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Old 01-15-2010, 06:43 PM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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Default The Preacher (Base Class, PEACH)

They say the gods are dead, but I know they are not. With my texts I know of them, and with my voice I call upon their power.
-Father Crembrite, Preacher.


The Preacher
Requirements: Non-neutral on at least one axis.
Hit Die: D8
Skill Points: 4+int (x4 at first level)
Skills: Concentration (Con), Craft (Int), Diplomacy (cha), Heal (Wis), Know Arcana (Int), Know History (Int), Know Religion (int), know The Planes (Int), Perform (cha), Profession (Wis), Spellcraft (Int), Survival (Wis), Ride (Dex).
LevelBase Attack<br>BonusFort SaveRef SaveWill SaveSpecial0lvl1st2nd3rd4th5th6th7th8th9th
1st
+0
+2
+0
+2
Turn or Rebuke Undead53        
2nd
+1
+3
+0
+3
Divine Grace64-       
3rd
+2
+3
+1
+3
Lay on Hands65--      
4th
+3
+4
+1
+4
663--     
5th
+3
+4
+1
+4
Style Specialization664---    
6th
+4
+5
+2
+5
6653---   
7th
+5
+5
+2
+5
 6664----  
8th
+6/+1
+6
+2
+6
66653-----
9th
+6/+1
+6
+3
+6
66664-----
10th
+7/+2
+7
+3
+7
Improved Style Specialization666653----
11th
+8/+3
+7
+3
+7
666664----
12th
+9/+4
+8
+4
+8
6666653---
13th
+9/+4
+8
+4
+8
6666664---
14th
+10/+5
+9
+4
+9
66666653--
15th
+11/+6/+1
+9
+5
+9
66666664--
16th
+12/+7/+2
+10
+5
+10
666666653-
17th
+12/+7/+2
+10
+5
+10
666666664-
18th
+13/+8/+3
+11
+6
+11
6666666653
19th
+14/+9/+4
+11
+6
+11
6666666664
20th
+15/+10/+5
+12
+6
+12
Prophet’s voice6666666665
Class Features
Weapon and Armor proficiency: The Preacher is proficient with all simple weapons and one martial weapon of their choice, they are proficient with light armor, but not with any sort of shield.
Spellcasting: At the beginning of each day, the Preacher chooses a style, either Good Sheppard, Fire and Brimstone, or Wandering Pilgrim. The style they choose provides them with a list of known spells for the day that they can cast from spontaneously. Preacher casting is Charisma based.
Turn or Rebuke Undead: as the Cleric ability
Divine Grace: As the Paladin ability
Lay on Hands: as the Paladin ability.
Style Specialization: At 5th level, the Preacher may chose one of the following abilities which they gain access to on any day they are using the indicated Style.
Smite The Wicked: A Preacher who selects this ability and is using the Fire and Brimstone style gains a number of Smite uses (As the paladin ability, but altered depending on the Preacher’s alignment. If the preacher is non-neutral on two axis, he must choose what alignment to smite at the beginning of each day) equal to their character level /3. This can be applied to spells and ranged attacks.
Protected Sheppard: a Preacher who selects this ability and is using the Good Sheppard style adds their charisma modifier as a luck bonus to AC.
Unending Journey: You gain a bonus equal to your charisma modifier on all fort saves to resist exhaustion from Forced Marches, or environmental effects, and on all Survival checks while using Wandering Pilgrim.

Improved Style Specialization: At 10th level, the Preacher may chose one of the following abilities which they gain access to on any day they are using the indicated Style. They may also choose one of the 5th level abilities.
The End is Nigh: A Preacher who selects this ability and is using the Fire and Brimstone style a preacher with this ability may use their Turning ability on anything with an alignment opposed to theirs. Unlike normal turning, the targets may make a Will Save (DC 13+ Preacher’s Charisma modifier) to resist.
Guide the flock: A Preacher who selects this ability and is using the Good Sheppard style may, as a full round action, provide divine guidance to their allies. Any ally within 30 feet who is capable of hearing the Preacher gains an insight bonus equal to the Preacher’s charisma modifier on attack rolls, saves, and skill checks.
Unstoppable pilgrimage: A Preacher who selects this ability and is using the Wandering Pilgrim style is considered to be under the effects of a Freedom of Movement spell for as long as that style is used.

Prophet’s Voice: At 20th level the Preacher gains a massive following, if the Preacher does not already have the Leadership feat, they gain it as a bonus feat, if they do, their leadership score goes up by 5.
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Good Sheppard
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Homebrewers Note: This was made with the intent of being used in a western setting I'm working on where there are no clerics. What's a western without the crazy Badass preacher, so here he is.
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Old 01-16-2010, 01:00 AM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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Default Re: The Preacher (Base Class, PEACH)

First of all, level 20 is mean to the player. It takes away all 9th level spell slots.

Leadership...overpowered.

Unending journey and protected shepherd both say they add your Charisma score to checks/AC. That could easily be abused. Make it Charisma modifier.

Otherwise, you get:
Level 1 preacher -- 15 Charisma
Level 4 preacher -- 16 Charisma
Level 5 preacher -- 16 Charisma, added to (let's go with protected shepherd for now) AC. So, assuming you're wearing the best armor out there (minus magic), you're wearing a chain shirt. +4 AC. 10 + 4 + 0 + 16 + 2 (assuming 14-15 Dex) + 0 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 32 AC. That's a 5th level character with 32 AC--unoptimized.
Add in magic items, and you get crazier. Add in optimization, and we're talking crazy.

Some fluff would be nice. Also, why do they get d8 hit dice? It seems like they would be more like the cloistered cleric (d6 HD, 6 + Int skills/level).
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Old 01-16-2010, 01:02 AM   Top  -  End  -  #3
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First of all, level 20 is mean to the player. It takes away all 9th level spell slots.

Leadership...overpowered.

Unending journey and protected shepherd both say they add your Charisma score to checks/AC. That could easily be abused. Make it Charisma modifier.

Otherwise, you get:
Level 1 preacher -- 15 Charisma
Level 4 preacher -- 16 Charisma
Level 5 preacher -- 16 Charisma, added to (let's go with protected shepherd for now) AC. So, assuming you're wearing the best armor out there (minus magic), you're wearing a chain shirt. +4 AC. 10 + 4 + 0 + 16 + 2 (assuming 14-15 Dex) + 0 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 32 AC. That's a 5th level character with 32 AC--unoptimized.
Add in magic items, and you get crazier. Add in optimization, and we're talking crazy.

Some fluff would be nice. Also, why do they get d8 hit dice? It seems like they would be more like the cloistered cleric (d6 HD, 6 + Int skills/level).
It was supposed to be Modifier, I just wrote it as "Score" because I'm stupid.

Thanks for pointing that out.

Edit: The Spelling of Shepard was what Word kept throwing in my face for some reason. It didn't look right, but I was tired of those red lines mocking me.
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Cool class.
I was going to complain about the Shepherd misspelling, but someone already did. XD
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Old 04-27-2010, 10:01 PM   Top  -  End  -  #5
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Sweet class, but it would be cool if the style specialization leveled with you, maybe as a fraction of you preacher levels rather than as just your charisma mod, specifically the end is nigh class ability is kind of weak at higher levels, since you have to roll to turn and then they get a save.
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