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Old 11-04-2009, 03:55 AM   #1
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Default (3.5) Jaegermonsters

So, for those of you not familiar with 'em, Jaegers are, well...

a race of interestingly pigmented augmented humans with claws and sharp pointy teeth who are also fearless supersoldiers.

As far as I know, though, no one has made a template or race for them for 3.X D&D though.

So... let's see...
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I brought them up in the other sub-forum to see if anyone was familiar with any homebrew attempts, and some suggestions have been made.

As it stands bugbear and feral seem like the best jumping off points to start with an attempt to me.

Any thoughts? I'm about to pass out, so I'll be back in a bit once I've collected myself.
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Old 11-04-2009, 04:41 AM   #2
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Just one.

Nize Hat!

They seem to live essentially forever, as they can remember fighting at least two hundred years back, and they don't feel pain. Ever. Even when you cut of their arms.
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Old 11-04-2009, 04:52 AM   #3
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Don't they also have superhuman strength?

To make them even vaguely playable as a race, they'll need high LA and abysmal WIS (wouldn't say INT was as bad).
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Old 11-04-2009, 05:05 AM   #4
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Default Re: (3.5) Jaegermonsters

A quick search of this forum yielded this result:

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38470 by NemoUtopia on 03-24-2007.

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I'd give them CR 1. The LA is probably +1.

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Old 11-04-2009, 06:12 AM   #5
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Default Re: (3.5) Jaegermonsters

Living Construct (the article even class them constructs)
They definitely have scent
It says they can take and deal incredible amounts of damage. Perhaps an immunity to pain effects, some mild DR, and if not high Str, perhaps enhanced criticals with all their attacks.
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Old 11-04-2009, 11:19 AM   #6
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I still say that they only have RHD, considering most people in Girl Genius are 1st level, which makes the Jaegermonsters, with their RHD, seem to be able to take huge amounts of damage in comparison to normal humans. This should be accompanied by a Con bonus, definitely, but DR, Regen or Fast Healing is not evident.
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Old 11-04-2009, 06:45 PM   #7
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The two HD more than make up for the benefits of two lost mental stats. I vote no LA in light of the HD.

This is definitely well thought out.

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Old 11-04-2009, 11:43 PM   #8
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Hmm. To that I'd add that if they have 5 ranks in Knowledge: Nobility, then they can take a crack at identifying an individual as a nob of X house without having to be personally familiar with other members of said house.

I'm inclined to agree that with racial hit die, level adjustments usually don't need to be mucked with, since it raises the ECL so they level slower anyway.

I'm gonna go read the Eberron stuff on living constructs to refresh my memory on what living constructs get.
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Old 11-05-2009, 04:28 AM   #9
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Living constructs basically gain half the construct immunities without losing their con score. They can be healed at half efficiency, but repaired like constructs (which is why only heterodynes can do it!).
It seems to fit, really. Also, can a +4 con bonus justify ripping a Jäger's arm off?
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Old 11-06-2009, 01:57 AM   #10
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Honestly, the +4 str , +4 con seemed wimpy. Heterodynes don't think game balance. Give them 3 HD and boost it to +7 str, +7 con.
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Old 11-06-2009, 02:29 PM   #11
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Honestly, the +4 str , +4 con seemed wimpy. Heterodynes don't think game balance. Give them 3 HD and boost it to +7 str, +7 con.
Odd ability bonuses are so 3.0.
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I looked at making them once, and I used this picture to judge strength:
http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20050720
It takes something like a 35 strength to carry a horse that way. So while it may not be balanced, it is shown to be within their realm of possibility.

For those that are curious, here is my logic and work:
  • Horses can be anywhere from a few hundred pounds to about 2000, so that look like a medium sized horse so I called it 1000.
  • The Jager doesn't seem to be encumbered buy dead lifting the horse so I assumed light load.
  • So according to the carrying capacity table a strength of 35 is the weakest a medium 2 legged creature can be and carry 1000 lb as a light load
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Old 11-07-2009, 09:57 AM   #13
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I'd have to agree that Str 35 makes a certain amount of sense. I have to go back and look at some of the Girl Genius stuff. At weakest, they'd have a Str of 29 (lifting 1,400 as a heavy load).

