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Old 07-21-2012, 05:07 PM   Top  -  End  -  #931
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Peanut Dragon:
Dragon (Wood)
Environment: Warm and temperate plains, forests, and underground.
Organization: Solitary, pair, family (2-5 young and 1-2 adults), clutch (2-5).
Challenge Rating: Wyrmling 2; very young 4; young 6; juvenile 8; young adult 10; adult 12; mature adult 15; old 17; very old 20; ancient 21; wyrm 23; great wyrm 25
Treasure: Triple standard.
Alignment: Always Neutral Evil.

"I was given a mirror labeled Erutnevda recently by an anonymous benefactor. While investigating said mirror I accidentally passed through it and into a world filled with marvelous creatures. I saw: beings like fanciful chess knights, the upper bodies of men grafted onto the heads of magnificent alabaster horses; a golem maid of the finest porcelain, with whom I shared exquisite tea; a flower, who argued that objects were all colors but those they appeared; to list but a paltry few. These creatures are not the beings I will discuss here, this is a tome of dragons and within I will tell of the dragon I found in this land of Erutnevda.

"The dragon had pale orange-brown scales and a hard outer shell with the distinct squares and shape of a peanut. A foul plotter the beast struck me as singularly arrogant as we begun our game of Dur'vkel'varesh'dolor, or Draconic Speed Chess. At first we chatted lightly, each trying to thus size up our opposition and perhaps even make them relax and lower their guard, but such small talk soon fell away as we were both forced to concentrate on the game ahead. When I had captured boards 3 and 6, sealing his korgik onto boards 4 and 5 with my jrulshrith and mate was inevitable within twelve turns, instead of surrendering as honor would demand my opponent instead blasted both me and the board with his acidic breath, destroying the fine crystal set. The very plants of the place, dozens of floral monsters, came to the dragon's aid and for a moment I thought I might prove overwhelmed. In the end, though, I was able to force the dragon to beat a hasty retreat.

"Peanut dragons are without honor, motivated only by their own egomania and desire for control. Despicable creatures they build empires of plant creatures within which they sit like a spider in its web. Peanut dragons have hard outer shells giving them resistance to weapons and many attacks, as well as skill with druidic magic. They are capable of creating plant horrors, and their acidic breath can slow foes and even turn those it kills into their new floral servitors."

--Zasper, the Dragon Sage.


Age Size Hit Dice (hp) Str Dex Con Int Wis Cha Base Attack/Grapple AttackFort SaveRef SaveWill Save Breath Weapon Frightful Presence DC
Wyrmling T 4d12+8 (34) 9 8 15 14 13 8 +4/-5 +5 +6 +3 +5 2d4 (14)
Very young S 7d12+14 (59) 11 8 15 16 13 8 +7/+3 +8 +7 +4 +6 4d4 (15)
Young M 10d12+30 (95) 13 8 17 16 15 10 +10/+11 +11 +10 +6 +9 6d4 (18)
Juvenile M 13d12+39 (123) 15 8 17 18 15 10 +13/+15 +15 +11 +7 +10 8d4 (19)
Young adult L 16d12+48 (168) 17 8 19 18 17 12 +16/+23 +18 +14 +9 +13 10d4 (22) 19
Adult L 19d12+95 (218) 21 8 21 20 17 12 +19/+28 +23 +16 +10 +14 12d4 (24) 20
Mature adult H 22d12+132 (275) 25 8 23 22 19 14 +22/+37 +27 +19 +12 +17 14d4 (27) 23
Old H 25d12+150 (312) 27 8 23 24 19 14 +25/+41 +31 +20 +13 +18 16d4 (28) 24
Very old H 28d12+196 (378) 29 8 25 26 21 16 +28/+45 +35 +23 +15 +21 18d4 (31) 27
Ancient H 31d12+217 (418) 31 8 25 28 21 16 +31/+49 +39 +24 +16 +22 20d4 (32) 28
Wyrm G 34d12+272 (493) 33 8 27 30 23 18 +34/+57 +41 +27 +18 +25 22d4 (35) 31
Great wyrm G 37d12+333 (573) 35 8 29 32 25 20 +37/+61 +45 +29 +19 +27 24d4 (37) 33

