who dosen't like Dr. Seuss? I almost made an ABR character based on a Dr. Seuss character.

[The Gremlin]

I do. Who dosen't like Dr. Seuss? I almost made an ABR character based on a Dr. Seuss character.

Like Tom I Nom?

[Green-Shirt Q]

Like Tom I Nom?

More like "The Feline in the Fedora" or "The Granche who steals Boccobmas".

[The Gremlin]

More like "The Feline in the Fedora" or "The Granche who steals Boccobmas".

Speaking of which, one would wonder if those who don't worship Boccob would have a different name for it.

[Lord Xeno]

The Non-Cannon Cannon strikes again!

[memnarch]

I'm from Denmark most 14 year old people here can't even enough english to read the comics. and what other details?

You're from Denmark? Cool!

[Threeshades]

[Emperor Ing]

3S: Something tells me you're going to be using that N.C.C.* a LOT
*Non Canon Cannon

[Threeshades]

3S: Something tells me you're going to be using that N.C.C.* a LOT
*Non Canon Cannon

I'm going to make a Non-Canon LRM Battery, Non-Canon Howtitzer and a Non-Canon Big Bertha so I dont have to