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Thread: Inconsistency-webcomic
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2007-12-09, 02:45 PM (ISO 8601)
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Inconsistency-webcomic
So, this is my new webcomic. Enjoy, updates once a week, I hope. The story changed a lot since the style thread I opened earlier this week.
Setting
It's set in a strange universe where 6 totalitaristic states control its seemingly 2-dimentional citizens. The nations are in a perpetual war with each other and use these "wire"networks to spy on the other nations and quickly transport the information to the capital of each state.
Story: Heartbeat
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Comic 1
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Comic 2
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Comic 3
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Comic 4
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Comic 5
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Comic 6
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Comic 7
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Comic 8: Fire
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Comic 9: Chase
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Comic 10: The Same
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Comic 11: Heartbeat
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Comic 12: Justice
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Comic 13: Map
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Comic 14: Changes
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Comic 15: Luck
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Comic 16: Nothing
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Comic 17: Guilty
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Last edited by Ichneumon; 2007-12-26 at 05:00 PM.
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2007-12-09, 02:52 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Inconsistency-web comic
The first one doesn't work
Or is it just me again...
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2007-12-09, 03:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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I'm seeing them alright Nameless. And I must say, I'm quite interested already
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2007-12-09, 03:17 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Inconsistency-web comic
Oh there ir is :)
Look's quite good
Although I'm not understanding the endings...
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2007-12-09, 05:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Inconsistency-web comic
The way they talk reminds me of the Transformers in that recent 3 hour movie and the things that made the monoliths from the 2001 series, but that doesn't matter. Cool comic.
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ABR: SDSB ArchiveSpoiler
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2007-12-09, 05:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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I dont know what it is but I am strangely drawn towards it (guess the quote )
nice comic...really inconsistent (it is a compliment btw)**** Photobucket ; RIP avatars
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2007-12-09, 06:33 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Revolving around Uranus
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2007-12-10, 04:38 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'm confused but intrigued...I'll withold my judgement until I've seen more.
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2007-12-10, 11:51 AM (ISO 8601)
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2007-12-10, 12:36 PM (ISO 8601)
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You'll need some pretty good dialogues to make up for the lack of facial expression...But I like it.
...Is that a map?- When danger reared it's ugly head, it bravely turned it's tail and fled.
Ah, the Socratic Method. The best way we have of teaching everything-apart from juggling chainsaws.
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2007-12-10, 12:58 PM (ISO 8601)
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It looks like a screenshot from an old Atari console game...
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2007-12-10, 03:21 PM (ISO 8601)
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2007-12-10, 07:38 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Inconsistency-web comic
know we know what the orange zone is.
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2007-12-11, 12:48 PM (ISO 8601)
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No offense but..I don't get it all. What is it, some rectangles talking?
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2007-12-11, 12:50 PM (ISO 8601)
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It reminds me of flatland - which was... interesting.
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2007-12-11, 01:05 PM (ISO 8601)
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I was influenced by both Flatland and 1984 when I first wrote this story, my story is set on an other dimension with 6 totalitaristic states controlling its seemingly 2-dimentional citizens. The nations are in a pepetual war with each other and these "wire" networks are used to spy on the other nations and quickly transport the information to the capital of each state.
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2007-12-11, 03:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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3 comics in and you already have some fanart!
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2007-12-11, 04:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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2007-12-11, 05:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Yeril, that is way more awesome than any of my comics yet.
And I can tell you this, the name will link into the plot quite smoothly.
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2007-12-11, 05:53 PM (ISO 8601)
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Wow. This comic looks quite impressive.
I mean plotwise, off course. The art is not badly done, but it's still just blocks.
But the plot? It intrigues me. Seems quite original too, and I have no idea how it will work yet (which is more than I can say for most webcomics).
I'll be watching how this develops.Avatar by the illustrious Dr. Bath.
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2007-12-12, 09:52 AM (ISO 8601)
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Comic number 4
Comic Four: Nitric Acid
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2007-12-12, 09:54 AM (ISO 8601)
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"Why did you send two?"
"There are two wires"
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2007-12-16, 11:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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New update...
Comic Five: Downfall
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2007-12-16, 11:32 AM (ISO 8601)
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think Green wants to say something in the lines of: "The world will be destroyed.Good thing no one will blame us..."
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2007-12-16, 12:58 PM (ISO 8601)
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comic 5 is the best one yet
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2007-12-16, 01:43 PM (ISO 8601)
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Another 2 updates!
Comic Six: Flux
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Comic Seven: Map
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EDIT: I will also reveal the name of this story arc: HeartbeatLast edited by Ichneumon; 2007-12-16 at 04:07 PM.
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2007-12-18, 12:07 PM (ISO 8601)
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This is a bump and an update. I can see people are reading (or at least opening) this. Please comment....
Comic Eight: Fire
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2007-12-18, 12:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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Think you have a unique way to craft the plot...wonder which wire is wrong...
think the second one, since killing all the orange zone would take some effort IMO...but I could be wrong.**** Photobucket ; RIP avatars
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2007-12-18, 12:36 PM (ISO 8601)
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Let's see, it would be more difficult to destroy the orange zone than for a mistake in intelligence to be made, so I'm going to go with Occam's razor and say that the orange zone survived.
However, I'm certainly intrigued about what happens next!
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2007-12-18, 12:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Inconsistency-webcomic
I'm finding this brilliant so far.