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Thread: A Story Of Death
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2007-11-20, 03:21 PM (ISO 8601)
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He's not Death at the moment, he's just a mage.
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2007-11-20, 04:29 PM (ISO 8601)
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Bleehhhhhh, Here's Issue 8, my first Fireworks comic, it took me hours to do, hopefully as I get better, it'll take less time. I hope you like:
(For some reason, photobucket has decided to make the writing a bit blury)
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Thoughts?
EDIT: Oh, and BedMon... I uhhh... Kinda coppied your table... sorry... It was kind'a sub-contious...
EDIT... Again...: Oh cripe nuggets... I forgot to give him his little beard...Last edited by Nameless; 2007-11-20 at 04:42 PM.
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2007-11-21, 08:12 AM (ISO 8601)
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I saaaaaiiiiidddd.... THOUGHTS?!?!?!?
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2007-11-21, 08:14 AM (ISO 8601)
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Thoughts? I'd like a tasty sammich.
Oh, you mean about the comic? It looks much better in FireworksAvatar and photo by Dr. Bath.
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2007-11-21, 08:15 AM (ISO 8601)
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Certainly more smooth corners and curves than with Paint.
I suppose it's possible that there was a wall around the city prior to the Remember period that was knocked down, but the present wall is a dark blue colour.Last edited by Lyinginbedmon; 2007-11-21 at 08:16 AM.
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2007-11-21, 08:20 AM (ISO 8601)
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Yeah, the original was white
Also, sorry about the no colour where the grass should be... and the speach bubbles... I'm still trying to figure it all out.
Most likly by the time I do figure it all out, my free trial will end.
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2007-11-21, 02:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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A short Issue 9:
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EDIT: THe speach bubble came out... ****e... Couldn't be botherd to eddit it 'cos I'm lazy.Last edited by Nameless; 2007-11-21 at 03:01 PM.
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2007-11-21, 05:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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Well.... Slamon has a Banner... and so Does BedMon... and ABR... so it's only natural that I steal their idea make one too!
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2007-11-21, 07:14 PM (ISO 8601)
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2007-11-22, 01:12 PM (ISO 8601)
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Lol
Anyways here's Issue 10 :
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DUN DUN DUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!
I'm starting to get the hang of Fireworks now, maybe I'll be able to improve my drawings... hopefully before my free trial runs out...
EDIT: Okay from here on things should hopefully start to get a bit more interesting, sorry that the comics are so short.Last edited by Nameless; 2007-11-22 at 01:16 PM.
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2007-11-22, 02:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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*Gasp* Oh my god! They killed Tyler! You bastards!
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2007-11-22, 02:08 PM (ISO 8601)
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I blame communism!
EDIT: I also blame them for my lack of correct spellings.Last edited by Nameless; 2007-11-22 at 02:09 PM.
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2007-11-23, 10:06 AM (ISO 8601)
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That was the the last Issue of Chapter I, Part 1...
Now for Chapter I, part 2
(Chapters are kind of like books and parts are like the chapters in a book. Each chapter is split into to however many parts and each part is split into however many Issues.)
EDIT: A new chapter will begine if when a new thread startsLast edited by Nameless; 2007-11-23 at 12:33 PM.
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2007-11-23, 11:35 AM (ISO 8601)
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Books? How many trends am I setting...
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2007-11-23, 12:11 PM (ISO 8601)
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Alright sorry, I'll say... story? That better? What about episode? It doesn't matter anyway, it's called a chapter... CHAPTER I SAY! I was just trying to explain what I meant buy "Chapter I, Part 2" Because chapters arn't usually split into parts.
EDIT: I didn't even realise that yours were called books untill just now, so uhh, sorry...
The whole under attack story thing, I've had planned for a while, I havent really bothered making one because I didn't really think it was necessery, When you started making your one, I thought that If I made my basic idea for a story into a prelude of your one, it would fit togethor quite well. If you don't want me to, I'll happely sepporate it.
Anyway Part 2 is basectly set 2 later... Heh, get it... 2 years... part 2... heh...
CONGRATUALTIONS NAMELESS, YOU WIN FIRST PLACE FOR WORST GAG EVER!
-> (stolen from Nevermind the buzzcocks)Last edited by Nameless; 2007-11-23 at 12:37 PM.
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2007-11-23, 05:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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Here are some of the new Charictors for Part 2:
The Earth, water fire and wind elementalists.
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2007-11-23, 05:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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Avatar references ahoy...
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2007-11-23, 06:03 PM (ISO 8601)
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Wonder why fire has straight hair...
**** Photobucket ; RIP avatars
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2007-11-24, 02:23 AM (ISO 8601)
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2007-11-24, 05:32 AM (ISO 8601)
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usually fire is all over the place, with spikes and stuff...
**** Photobucket ; RIP avatars
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2007-11-24, 06:16 AM (ISO 8601)
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2007-11-24, 06:32 AM (ISO 8601)
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Issue 11:
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Oh cripe... I forgot to finish the speach bubble on pannle 6... sorry...
EDIT: It's a bit hard to read, but the bit in black say's: "Arcania- 2 years after the siege:"Last edited by Nameless; 2007-11-24 at 06:34 AM.
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2007-11-24, 06:48 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'm worried Arcania is going to have a reputation for falling with bravado, but this looks good
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2007-11-24, 06:58 AM (ISO 8601)
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2007-11-25, 09:38 AM (ISO 8601)
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Thoughts? This is a good strip, lots of potential. Aside from the "occasional" spelling error, the only other thing I could suggest is moving all of the strips to the first post on page one.
Keep it up. Please. (Weird... My keyboard shifted into Dvorak mode for no reason.)Thanks to Ceika (X2), Yeril, Holammer and Dr. Bath for the Avatars!
New Avatar, new form of self-destruction! Ceika is Beyond Awesome!
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2007-11-25, 04:33 PM (ISO 8601)
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Sooo. all of part 1 is some sort of flashback?
Bad way to put it in dude.
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2007-11-25, 04:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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It's only bad if the rest is terrible.
@V The entire story is a flashback! It's getting so much use because it generally worksLast edited by Lyinginbedmon; 2007-11-25 at 05:36 PM.
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2007-11-25, 05:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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huh?
no, its jest that all the "flashback" thingy is getting quite common these days, everybody is doing it.
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2007-11-25, 06:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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The only flashback I've used up untill now is in issue 11...
And thanks
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2007-11-25, 07:25 PM (ISO 8601)
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He wakes up and it was all a dream..
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