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    I like the beginning. I wan't to see more.

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    Have a nice trip; see you next fall.

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    Looking great ! I like the fact that you used a different perspective when the guy fell. May your comic will enjoy a lot of strips !

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    Thank you for the kind words.
    And I've made the comics first banner (I will make more at a later date)


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    Not half bad. I can envision this lasting a while.

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    You may of have completely ripped off The Matrix, but this is pretty damn awesome.

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    You know Nameless, I never actually thort of the Matrix whilst doing this comic...
    but now you mention it, I must admit there are quite a lot of similarities.....
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    New comic:
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    (sorry for any complications)
    [hr]will except auditions for cameos (ABR people will have to PM me with an explanation of why they would be on another planet almost 2000 years before the events of FFF)
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    Poor guy.

    Also, Jumper seems to be quite calm regarding his back.
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    You accept cameos ? Wonderful !

    *sends PM*

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    CAMEO FOR NAMELESS! CAMEO FOR NAMELESS!

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    *Sends cameo PM*
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    Default Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)

    Looks neat so far. But I disagree with the "whole episode in one spoiler"-layout. It will make it incredibly bothersome to read when you have to find where in that huge column of comic you left last time so you can go on reading. It's already becoming apparent with only the second strip. And it surely wont get any better with ten of them. So rather put sub-spoilers for each page into the episode spoiler.

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    I've just realised that no matter what I do, the third comic comes out wrong
    In the last pannel it says:
    "...I was going to send YOU help..."
    when its actually meant to be:
    "...I was going to send FOR help..."
    This is what it's meant to look like:
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    Um... which comic has "send you help"? I don't see it...
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    Default Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)

    The one in the archive
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    My laptop is not a happy laptop at the moment...
    Ive just booted it up for the last 20 mins and got the BSOD ever 4 or 5 mins

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    How very odd, because they all say "send you help" for me...
    what does everyone else see them as?
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    Default Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)

    They all look the same to me; "Send for help".


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    Coo', I like the sci-fi theme. Can't wait to see more.

    Not to sound like a callous ass hole, but when exactly will my cameo be?
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    Man, every time you think 'could this stuff POSSIBLY get any cooler,' Vulion takes yet another level in Badass.
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    Thanks Vulion, you're awesome.
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    Also, I'm surprised this thread hasn't exploded due to over-awesomeness yet Vul.

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    *Checks PM inbox*
    you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Fayt View Post
    *Checks PM inbox*
    you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...
    ...AMNESIA DUST!!!

    *runs off*
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    Man, every time you think 'could this stuff POSSIBLY get any cooler,' Vulion takes yet another level in Badass.
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    Thanks Vulion, you're awesome.
    Vulion, Awesome Incarnate, coming to an art request near you.
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    Also, I'm surprised this thread hasn't exploded due to over-awesomeness yet Vul.

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    Grem's not gonna be happy...
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    oooh... Shiny Comic.
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    That "to the hospital" banner should have expressions.
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    Quote Originally Posted by memnarch View Post
    Grem's not gonna be happy...
    Nah, I think I can fit it in. Ovu Monobi has numerous resources, it wouldn't be that hard to send one of his followers to another world.

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    Yes it's that time of the week again!
    Happy times!
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    Say, this looks similar to The Emperor's room in Star Wars.


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    Prediction; my cameo character will either; A) never be seen/heard of again, or B) end up dead.

    Another prediction; Aaron and Fayte will have multiple run-ins with this hunter android, each time worse than the last.
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    I like it i like it alot

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    sorry for missing not 1 but 2 updates.........
    but I'll make it up to you guys tomorrow...
    Ive been having a...... time...
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