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Old 07-20-2011, 06:22 PM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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Default Vote up a new monster species

And We Are Back!
After a roughly eight month hiatus, I am bringing this thread back!
If you were following this thread before, you may want to look back at the previous phases to remind yourself of what this monster has so far. If you don't want to read the whole things, here's the summary:
It is a shapeshifting cold swarm of flying, burrowing plants, with a target CR of around 12. It can't move normally on the ground in its normal shape, it can only fly and burrow. We already decided on its shapechanging abilities. Now, we are voting on other special qualities (special attacks come later).

The goal of this thread is to create an entirely new living and breathing species (unless it is a species which does not breathe, of course) that is ready for use in most (3.5) games. When the non-mechanical aspects of the creature need to be decided, I will either (a)decide myself, (b)come up with a few ideas and put them to a vote, or (c)open the thread up to discussion, decide what the most popular ideas are, and then put it up for a vote.

The monster as it stands so far:
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Phase 1: Creature Type
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And plant is the winner!

The voting for subtypes will take occur in two separate phases. The first phase will narrow the choices down to the top 5, and the second phase will determine the top three. Notice that "none" is listed as a subtype. If "none" gets 1st place in the second phase, then the plant will have no subtypes. If none gets 2nd place, the creature will have only 1 subtype (whichever got first place), ect. If "none" is not in the top 3, then the creature will have 3 subtypes. The creature will not have more than three subtypes. Also note that I have purposely omitted subtypes that don't make sense for a plant, such as goblinoid.
For this phase, you may again give one vote to as many subtypes as you like (just not all). You also get a single "detractor" vote. The detractor vote subtracts one point from your least favorite subtype. You do not need to use your detractor vote if you don't want to.
Phase 2: Subtypes, part 1
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Phase 3: Subtypes, part 2
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The winning subtypes are Shapechanger, Cold, and Swarm!

Phase 4: Size
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Phase 5: Target Challenge Rating

This vote will NOT decide the actual CR (that will be much later in the process).
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The target CR is 12! Remember, this does not in any way mean the final CR will be 12, it just means that the SAs, SQs, and ability scores we give it should be reasonable for a CR 12 monster.

Phase 6: Available Movement Types
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And the winners are Burrow and fly! The creature does NOT have normal movement.

Phase 7: Hit dice and non-abilities
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And the monster has 17 HD, and all 6 ability scores!

Phase 8: Ability Scores, Part 1
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Phase 9: Ability Scores, Part 2

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And the final ability scores are:
Str: 3
Dex: 16
Con: 19
Int: 16
Wis:10
Cha:15

Phase 10: Speed and Maneuverability

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And the results are: Burrow 30 ft, fly 50 ft with Good maneuverability!

Phase 11: Alignment, part 1
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And the winner is, Usually!

Phase 12: Alignment, part 2
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And the winners are: True neutral, Chaotic Neutral, and Neutral Evil!

Phase 13: Alignment, part 3:
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The final alignment is Chaotic Neutral!

Phase 14-15: Natural Armor and Hivemind:
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And the winners are Yes Hivemind and +3 natural armor!
Phase 16: Skill Points:
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And the creature has:
Knowledge (arcane) 4
Bluff 6
Concentration 6
Diplomacy 3
Disguise 6
Escape 2
Gather Information 2
Hide 11
Intimidate 3
Listen 2
Move silently 14
Knowledge (nature) 10
Perform (dance) 6
Search 2
Sense Motive 9
Spellcraft 2
Spot 3
Survival 5
Use Magic Device 4

Phase 17: Shapechange ability, part 1:
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Phase 18: Shapechange ability, part 2
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Phase 19: Special Qualities, Part 1
It is time to decide what, if any, special qualities our monster has. I have listed a bunch of possible special qualities (almost everything in the monster manual/SRD which makes sense that it does not already have) below. Vote for as many as you like. For ease of tallying, please include the option numbers from the list in your vote. You can list just the numbers, or the numbers and the qualities.
Notice that abilities which are essentially variants of each other (e.g. fast healing/regeneration, blindsense/blind fight) have been lumped together. For these, treat them as a single ability in this phase. We will decide which variant of the winning abilities the monster has in the next phase. This also applies to numerical boosts (such as racial skill modifiers) and qualities with a numerical parameter (e.g., if you want it to have any amount of damage reduction, vote for "damage reduction," and we will decide the amount of damage reduction it has in the next phase).
Also note that it already has a significant number of special qualities from its type and subtypes--these are omitted from the list below.
(In case you are wondering about the process, there is no fixed number of special qualities which will move on--I will apply an integer-valued-data clustering algorithm to determine which qualities received a significant number of votes, and all of these will be included.)