Age Speed Initiative AC Special Abilities Caster Level SR
Wyrmling 40 ft., fly 75 ft. (good) -1 17 (+2 size, -1 Dex, +6 natural), touch 11, flat-footed 17Immunity to acid and poison, vulnerability to cold, DR 5/magic, Lessened Arsenal
Very young 40 ft., fly 75 ft. (good) -1 19 (+1 size, -1 Dex, +9 natural), touch 10, flat-footed 19 Immunity to polymorph and stunning1st16
Young 40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good)-121 (-1 Dex, +12 natural), touch 9, flat-footed 22DR 10/magic 3rd18
Juvenile40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good) -124 (-1 Dex, +15 natural), touch 9, flat-footed 25 Immunity to mind-affecting effects 5th
Young adult 40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good)-1 26 (-1 size, -1 Dex, +18 natural), touch 8, flat-footed 27 DR 15/magic 7th 20
Adult 40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good)-129 (-1 size, -1 Dex, +21 natural), touch 8, flat-footed 30 Not subject to critical hits 9th 22
Mature adult 40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good)-1 31 (-2 size, -1 Dex, +24 natural), touch 7, flat-footed 31 DR 20/magic 11th 25
Old 40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good)-1 34 (-2 size, -1 Dex, +27 natural), touch 7, flat-footed 34 Reviving Breath13th 27
Very old 40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good) -1 37 (-2 size, -1 Dex, +30 natural), touch 7, flat-footed 37 DR 20/magic and 5/- 15th 30
Ancient 40 ft., fly 100 ft. (good) -1 40 (-2 size, -1 Dex, +33 natural), touch 7, flat-footed 40 -17th 31
Wyrm 40 ft., fly 150 ft. (good) -1 41 (-4 size, -1 Dex, +36 natural), touch 5, flat-footed 41 DR 20/magic and DR 10/- 19th 33
Great wyrm 40 ft., fly 150 ft. (good)-1 44 (-4 size, -1 Dex, +39 natural), touch 5, flat-footed 44 Create Plant Monster 21st 35

Breath Weapon (Su): A peanut dragon’s breath weapon is a cone of acid which deals the listed damage (reflex half). Any creature which fails its saving throw against this breath weapon are also entangle for 2d4 rounds.

Lessened Arsenal: A peanut dragon's natural weapons are weaker compared to other comparatively sized dragons. For determining what natural weapons a peanut dragon has access to, and their damage, a peanut dragon is treated as one size category smaller. A tiny peanut dragon has no claw attacks and its bite deals 1d3 damage.

Caster Level: A peanut dragon casts spells as a sorcerer of the listed level, with the following exceptions. First they may select Druid spells and cleric spells from the Evil, Plant, and Knowledge domains as sorcerer spells. Second their bonus spells, maximum spell level, and save DCs are all determined by Intelligence instead of Charisma.

Reviving Breath (Su): A medium or small sized creature killed by an old or older peanut dragon's breath weapon is transformed into a vine horror (Fiend Folio) and revived 1d4 rounds later. This vine horror is under the control of the peanut dragon. As long as the vine horror is alive the creature cannot be revived and should the vine horror be killed a limited wish spell is required to restore the body to allow resurrection to function, and raise dead simply will not. If the vine horror is dead then a true resurrection will still work normally.

Create Plant Monster (Su): By spending 1 day performing a mystical ritual a great wyrm peanut dragon may create a plant creature with a CR of 15 or less.

Skills: In addition to the class skills for all dragons a peanut dragon has Bluff, Spellcraft, and Survival as class skills. A peanut dragon gains a racial bonus to Craft (Alchemy), Knowledge (Nature), Profession (Herbalist), and Survival checks equal to the number of age categories it has obtained.[/quote]
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Old 07-21-2012, 05:12 PM   Top  -  End  -  #932
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Choice for Poll #3: Decided to use an actual post for this so I'll have more room. Also wanted to do something a little different so the options this time are; as a general note I reserve the right to choose which specific kind of dragon to work with for any given option, but requests will be considered (this is in part to reduce the chance of a tie):

A 20 level class in the vein of the community monster classes for playing one of the dragons I've made.

Stats for 3 specific true dragons, including name, personality, feats, spells, and equipment. One will be CR 4 to 8, one CR 9 to 14 and one CR 15+.

Stats for 2 specific dragons which are half-breeds of two true dragons. Include name, personality, feats, spells, and equipment.

A dragon lair intended for a party near level 15 (might end up higher or lower) with a boss being a dragon with a CR = to party level and minions to bring the EL up to 2 higher.

A prestige class made for true dragons.

Voting will be open till the 5th of August at 4 PM GMT. Please vote via PM.
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Old 07-22-2012, 05:11 AM   Top  -  End  -  #933
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I love your peanut dragon as a sort of lesser dragon. Just a few things. Your chart has the information for Breath Weapon DC in with the Breath weapon damage (which is fine in itself), but the information for the Frightful Presence is in where the BW DC is, and thus the FP column is blank.

This is worded a bit oddly: "Create Plant Monster (Su): By spending 1 day a great wyrm peanut dragon may create a plant creature with a CR of 15 or less."

By spending a 1 day doing what? Also, Plant creatures aren't generally created, they can be summoned though. I suggest that you change this to the following:

Summon Plant Creature (Sp): Once a day as a Standard Action, a great wyrm peanut dragon may summon a Plant creature with a CR 15 or less as summon monster IX.

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Old 07-22-2012, 05:20 AM   Top  -  End  -  #934
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This is worded a bit oddly: "Create Plant Monster (Su): By spending 1 day a great wyrm peanut dragon may create a plant creature with a CR of 15 or less."

