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01-18-2009, 11:25 PM
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Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
Hi there,
this is my little side project that I started due to a lack of activity on A.B.R. As far as how often I'll update, I'll start with two a week and if I gain a bit of popularity, I'll try and do three a week. ( this first comic doesn't count. I'll make the first on the update schedule tomorrow )
Well, I hope you enjoy!
[spoiler]Comic 1 Irony is fun
Comic 2 Fishy
Comic 3 Pwned and salary
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01-19-2009, 09:15 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic )
Nice.
I'll keep readin.
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01-19-2009, 09:57 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic )
I'm reading too, but I probably won't comment unless I find something that seems really wrong to me.
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01-19-2009, 11:19 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
Comic number 2 is UP!
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01-19-2009, 11:24 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
I lol'd at that last line! Nice scenery.
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01-19-2009, 11:26 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
The plain gray bodies are somewhat boring, perhaps you could add a little detail or
something to them? And remember to bend ze legs when they're walking. Seems to be an okay comic so far though. But 2 strips isn't really enough to judge.
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01-19-2009, 11:51 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
I intend to remedy this. At the moment I'm drawing up scenery for the next comic.
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01-19-2009, 05:29 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
In comic two, you've drawn axes and called them halberds.
Otherwise, it seems far and above your ABR work so far.
01-19-2009, 06:12 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
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In comic two, you've drawn axes and called them halberds.
Otherwise, it seems far and above your ABR work so far.
Nitpicker, the only difference is a pointy bit on top. Okay that pointy bit might give the wielder access to a totally different fighting style but it's still just a pointy bit.
Also that would have been long axes or possibly pole axes and not just axes.
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01-19-2009, 07:01 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
Well, technically a halberd should be like a spear with an axeblade on it, and maybe a little bit longer then the ones shown.
Edit: And I mean it has both spear and axe.
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01-19-2009, 07:14 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
Eh, I'll fix my temp after i finish comic 3.
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01-20-2009, 02:30 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
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Nitpicker, the only difference is a pointy bit on top. Okay that pointy bit might give the wielder access to a totally different fighting style but it's still just a pointy bit.
And the pointy bit on the back!
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Also that would have been long axes or possibly pole axes and not just axes.
No, pole-axes also have the missing pointy bits.
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01-22-2009, 09:22 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
comic three is done. Hope you like it.
I know certain people look like they're missing arms, its just that the backgrounds are dark and where I put the arm nodes.
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01-25-2009, 10:04 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
I am intrigued. I'll let you know if it needs anything else or if you call for some info.
I will remain read this comic as well.
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01-25-2009, 02:53 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
this is good
Can't garentee that ill be following every comic... but ill try to keep up
like the fact that the halberd guys are so badess at CQC despite having reach weapons
(mind you that goes against all I know about spears est from Dynasty Warriors...)
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01-25-2009, 03:48 PM
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Hehe, Thats what they do Cause they are just that good
they did say they could do whatever they want.
edit: A nice banner for you guys
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03-28-2009, 11:17 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
Nice job =)
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03-28-2009, 11:31 PM
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Nice job =)
Huh, nobody has posted here for a while, last comic came out like a month ago. Does not seem to say why...
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03-31-2009, 07:31 PM
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Huh, nobody has posted here for a while, last comic came out like a month ago. Does not seem to say why...
Ops! Sorry about that! I didnt notice that...
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03-31-2009, 07:44 PM
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Ops! Sorry about that! I didnt notice that...
Naw it's fine its not old enough to be thread necromancy.
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03-31-2009, 08:55 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
...And it can't be necromancy in this subforum.
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03-31-2009, 09:34 PM
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...And it can't be necromancy in this subforum.
...Oh, crap forgot.
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03-31-2009, 09:40 PM
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Only if it is done by the author of the webcomic though.
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04-16-2009, 08:06 PM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
sorry about my laziness. I'll work on remaking my temps but because of a virus I recently got I lost my temps. I'll make a few fillers to satisfy your hungry. Not that you are hungry.. Hehe
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04-17-2009, 04:58 AM
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Re: Honor in Battle ( oots style comic ) New comic up!
Looks good, I'll be watching this.
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