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    Yahoo!! Its back!
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    Whoa, It's back! Cool

    I just wonder where the drill disappeared to
    Who cares? It's back... With BADASS! :D
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    Badass and ABS!
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    Yaaaay! Fayte's back!

    Can't wait for more comics. :3
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    I bring a comic!
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    I've started scripting out the plot!

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    "And why am I talking to myself as if I'm in some sort of comic strip...?

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    Well it kinda is done as if it were a TV show... meaning I can get away with not using thought bubbles at all
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    I thought he was blind.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel View Post
    I thought he was blind.
    In an earlier comic it says he got implants.
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    New comic.
    Sorry for not updating last week.
    To make up for it this ones a 2 parter!

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    Sorry for the messed up hair in the second pannel of number 2 Dunno what happened there, I'll sort it out ASAP!
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    yay, an update =D

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    Just so you all know, I'll be updating previous comics to make them up to date.
    I'll be fixing art, spelling errors, continuity errors and the likes.

    I'll hopefully be getting new comics done a well though.
    Also, expect information on separate bits of... thingys in the starting post.
    Things like city maps, planet info.
    Maybe a little History and stories.

    If any of you have any ideas for past events I could turn into little stories. feel free to suggest them

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fayte Graydon View Post
    Just so you all know, I'll be updating previous comics to make them up to date.
    I'll be fixing art, spelling errors, continuity errors and the likes.

    I'll hopefully be getting new comics done a well though.
    Also, expect information on separate bits of... thingys in the starting post.
    Things like city maps, planet info.
    Maybe a little History and stories.

    If any of you have any ideas for past events I could turn into little stories. feel free to suggest them

    Peace and Love Yall <3
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nameless View Post
    "Yall"? What are you, Texan?
    whoooo! Texas!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fayte Graydon View Post
    sorry for the lack of update, but I've been bogged down in creating races and things.
    I need opinions on a creature called a "Drogre".
    I can't decide on the following colour scheme:
    You should use them all. Like, you know we have different races of humans. It will make it more realistic and such. :3
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    I'm inclined towards 2, 5 or 6, personally

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    I go with nameless.
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    Dawn of Yesterday is going through a rebooted start.
    This is due to the fact, when I started the comic, it was merely a case of "that would be cool to do" and heavily influenced by Video games, Movies and books I had read recently.
    The Reboot of the story will still follow the current story line, with changes so it flows better as a story, makes sense, less randomness and better art from the beginning.
    I thank all my readers for being patient and hope to bring a better, more exciting story for you all to read.

    The current Archive on Page One is still up and running, all other information has been removed and Shall be updated at a later date.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fayte Graydon View Post
    Dawn of Yesterday is going through a rebooted start.
    This is due to the fact, when I started the comic, it was merely a case of "that would be cool to do" and heavily influenced by Video games, Movies and books I had read recently.
    The Reboot of the story will still follow the current story line, with changes so it flows better as a story, makes sense, less randomness and better art from the beginning.
    I thank all my readers for being patient and hope to bring a better, more exciting story for you all to read.

    The current Archive on Page One is still up and running, all other information has been removed and Shall be updated at a later date.

    Personally I think this is highly unnessesary, and thought the story was well-paced and smooth when I read it.

    But, whatever. Do what you must.
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    Quote Originally Posted by The Q View Post
    Personally I think this is highly unnessesary, and thought the story was well-paced and smooth when I read it.

    But, whatever. Do what you must.
    Trust me, if you carefully read up to Episode 3 then try and work out EXACTLY whats going on. it really makes very little sense at all :P

    Dont worry, it will follow the same line of plot, but will deviate to make more sense.
    For example, You will find out WHAT Fayte was doing in the building at the start.
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    Fayte asked me to post that this comic is on hold due to a lack of internet access at home.
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    Dawn of Yesterday...
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    Woah, you could NOT have a more feminine name, could you?! Well, not without adding "Boobykins" as your middle name. And the female gender icon on your avatar?! On your AVATAR RIGHT ABOVE your profile's gender icon?

    We get it, OKAY! You're a dudette!

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    TOO. MANY. WORDS!


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    Quote Originally Posted by The Q View Post
    Woah, you could NOT have a more feminine name, could you?! Well, not without adding "Boobykins" as your middle name. And the female gender icon on your avatar?! On your AVATAR RIGHT ABOVE your profile's gender icon?

    We get it, OKAY! You're a dudette!

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    TOO. MANY. WORDS!


    Really, you're going to mock the name?
    Also, you're one to talk about too much text. Each My Name is Q involves more text than this (And it's an introduction, establishing the setting, which is excusable).
    *Makes note to keep a copy of War and Peace around in case he needs to scare Q off*
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    Quote Originally Posted by BRC View Post
    Also, you're one to talk about too much text. Each My Name is Q involves more text than this (And it's an introduction, establishing the setting, which is excusable).
    *Makes note to keep a copy of War and Peace around in case he needs to scare Q off*
    Yeah, but (hopefully, as it is the goal of a comic writer yet such an easy mistake to make when you don't do it) I balenced the many, many words out with pictures!

    If the entire introduction was broken down into, like, 4 or 5 sentences a box and was accompanied by pictures, whether just snap shots of around the city or with the protaginists getting ready or something, it would've been a lot more enjoyable for me, the moron, to read.

    I do read books, when I'm in a book mood, but when I'm in a comic mood I come here.
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    Quote Originally Posted by The Q View Post
    Yeah, but (hopefully, as it is the goal of a comic writer yet such an easy mistake to make when you don't do it) I balenced the many, many words out with pictures!

    If the entire introduction was broken down into, like, 4 or 5 sentences a box and was accompanied by pictures, whether just snap shots of around the city or with the protaginists getting ready or something, it would've been a lot more enjoyable for me, the moron, to read.

    I do read books, when I'm in a book mood, but when I'm in a comic mood I come here.
    True, that's what I do, making sure something accompanies my text, usually a relevant image. I started doing that for the Vox Populi infodumps, and now use it in Rebellion|Revolution. I find it's a good way to get some high-density exposition (without having your characters stand around discussing things they should already know).

    However, since she's just trying to establish the general idea of the setting, it works. The alternative to this would be for Fayte to draw a wide view of the City, something that would take a lot of work to do properly, and would rarely be used again. As a comic maker, I can sympathize with this
    Either way, I look forward to seeing what happens with this.
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    Comic 1 Reboot.

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    awesome! kind of reminds me of splinter cell, though
    it's not a master peice, but I drew it

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