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Old 06-06-2008, 01:50 PM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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All below material (except where otherwise noted), including comics, characters, and maps is the creative property of Beholder1995.

Herein lies the tale of Philmoore and Frederick, two Teutonic Knights on a quest to find their lost brethren. I lack any computer art equipment of any kind, so these comics are ones that I've hand-drawn and scanned. I apologize for illegible and/or crude handwriting or any kind of mistakes or blemishes in the art. If there's a problem, or you have a comment, well- that's why there's a thread.

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Old 06-06-2008, 02:08 PM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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I like your art style, it's simple, but as Oots has proved simple can be a good thing. It's quite a nice change from all the Oots style comics popping up as of late as well.

So, is this going to be set in the "real world"? They are Teutonic knights after all. Or is gonna be set in a fantasy world of some sort?
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I like your art style, it's simple, but as Oots has proved simple can be a good thing. It's quite a nice change from all the Oots style comics popping up as of late as well.

So, is this going to be set in the "real world"? They are Teutonic knights after all. Or is gonna be set in a fantasy world of some sort?
Well, they are Teutonic Knights, but other than that, it will be in a world I designed. In my world, the Teutonic Knights have traditionally guarded the neck of land between the north and south halves of the map. While it will be in a fantasy world, there will be little or no magic, and thus this won't be D&D oriented. EDIT: Also, they will have generaly Germanic sounding names, whether I make them up or not.

Glad you liked it! I was really nervous there...
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Yeah, I like it.
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This is looking really...really awesome.
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Love the art, is simple but gives the impression of greandeur, how much comedy can I expect from the comic, large amounts or every so often?
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Love the art, is simple but gives the impression of greandeur, how much comedy can I expect from the comic, large amounts or every so often?
Well, I'll try to include at least one punchline per two comics. (The quality of the jokes is pending.)

Speaking of which, here's comic #2!
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Old 06-06-2008, 03:36 PM   Top  -  End  -  #8
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Strong follow up and the comic looks good, the comedies awkward for the characters which is good but I wouldn't overuse it. One complaint though, the text is a bit cramped and stuff, are you doing it by hand?
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Old 06-06-2008, 03:41 PM   Top  -  End  -  #9
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Strong follow up and the comic looks good, the comedies awkward for the characters which is good but I wouldn't overuse it. One complaint though, the text is a bit cramped and stuff, are you doing it by hand?
Yeah, I'm doing it by hand. If it's an issue, I'll try to be neater.
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It's only a slight issue, if you find it hard to write so small you could add the text after you've scanned it(And it'd be a lot better quality text) but it's not an obligation, it's great quality as is.
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THis comic is awesome, and if this becomes big like anti-HEROS or Failing Saves, I'll know that I posted on the first page.
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Again, this is hand-drawn, so no banners. (Although if anyone wants to make some, I'd be much obliged.)
I was bored, so I made some banners, hope you like them ;)

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Your comic looks very nice!

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Old 06-07-2008, 02:37 PM   Top  -  End  -  #13
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Those are sweet! And heeeere's the new comic!
(The rest of the letter may or may not be here by tonight.)

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EDIT: Actually, the last banner's probably my favortite, but an you change Philmoore's cape to blue, his cross to red, and his shirt & pants to white/light gray? Thanks so much.
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EDIT: Actually, the last banner's probably my favortite, but an you change Philmoore's cape to blue, his cross to red, and his shirt & pants to white/light gray? Thanks so much.
Sure, is this better? I just picked some random colors the first time around ;)

Also, I like the new strip very much too, it's funny :)

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Dude! Those are beautiful!

Also: The next comic's on it's way! I just have to scan it...
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Ima follow this comic. Awesomeness meets superfrequent updating.
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Why thank you, Randomizer. Which reminds me- here's the new comic!
(Don't expect any more today, but you never know ....)

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Also- I'd like to put the banners up (and, of course I will), but how do you get them to link to this thread?

EDIT::: I think there's something wrong with the Castle banner- Philmoore's cape is green again.
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Also- I'd like to put the banners up (and, of course I will), but how do you get them to link to this thread?
I don't know. The direct links to the images are

If that's what you're looking for.

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It's definately not, but since I replaced the old image with the new one, you might still have the old image cached. Try reloading the page (f5).

Also, promising sentence indeed, nice :)

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Also- I'd like to put the banners up (and, of course I will), but how do you get them to link to this thread?
(URL=InsertLinkHere)(IMG)InsertImageHere(/IMG)(/URL)
with [ ] instead of ( )

For example.
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I like simple black and white comic's. I will have to add this to the (fictional) list of web-comics threads I frequent.

However, there is no way to identify which character is which. That could become confusing.

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I like simple black and white comic's. I will have to add this to the (fictional) list of web-comics threads I frequent.

However, there is no way to identify which character is which. That could become confusing.
Don't worry. Soon Frederick and Philmoore will be the only Teutonic Knights in the comic, and you can tell them apart by height (Philmoore has a more elongated helmet.)

@Tiffanie: Thanks. Adding the banners!

@Han: Whoops. My bad.
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Since you seem to be messing with it, here you go, just quote & copy the code ;)

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Thanks! The banners are up!

EDIT: Though, I have to wonder- how'd you get 'The Two Brothers' in my handwriting on the banner?
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Very clever. And though I told you I wouldn't update anymore today, here it is anyway:

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I wish this comic good luck. It certainly looks promising.
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Crossing a frozen desert of skulls, yeah, I can't think of any way that could go wrong :) So five nice comics in a day? Awesome!

Also, I made a minor change to that first banner, there was just a black rope with nothing on it, so I moved the yoyo up a bit. Because the yoyo rocks ;)


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This = awesome.
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I like this. Do keep it up.

Each individual strips are rather short though. Nothing wrong with that, but it might be a little hard to manage on a forum if it manages to accumulate a sizable amount of strips.
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