Collective and Zoin

Ichneumon · 02-08-2009, 11:56 AM

And I am proud to announce another webcomic:

Collective and Zoin

I'm not sure how many pages it will get and how far I'll take the story. It will largely depend on the feedback I get from the first page, if people like the "no speech"-thing and the lay-out etc. I have enough story for 4-8 pages (more might certainly come), but I don't feel like doing it when people don't like it.

(For this first image I will post it directly, when I've created multiple pages I will change it to direct links)

It might be a bit difficult to understad the story with no speech, but that is kind of the idea. It is partly guessing what happens and things become more clear when you read more pages.

The background consists of 4 triangles, symbolizing the 4 main characters of the comic, (3 of them are on the first page).

Lunaya · 02-09-2009, 02:11 PM

Definitely an A+ for originality.

I'm interested to see more.

Szilard · 02-09-2009, 07:14 PM

Another comic from Ichneumon, this is bound to be good.

I like the art style so far.

DarkCloud · 03-05-2009, 06:59 PM

I have enjoyed your previous work. But I apologize, I don't really understand what happened in the last two rows

As a side comment, is there something mathematical going on with the composition of who is in what panel?

Nameless · 03-06-2009, 05:45 AM

I... Don't get it.

I love the art though.

Lyinginbedmon · 03-06-2009, 05:54 AM

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Originally Posted by Ichneumon

(For this first image I will post it directly, when I've created multiple pages I will change it to direct links).

Let's see...Collective and Zoin meet, under amicable terms.

Zoin then encounters this third character.

Zoin and the third character appear to enter amicable cirumstances as well

The third character then harms or kills Collective

Zoin discovers Collective's remains (living or dead) and immediately suspects the third character

Szilard · 03-06-2009, 09:18 AM

Lying, I pretty much agree, except I think the yellow one is Collective, and the multicolored one is Zoin.

Uncle Festy · 03-07-2009, 11:15 PM

… Ichy?
ICHY!
*bullrushtackleglomp*

Lyinginbedmon · 03-07-2009, 11:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Szilard

Lying, I pretty much agree, except I think the yellow one is Collective, and the multicolored one is Zoin.

Explain

The multicoloured one appears to be multipled smaller creatures, hence "Collective".

Ichneumon · 03-08-2009, 03:34 AM

I really like this discussion, going on here and I'm certainly not going to confirm anything.

Now, here is the second page. I'm having some problems with time and such so I in all honesty do not know when page 3 will come. But it will come and it will be just as confusing as the first 2.

Nameless · 03-08-2009, 06:28 AM

I still don't get it...

Did they fuse or something?

CrimsonAngel · 03-08-2009, 08:21 AM

It would be alot easier to understand if they could talk.

The Neoclassic · 03-08-2009, 09:00 AM

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Originally Posted by CrimsonAngel

It would be alot easier to understand if they could talk.

Ah, but where'd be the fun in that?

I enjoy how the dude (presumably) got zombified.

Lyinginbedmon · 03-08-2009, 09:09 AM

Okay, so someone turned Collective into a kind of zombie, who then sought the brains and whatnot of Zoin and 3rd. Zoin and 3rd fled, and now seem to have literally combined forces.

Szilard · 03-08-2009, 11:08 AM

Yay! It'd being continued!

Ichneumon · 03-08-2009, 12:16 PM

To make things *a little bit* easier when discussing what happened I will give the names of the characters.

banjo1985 · 03-10-2009, 01:01 PM

I've just come across this and it intrigues me.

MOAR!!!!

Glad to see you around again Ichie.

Nameless · 03-10-2009, 01:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Ichneumon

To make things *a little bit* easier when discussing what happened I will give the names of the characters.

Did you just press random keys on the keyboard for that last one?

Ichneumon · 03-10-2009, 01:57 PM

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Originally Posted by banjo1985

I've just come across this and it intrigues me.

MOAR!!!!

Glad to see you around again Ichie.

I'm still alive and kicking.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nameless

Did you just press random keys on the keyboard for that last one?

Actually, I did.

Nameless · 03-10-2009, 02:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Ichneumon

Actually, I did.

Exxxxelent.

The Neoclassic · 03-10-2009, 06:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ichneumon

To make things *a little bit* easier when discussing what happened I will give the names of the characters.

Yay for names! I dunno why precisely, but I think the style and characters are, well, cute (in the hugs-and-adorable-ness sort of way, of course). Lack of words in the strips prolly helps that, heh. I can't wait for the next strip!

Ichneumon · 03-14-2009, 04:05 PM

And here comes page 3, with a cliff hanger, mainly because I have exams from the 23th till the 27th so it might take some time before the next one comes.

Lyinginbedmon · 03-14-2009, 04:41 PM

I know there was an undead being destroyed, and a "fusion HAA!" moment, but I'm not sure what Mr Death is up to over there.

banjo1985 · 03-15-2009, 06:21 AM

Almost impenetrable, impossible to know what's going on for sure...I love it.

Nameless · 03-15-2009, 07:32 AM

I LAWL'd.

Lemming · 03-15-2009, 08:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Lyinginbedmon

I know there was an undead being destroyed, and a "fusion HAA!" moment, but I'm not sure what Mr Death is up to over there.

He's blowing a bubblegum bubble.

Elder Tsofu · 03-15-2009, 08:40 AM

It looks like they got shrinked in the last panel till <1/4 of their eariler size.

Uncle Festy · 03-15-2009, 10:34 AM

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Originally Posted by Lemming

He's blowing a bubblegum bubble.

I mean, yeah, duh!