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Old 10-08-2008, 10:45 PM   Top  -  End  -  #901
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I love it. I want to have wild raunchy liasons with that fic, that's how much I love it.

You are going to do more.

I hope.

Please?

EDIT: Oh, and the only continuity lapse that I can see is the lack of any mention of Down The Rabbit Hole, which, if you'll remember, was effectivly the biggest album of the decade. But I suppose that the fake Rolling Stone reviews could merely call him a fluke, break down his confidance even more.
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The cuts between scene were confusing, but, in my opinion, perfect...they underlined the surreality of the situation.

Is surreality a word?



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Old 10-08-2008, 11:35 PM   Top  -  End  -  #903
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I love it. I want to have wild raunchy liasons with that fic, that's how much I love it.

You are going to do more.

I hope.

Please?

EDIT: Oh, and the only continuity lapse that I can see is the lack of any mention of Down The Rabbit Hole, which, if you'll remember, was effectivly the biggest album of the decade. But I suppose that the fake Rolling Stone reviews could merely call him a fluke, break down his confidance even more.
I agree with Rairai.
Hehe. I said 'wuv'.

Its cute, and...you did make allusions to Pattie Boyd, wee.
Vespe, you have to be one of my favorite shippers. Right after Kneenibble And Helgraf and up there with Curly and Cristo.
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Old 10-09-2008, 12:18 AM   Top  -  End  -  #904
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The cuts between scene were confusing, but, in my opinion, perfect...they underlined the surreality of the situation.

Is surreality a word?



In any case.
Use "surrealism." Although, actually, surreality is technically a word, just not a very good one.

Personally, I felt myself getting lost a bit in the quirkiness of the fic, but I still thought it was enjoyable. I'd like to see something slightly more... coherent(?) from you next time, Vespe. You can clearly write, I just want something that doesn't leave me going "bwuh?".

edit: shoot! I'm supposed to be writing now! *scurries off*
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Ah! Fanfic! FANFIC!

*falls to the ground screaming and flailing arms wildly*

*stops moving*
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Old 10-09-2008, 12:37 AM   Top  -  End  -  #906
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Ah! Fanfic! FANFIC!

*falls to the ground screaming and flailing arms wildly*

*stops moving*
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Yeah, that's right. Fanfic. Involving forum members.
Actually, I'm not sure it even classifies as fanfic.. o.o
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Yeah, that's right. Fanfic. Involving forum members.
Actually, I'm not sure it even classifies as fanfic.. o.o
*fangirls over RHL, squee, glomp and ask for autograph, that sort of thing*

Fanfics now. Happy? =3
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Old 10-09-2008, 06:24 AM   Top  -  End  -  #908
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Surreal? Did someone say surreal?
PhoeKun/A strawberry hat
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Regarding the cuts, though, I suppose I bit off more than I could chew. I was trying to go for something like each song was someone's point of view, or whatever...in retrospect, pretty pretentious. Never let me do it again.

Oh, and you don't have to add this fic to the index. This is just me being silly.
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Very wonderful piece, Vespe (both of them!)

Puts my stuff to shame. I wish I could write in the same surrealist sense, but my prose is always extremely lean.

Bravo!

On a sadder note... I don't think I will have Chapter 2 finished before my wedding and subsequent honeymoon... so you guys probably won't get it until after the 19th...
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Very wonderful piece, Vespe (both of them!)

Puts my stuff to shame. I wish I could write in the same surrealist sense, but my prose is always extremely lean.

Bravo!

On a sadder note... I don't think I will have Chapter 2 finished before my wedding and subsequent honeymoon... so you guys probably won't get it until after the 19th...
Psh, you have got to get your priorities straight...
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Psh, you have got to get your priorities straight...
You know, I hear a lot of conflicting reports based on that very topic...
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Old 10-09-2008, 08:32 AM   Top  -  End  -  #912
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You know, I hear a lot of conflicting reports based on that very topic...
Well who ya gonna trust: your wife-to-be or some stranger (emphasis on strange) that you met on the internet?
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Well who ya gonna trust: your wife-to-be or some stranger (emphasis on strange) that you met on the internet?
Well... my wife isn't a nerd, a gamer, or a writer... She, in fact, is pretty much everything that I'm not...
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I got something done a bit earlier than expected. Hopefully, gentle readers, you can forgive a bit of exposition (especially towards the end).

Cast of Characters Thus Far:
Moon_Called
Terraoblivion
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Moon_Called/Terraoblivion
TwoBitWriter/Gem Flower

I'll add more ships in the future as the story progresses and more characters are introduced.

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Hooray! I've been shipped!
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Old 10-09-2008, 10:23 AM   Top  -  End  -  #916
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There are so many young girls in that fic, my brain nearly asploded.
But it was a pleasure to read nonetheless =D
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Old 10-09-2008, 10:29 AM   Top  -  End  -  #917
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And I sound like a real manly badass. I am going to have to up the ante a bit on Ghost_Warlock's character in my ship (introduced in Chapter 2...)
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I wanna be shipped with Gem...*pout*

If anybody will ship Gem/DD then I´l write the sequel to that Phoe/Sweetrein fic I made oh so long ago.
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My lords, my ladies, my reviewers, my readers, I present you with:

AMENshipping - a series of events, romances and happenings in 'Classic' AMEN.
(This one's Maggy/Vespe. Mostly.)
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If anybody will ship Gem/DD then I´l write the sequel to that Phoe/Sweetrein fic I made oh so long ago.
You should be writing that anyway. Stop teasing me...
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AMENshipping - a series of events, romances and happenings in 'Classic' AMEN.
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Classic AMEN? Shipping? Written by Curly? With me involved in a sweet, yet slightly brain-melting pairing?

Curly, may I simply state the obvious for a moment and say that you are not only made of epic win and not fail, but you are officially the greatest shipper of all time and I eagerly await the next installment.
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Curly makes me a happy fangirl.
Anything with Maggy being shipped makes me pleased.
And classic AMEN, which I stalked and never took part in >>
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I am such a typical fangirl v.v
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Classic AMEN? Shipping? Written by Curly? With me involved in a sweet, yet slightly brain-melting pairing?

Curly, may I simply state the obvious for a moment and say that you are not only made of epic win and not fail, but you are officially the greatest shipper of all time and I eagerly await the next installment.
AMENshipping can be done by anyone you know. And I've been threatening the thread with AMENshipping for who knows how many pages now, so it's time it came true. Glad you liked it though.
And if I've got room in my sig, can I sig part of that please?
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And if I've got room in my sig, can I sig part of that please?
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Curly, may I simply state the obvious for a moment and say that you are not only made of epic win and not fail, but you are officially the greatest shipper of all time and I eagerly await the next installment.
Thus proving that in shipping, as in all things, it pays to know your audience.
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I write what I find fun. Besides, Classic AMEN is just insane and perfect to write about.

And I will write that RGL (Harley)/Joker one even if it takes another thread and a half. And continue with my unnamed story too.

Maybe more Queenfics? Song ideas?
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Lazing on a Sunday Afternoon?

Also, I'm fresh out of fic ideas. Help?
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How so? Pairings or storyline?
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Pairings, but a storyline is fine too.
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:: cracks knuckles::
:: pulls out list::
Phoe/Rabbit
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Haruki/Rabbit
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Haruki/Magtok
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Kaelaroth/Randman
Randman/Jibar

...I have more >>
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