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2009-11-19, 03:04 PM (ISO 8601)
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Broken world
Last edited by Rademijas; 2009-11-25 at 11:25 AM.
Here you can read my new comic "Broken world"!
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2009-11-25, 11:20 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Broken world
sorry for doublepost but no one posted here!
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Have a fun and write!
EDIT: For gods sake,can't you write any comment?Last edited by Rademijas; 2009-11-25 at 01:39 PM.
Here you can read my new comic "Broken world"!
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2009-11-25, 03:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Broken world
Oh look, a comic about adventurers in a fantasy setting. What an intriguing premise. Never seen this before.
...I can't really tell what's going on in these comics, to be honest.
Also, people don't tend to comment unless we have comics to comment on. Unless the story has been going on for a while, we don't really care about out-of-comic character bios. I recommend alerting everyone when you've made a comic with a new post. Don't care about double posting. Triple post only if you need to.Last edited by Green-Shirt Q; 2009-11-25 at 03:40 PM.
AVATAR BATTLE ROYALE!
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2009-11-25, 04:07 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Broken world
...I can't really tell what's going on in these comics, to be honest.
And thanks for your recommends...
If I have time, new strip will be here tomorrowHere you can read my new comic "Broken world"!
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2009-11-25, 04:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Broken world
Hmm. I think this may have to do with not having English as your first language or something, but the dialouge in your comics is a bit...weird.
For instance, the first thing that comes to mind: when you use the phrase "Let them to me", I think what you mean is "Let me at them".
If you want, you could PM dialouge to me, first, and I could make sure it's alright. I'd be willing to do that.
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2009-11-25, 04:36 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Broken world
Here you can read my new comic "Broken world"!
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2009-11-25, 04:54 PM (ISO 8601)
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2009-11-25, 04:56 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Broken world
Still, though, I'd be happy to help make sure your comics are good, dialouge-wise. I have lots of experiance as a grammer cop, you know.
I'm sure if I tried to make comics in French, they would turn out bloody awful...no matter how good my French teacher is. (I know you're not french, just an example.)
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2009-11-25, 05:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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2009-11-25, 06:36 PM (ISO 8601)
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2009-11-25, 06:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Canada, Eh?
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Re: Broken world
Well, it looks good, but the plot seems too close to OotS. Especially the first comic.
A webcomic by Sahaar and I, Shadow of Fire. Read it!
Giant in the Playground Worldbuilding Project.
Avatar by James Cameron. Or Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko. Oh wait, I mean Tom Siddell.
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2009-11-26, 10:45 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Broken world
Ok, my english teacher is sure proud of my english.
Well, it looks good, but the plot seems too close to OotS. Especially the first comic.Last edited by Rademijas; 2009-11-27 at 02:56 PM.
Here you can read my new comic "Broken world"!