Ring V - OotS-Style comic itp

Mr_Saturn · 11-23-2007, 11:36 PM

Besides the fast of there being at least 3 up-and-running webcomics other than the giants... Me and my friend VespeRatavo are now attempting a run at creating our own. I'll be doing the art and helping out Vespe with the script.

No, this wasn't a spur-of-the-moment idea in conjunction with the recent spike in playgrounder created webcomics. We have been wanting to do a webcomic for some time now. Just so happened to happen at such a coincidental time.

Updates may likely occur up to twice a week, but who knows. <__< Probably during weekends.

So here's a prologue to give you a sense of what we're doing:

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Comic 1

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Comic 2

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Comic 3

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Comic 4

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Comic 5

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Comic 6

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Comic 7

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Comic 8

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Comic 9

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Comic 10

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Comic 11

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Comic 12

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Special Comics:

Christmas Filler:

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Guest Comic by Almighty_Salmon

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Banners:

Man, I have a new-found respect for comic artists.

hyperfreak497 · 11-23-2007, 11:52 PM

Nice. I liked it so far. Just a little nitpick. Should the mom's speech bubble in the last panel be dashed? I think that usually denotes a whisper. As far as I've seen, a normal bubble without a speech line would be fine, especially since the character refers to the speaker as "mom" in his next line.

EDIT: Curse my inadequate monitor! Does the character's last bubble say "I shouldn't have played WoW last night"?

Mr_Saturn · 11-24-2007, 12:02 AM

I wasnt sure what an off-panel dialogue should be put as. So i just put dashed lines.

Ill do that next time. Thanks!

The_Chilli_God · 11-24-2007, 01:58 AM

If you want it to seem like it's coming from off-side, have the speech bubble itself shoved to the side it's off of. Adjust the rest of the speech so that it'd still make sense - cut the panel into two if you must.

Another hint - if you're going to use speech bubbles (I don't), it's a good idea to keep the text centralized. Left- or right-angled text is hard to work into a circle.

Other than that? It's far better than my first try. Keep it up.

Nameless · 11-24-2007, 02:11 AM

Awesome

This web comic thing is starting to get popular

[Insert Neat Username Here] · 11-24-2007, 11:33 AM

Good comic.

How many webcomics are currently on this forum, anyway? And do ABR ones count?

Lyinginbedmon · 11-24-2007, 11:56 AM

Let's see, counting ABR:

Remember
A Story of Death
Tales of Squark
Failing Saves
The Adventures of Popcorn Man
Rob VS Jack
The Generica Chronicles

I think Bayar was working on one too

[Insert Neat Username Here] · 11-24-2007, 12:10 PM

You missed mine:

The Generica Chronicles

Bayar · 11-24-2007, 12:49 PM

yeah, I am working...but dont expect something from me soon...middle December the earliest.

Almighty Salmon · 11-24-2007, 12:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Lyinginbedmon

Let's see, counting ABR:

Remember
A Story of Death
Tales of Squark
Failing Saves
The Adventures of Popcorn Man
Rob VS Jack
The Generica Chronicles

I think Bayar was working on one too

I'm fourth!?

Also, This looks like a Nice Webcomic!

Skippy · 11-26-2007, 01:08 AM

Once again, Mr Saturn is excellent. Congratulations!

Mr_Saturn · 11-27-2007, 01:01 AM

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New comic is up. Larger size this time.

banjo1985 · 11-27-2007, 04:04 AM

Heh, spotted Vespe's old mime avatar in the ice

I wonder what Vespe will eventually find to interest him?

Dallas-Dakota · 11-28-2007, 12:35 AM

Excellent!!!

I also did Banjo

OOooooh scene :
*Vespe enters astrology class*
*Mr_Saturn starts checking the students homework and gets to Vespe*
Mr_Saturn : Why havent you got your homework Mr. Ratavo!
Vespe : I was playing WoW all night long yesterday...
Vespe then promptly falls asleep snoring on his desk.
And Mr_Saturn, put all your comics in the first post

Btw, which art program do you use? Just curious

Mr_Saturn · 11-28-2007, 01:57 AM

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Originally Posted by dallas-dakota

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And Mr_Saturn, put all your comics in the first post

Btw, which art program do you use? Just curious

I was lazy

Sodipodi.

Mr_Saturn · 11-29-2007, 07:00 PM

New comic is up. Getting the hang of text boxes <.<

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Lyinginbedmon · 11-29-2007, 07:16 PM

Hmm...there appears to be some sort of communique on the window/whiteboard of his room, I'm uncertain as to it's content however

@V I know, I was joking

[Insert Neat Username Here] · 11-29-2007, 07:19 PM

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Originally Posted by Lyinginbedmon

Hmm...there appears to be some sort of communique on the window/whiteboard of his room, I'm uncertain as to it's content however

"I'm breaking the 4th wall"

Dallas-Dakota · 11-30-2007, 05:54 AM

Awesome.....Sir can you please enter my character?....that would be awesome......

Skippy · 11-30-2007, 01:01 PM

Once again, congrats on the comic, Mr. Saturn. It is awesome. Is all AMEN going to appear here?

Dallas-Dakota · 11-30-2007, 02:53 PM

Or any members of HALO?

Haruki-kun · 11-30-2007, 03:06 PM

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Originally Posted by dallas-dakota

Or any members of HALO?

Seconded.

But I'm liking it a lot! Hope to see more.

Mr_Saturn · 11-30-2007, 03:07 PM

I dont know, i'd have to draw them all if i was going to put them all in. xD

If the fans want it, i guess theres a much higher possibility of it being in.

EDIT: because so far im putting in characters i've draw long ago to save time. <.<

Skippy · 11-30-2007, 03:29 PM

Oooh, then there's a chance I'll make a cameo appearance someday...

Dallas-Dakota · 11-30-2007, 03:35 PM

You have already drawn my avatar twice

Mr_Saturn · 11-30-2007, 03:38 PM

But the thing is dallas, your character isnt very oots-y.

Ichneumon · 11-30-2007, 03:39 PM

I really like the comics...

Dallas-Dakota · 11-30-2007, 03:42 PM

Sniff, maybe you can keep the body blue, making the legs and arms oots style, padding the hand and feet with blue fur, covering my head with blue fur?

Nameless · 11-30-2007, 03:43 PM

Comic 2 isn't working

Ichneumon · 11-30-2007, 03:44 PM

You really want to be in it that much?