By spending a 1 day doing what?
I'd say its warping a seed into an evil tree for that day, or weaving vines into a humanoid form.

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Also, Plant creatures aren't generally created, they can be summoned though. I suggest that you change this to the following:
Summon Plant Creature (Sp): Once a day as a Standard Action, a great wyrm peanut dragon may summon a Plant creature with a CR 15 or less as summon monster IX.
I don't think he wants it to be a summoned creature. I think the Peanut Dragon creates a plant monster, regardless of whether or not it has been done before.
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Old 07-22-2012, 11:40 PM   Top  -  End  -  #935
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Make a level 20 class for playing a Death Dragon! Pweeeeeze.....
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Old 07-29-2012, 12:29 AM   Top  -  End  -  #936
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Old 07-29-2012, 11:15 PM   Top  -  End  -  #937
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[quote=Milo v3;13596425]I'd say its warping a seed into an evil tree for that day, or weaving vines into a humanoid form.[quote] Possibly. I'm still skeptical as to how to incorporate this as a Supernatural Ability. It doesn't seem to have an requirements that usually go with creating things.


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I don't think he wants it to be a summoned creature. I think the Peanut Dragon creates a plant monster, regardless of whether or not it has been done before.
The problem that I have with Plant creatures being created is that they aren't constructs. So how do you "create" one? Handwaving it as "magic" doesn't work for me because it has no creation costs and no material components. As a DM, I don't like it because it messes up the CR of the creature. How many assassin vines could such a dragon have protecting its lair for example. They are permanent fixtures rather than temporary ones. That means the party has to deal with them and so should get the experience for them Here are the rules on Summon as a Special Ability: I want to bold important differences between summoning a creature and creating one:

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A creature with the summon ability can summon specific other creatures of its kind much as though casting a summon monster spell, but it usually has only a limited chance of success (as specified in the creature’s entry). Roll d%: On a failure, no creature answers the summons. Summoned creatures automatically return whence they came after 1 hour. A creature that has just been summoned cannot use its own summon ability for 1 hour. Most creatures with the ability to summon do not use it lightly, since it leaves them beholden to the summoned creature. In general, they use it only when necessary to save their own lives. An appropriate spell level is given for each summoning ability for purposes of Concentration checks and attempts to dispel the summoned creature. No experience points are awarded for summoned monsters.
Created creatures don't disappear after and hour and experience points should be awarded for defeating them since there can be so many. A great wyrm could have several years' worth of plant creatures (and their offspring) guarding it's lair. This is just too easy to abuse.

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Old 08-07-2012, 07:27 PM   Top  -  End  -  #938
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Without further wait the winner of poll #3:

A racial progression class...


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Old 08-07-2012, 07:42 PM   Top  -  End  -  #939
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THANK YOU ZAYDOS! I can't even begin thanking you for this class, it's just... perfect! I cannot wait to try it out.
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Old 08-08-2012, 11:27 PM   Top  -  End  -  #940
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Now onto the fourth poll; as usual I prefer PM'd votes though you can post them here and I'll still count them.

Options:

Gravedirge Dragon: A bardic dragon of the graveyard.

Abyssal Dragon: A planar dragon for the Abyss because... well I am not satisfied by the Dragon Magazine one which was really only applicable to a very uninteresting layer.

Vapor Dragon: A dragon capable of assuming a semi-gaseous form.

Sei Lung: A lung dragon charged with the task of maintaining the stars in their rightful positions.

Vacuum Dragon: A dragon of the quasielemental plane of vacuum.

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And because I forgot to mention it before; the use of creation instead of summoning on the peanut dragon was intentional. One because it falls under the part in, well it was in the 3.0 DMG, where it talks about how minions that don't take resources from the creator/summoner in this battle (such as spell slots) should be included in XP and ECL, and placing it on a creature with more than 36 RHD puts it squarely in the DM only zone until at least epic levels where such a feat can already be performed (Origin of Species epic spell). It gives the DM an excuse to populate the lair with plant monsters or the surrounding area and mostly acts as a fluff ability. The lack of description on what kind of action this takes, I could defend with something about leaving it up to the DM so that they can weave it into their own world, but was really just sloppy writing on my part.
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Old 08-09-2012, 02:34 AM   Top  -  End  -  #941
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I'm officially suggesting:

The Obdurium Dragon

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An incredibly rare and hard metal that represents the pinnacle of nonmagical strength. Even dwarven metallurgists speak of obdurium as more legend than fact. Devices crafted from obdurium are treated as though they were adamantine, except that their hardness is 30, they have 60 hit points per inch of thickness (or twice as many hit points as a typical item, whichever is greater), and their price is twice that of adamantine.
I propose this dragon would be an Epic Dragon, with no particular alignment leaning, with a high Damage Reduction (of the X/- variety.)
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