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Old 12-23-2010, 03:51 AM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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The Hohlenbewohner
The Hohlenbewohner (Plural: Hohlenbewohners) are humanoids resembling albino halflings, if halflings were Underdark dwelling savages.

Personality: Hohlenbewohners tend to be jaded, due to living in near uninhabiltal conditions. Despite this, many try stay on the optimistic side of life, after all how much worse could it get?

Physical Description: They look like albino halflings crossed with a goblin that was starving to death. They do indeed posses eyes, however they are entirely useless, being vestigial. They have pointed ears and pig-like snouts. Many are also surprised at their ability to detect lies with a much greater accuracy than most.

Alignment: Hohlenbewohners tend to be either chaotic neutral or lawful neutral, depending on if the individual lives in a tribe or not. Most do not make a stance on the moral axis, as they are too busy trying not to die.

Hohlenbewohners Lands: Hohlenbewohners live in scattered tribes throughout the underdark, or as slaves in the cities of Drow or Grey Dwarves.

Religion: Most Hohlenbewoners tend to worship gods of natural disasters or other gods that represent the unpleasant side of nature.

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Comments: This race was mostly born from me reading up on troglobites and wanting to see if a blind PC race was viable without using blindsense.
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Old 12-23-2010, 05:44 AM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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That light sensitivity is painful. A 1st level Hohlenbewohner (yay copy-pasta!) can only spend, what, a maximum of 18 rounds in sunlight (if you're a barbarian/warblade who put an 18 into Con and took Toughness, and each nonlethal damage die came up 1). That's...pretty crippling.
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Old 12-23-2010, 06:34 AM   Top  -  End  -  #3
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Yeah, maybe you want to change Light Sensitivity to: if a Hohlenbewohner spends more than one round in direct sunlight or the equivalent (such as a daylight spell), they become shaken.
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Old 12-23-2010, 07:03 AM   Top  -  End  -  #4
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Oh, hey, morlocks.

But seriously, light sensitivity doing nonlethal damage is nuts. Have it sicken them instead, that'd fit better.

Also, the race doesn't have a lot of bonuses to make up for its blindness. Its listen checks aren't good enough to exactly locate an enemy, and scent requires an action to pinpoint someone, after which they still have total concealment.
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Yeah, maybe you want to change Light Sensitivity to: if a Hohlenbewohner spends more than one round in direct sunlight or the equivalent (such as a daylight spell), they become shaken.
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Also, the race doesn't have a lot of bonuses to make up for its blindness. Its listen checks aren't good enough to exactly locate an enemy, and scent requires an action to pinpoint someone, after which they still have total concealment.
Would allowing them to use a swift or free action to pinpoint someone with scent make up for the complete blindness?
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Old 12-23-2010, 02:53 PM   Top  -  End  -  #6
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A swift action probably works best, though that is still a 50% miss chance. There's not much way around that without actually giving them blindsight, though.
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Old 12-24-2010, 12:26 AM   Top  -  End  -  #7
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There's not much way around that without actually giving them blindsight, though.
What about giving them an ability to the effect of "Whenever a Hohlenbewohner would normally make a spot check, it may make a listen check instead and treat the result as if it were a spot check"?
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First three racial feats up. Any criticisms or suggestions?
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I have no idea wethe you know german or not.
Please excuse my Name hating.
Due to missing letters it should be approximated as Hoehlenbewohner (and the plural is the same word as its only denoted in the corresponding article in german)
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I have no idea wethe you know german or not.
Please excuse my Name hating.
Due to missing letters it should be approximated as Hoehlenbewohner (and the plural is the same word as its only denoted in the corresponding article in german)
I'm not, I just put the phrase "Cave Dweller" into Google translate. I have always wanted to learn german though.
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