The list:
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Voting will close on May 23, unless votes are still coming quickly by that point. After that, we will narrow down the power of each special quality, before moving on to special attacks.
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Old 07-20-2011, 06:26 PM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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I vote for Ooze, Vermin, and Abberation.
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Old 07-20-2011, 06:32 PM   Top  -  End  -  #3
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I vote plant, monstrous humanoid, and giant
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Old 07-20-2011, 06:42 PM   Top  -  End  -  #4
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Plant, animal, and humanoid, because it's rare to see monsters with them (Mostly being magical beasts and m. humanoids)
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Old 07-20-2011, 06:49 PM   Top  -  End  -  #5
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ooze - personal pref.
abberation - these are always really fun to design
monsterous humanoid - this is my indy pick


... and ill second plant
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Old 07-20-2011, 06:58 PM   Top  -  End  -  #6
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Hmmmmm..... Vote for plant

And I already have an idea for it. It'd kind of be like a swarm, but wouldn't count as one (though it'd definitely have DR and energy resistance to a lot of things). Anyways, it'd look like a 20 foot tall writhing mass of vines. And sentient of course.

It moves by forming a sphere and sticking out its vines like tiny legs. Moving like this is similar to a charge, no turning ability. But very very fast.

Once it gets to where it wants it forms a vaguely humanoid shape. It then has 2 modes. Offense: walks on two legs at 30 movespeed. Defense: It roots itself into the ground (free action, but only once a turn...in other words its legs go to ground while its arms attack). Same deal if it needs to unroot.

Sounds like a penalty for defense right? No mobility? Well by doing this it gains two things. Same as Troll Regen (as it pulls nutrients from the ground) And an attack that sends its roots underground and up under someone to grapple them from far away (range 40ft).

Thats the gist of my idea. Feel free to fill in the details.
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Old 07-20-2011, 08:13 PM   Top  -  End  -  #7
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I vote for Giant, Ooze and Vermin. They need some love.
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Old 07-20-2011, 08:50 PM   Top  -  End  -  #8
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Definately plant. Plant monsters are funny
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Old 07-20-2011, 08:52 PM   Top  -  End  -  #9
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I vote for Ooze, Plant, and Vermin.
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Old 07-20-2011, 10:33 PM   Top  -  End  -  #10
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Construct, fey, giant, humanoid and monstrous humanoid.
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Old 07-21-2011, 07:31 AM   Top  -  End  -  #11
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I vote for Fey and Giant.
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Fey and Plant.
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Old 07-21-2011, 09:49 PM   Top  -  End  -  #13
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Ooze, Plant and Vermin
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I vote for...
  • Plant
  • Aberration
  • Undead
  • and Vermin.
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I vote for Animal, Giant and Plant.
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I vote for Fey, Construct and Magical Beast.
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Plant.......
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Old 07-22-2011, 09:46 PM   Top  -  End  -  #18
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Animal - Always fun, and if you go "Non-real-world, but no supernatural powers" can be sorta "Magical Beast Lite"(see below)
Fey Lotta different direction to take this... actually a bit hard to do well (IE without just rehashing what already exists, but I figure you could give it a shot.
Magical Beast because while there are a lot of them, I feel it is a category that invites endless variety. (unlike Outsiders, which tend to devolve into simplistic alignment-based architypes all too often as far as personalities and, to a lesser extent, powers go).
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Fey
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Hey, why not make it a giant fey dragon (diminuitive size class ofc)?
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I vote ooze and plant, and would actually rather like to see a plant ooze...but that's just me!
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Old 07-24-2011, 09:50 AM   Top  -  End  -  #21
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Voting is now closed. Plant wins by a huge margin. Now, we'll move on to subtypes...
EDIT: voting is now open!
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Old 07-24-2011, 10:53 AM   Top  -  End  -  #22
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Air, Cold, None. Detract from Aquatic.
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Old 07-24-2011, 11:28 AM   Top  -  End  -  #23
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Air, Chaotic, Incorporeal.

I don't think I've ever seen an Incorporeal plant.

Detract from None. Let's pile on the sub-types.
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Shapechanger, Swarm, and None (that last stipulation because if None falls below 0, things get too crazy).
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Old 07-24-2011, 01:32 PM   Top  -  End  -  #25
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How did I miss this thread ?

Anyway, I'll vote for Incorporeal, Shapechanger and Swarm
and I detract from None, I want as many subtype as possible.
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I'll vote for Air and Cold and detract from None.

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Old 07-24-2011, 01:51 PM   Top  -  End  -  #27
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So None is on -2, Aquatic and Extraplanar on -1, and everything else on 0 or positives...

Based on the voting so far, and the ruling that this monster will have every subtype which scores higher than "None", this monster will have every subtype.


Doh! Missed the "Not more than 3 subtypes" stipulation.

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Based on the voting so far, and the ruling that this monster will have every subtype which scores higher than "None", this monster will have every subtype.
It won't have more than three.

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Incorporeal, Shapechanger and Air.
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Cold, Air, Aquatic.
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