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Old 06-05-2010, 02:13 AM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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Welcome to this playground inspired story. The ongoing storyline is unique, however the characters are named after fellow playgrounders themselves. If you are new at reading this and would like to join the cast, simply let me know by posting down below. Otherwise, please enjoy reading:

Paladin Academy


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Comments and critiques are appreciated.

Minor note: If you want to appear in the story, just post saying you want in. I'll put you in somehow or another. I won't turn anyone away. Additionally, you must let me know what sort of paladin crystal power you want to have. Also, give 4 back-up powers as well. I got this story planned out quite far and I need to have some things to fall back on. Also, if your account name is something that sounds like a fancy commercial product (Which is very likely) or some long or weird name, could you please come up with a nickname version that sounds like it could be a real name. I'd like to keep this story as real sounding as possible and the first way to do that is to start with everyone's names.

However, you're not limited to only being a paladin. If you want to be someone else, I have an entire list of non-paladin positions that need to be filled up.

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*(If anything is wrong or missing, please inform me. Thank you)*

Another minor note: If you see any errors in the stories such as spelling mistakes or grammer, please point them out to me with how to correct them. It would make the stories better for new readers. Thank you.

Also, helping me think up titles for each parts would be appreciated as well.
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Old 06-05-2010, 02:14 AM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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Paladin Academy: Part 1
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Old 06-05-2010, 02:19 AM   Top  -  End  -  #6
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Old 06-05-2010, 02:22 AM   Top  -  End  -  #9
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Old 06-05-2010, 02:23 AM   Top  -  End  -  #10
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Paladin Academy: Part 10
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Old 06-05-2010, 10:44 AM   Top  -  End  -  #12
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You ought to post these on the Playground Writers Workshop.
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You ought to post these on the Playground Writers Workshop.
Well thank you. But I decided to put these in their own thread since I have alot of parts to still post.
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Hm. I'm interested to see where this goes. One thing though: There are a bunch of typoes.
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Old 06-05-2010, 05:08 PM   Top  -  End  -  #18
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Ya, I'm aware of the typos. Though I will always miss some no matter how many times I review it.
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Great story! So, she has the ability to either manipulate or sense soundwaves? Sonar? Anyway, glad to have this back!
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Yup! That's a good guess!
(Considering the series started with me playing my viola, it makes perfect sense)

Speaking of powers, "Power of the Heart" is a pretty cool name.
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I'd prefer "Power of Liver" myself. That's several hundred times more functions that the heart.
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Aha! That power would force someone to go to the bathroom whenever you feel like.
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I think that would be the power of kidneys wouldn't it?
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I think that would be the power of kidneys wouldn't it?
Possibly. Then what would the liver do?

Also, I'll post part 12 soon.
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Viola had a flash of several things she wanted to do in the future and her crystal being close by for every one of them. She shook her head to clear the images.
"But...But that's not fair!"
Like Monopoly. [/inside joke]
Or Swimming.
I wonder how you go swimming with the Crystal. Maybe you hold it in your mouth?

I feel sorta sorry for Penny.
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Like Monopoly. [/inside joke]
Or Swimming.
I wonder how you go swimming with the Crystal. Maybe you hold it in your mouth?

I feel sorta sorry for Penny.
Errm...fashion a circlet to hold it in to leave your hands free? Or something

All in all very interesting chapter again, Silver! I am glad this story is back to updating
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Yyayayayayay!! I laugh at Viola a lot!

I actually thought that when he wa looking over at her in the not friendly way he was checking her out. Not in an inapropriate way, more of in a teenage crush kind of way.
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So, what of the side effects? What does everyone think of them now?

Edit: Oh, and I added in some titles in the Table of Contents spoiler box to name the parts better. I'll probably put the titles in the parts themselves later.

Part 13 will be up soon.
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