Unfortunately, recreating the comic exactly presents a problem. I think that the Jagerkin that I previously posted reflect the Str in a reasonable game rather than in the comic book sense.

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Old 11-07-2009, 10:32 AM   #14
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I agree the 35 strength gets kinda weird, especially since they don't seem to have much else level wise, but I thought I'd throw in my 2 cents on the topic of how strong they are.
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Old 11-07-2009, 11:34 AM   #15
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The only thing you really have to maintain if you give them their full strength is the comedic not very efficient way they operate.

The horse carrying is a site gag. If you apply their strength to what they are capable of, according to the rules, you change the challenge/lethality of the setting.


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They're capable of 'whatever plot requires' in the comic. Taking another example, would you make the template have such a high CON that they can survive being hanged for days on end?

I'd shoot for the right flavor over achieving perfect consistency with the source in this case.
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If we want to cover them being so capable at carrying, that's a matter of applying either a Dwarven Movement-like ability or perhaps making them be treated as a quadruped for carrying capacity. Call it Sturdy Lifter and treat them as Large Quadrapeds, which will significantly reduce the necessary strength to move so freely with that much weight.

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Taking another example, would you make the template have such a high CON that they can survive being hanged for days on end?
That is a specific immunity, not necessarily a high CON...
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I would make some changes to Jägermonsters from what NemoUtopia had originally posted. I would lose the racial hit die and advance them as fighters.


A jägermonster in Wulfenbach Uniform


Jägermonster
Medium Monstrous Humanoid (Augmented Human)
Jägermonster Fighter 1
Hit Dice: 1d10+7 (12 hp)
Initiative: +1
Speed: 30 ft. (6 squares)
Armor Class: 16 (+3 studded leather armor, +1 dexterity, +2 natural armor), touch 11, flat-footed 15
Base Attack/Grapple: +1/+5
Attack: Longsword +5 melee (1d8+6/19–20) or claw +5 melee (1d4+4), or javelin +2 ranged (1d6+4)
Full Attack: Longsword +5 melee (1d8+6/19–20) or 2 claws +5 melee (1d4+4), or javelin +2 ranged (1d6+4)
Space/Reach: 5 ft./5 ft.
Special Qualities: Great act of strength, keen scent, low-light vision
Special Attacks:
Saves: Fort +6, Ref +4, Will +0
Abilities: Str 19, Dex 13, Con 18, Int 8, Wis 10, Cha 8
Skills: Climb +8, Intimidate +10, Swim +8
Feats: Power Attack, Cleave (B), Toughness (B)
Environment: Any
Organization: Solitary, pair, team (3–4), strike team (5–8), squad (11–20 plus 2 3rd-level sergeants and 1 leader of 3rd–6th level), or contingent (30–100 plus 1 3rd-level sergeant per 10 adults, 5 5th-level lieutenants, and 3 7th-level captains)
Challenge Rating: 1
Treasure: Standard
Alignment: Usually LN
Advancement: By character class (favored class: Fighter)
Level Adjustment: +1

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Jägermonsters are Spark Constructs—human fighters who have taken the jägerdrought and have been transformed. Jägermonsters are usually green of skin but their skin tones vary from a pale tan to Orcish green. They usually have dark black, brown, or purple hair, but an unassuming lavendar and fair hair is not unheard of on lighter jägermonsters

Jägermonsters have sharp, fang-like teeth, slightly pointed ears, and have short, sharp claws. They prefer wearing clothing that is simple and serviceable. Usually, they wear uniforms, but those on assignment or in wilder areas will dress in any striking style they prefer. Their equipment is clean and well kept. They are inordinately fond of wearing hats. They are obviously hardy, but vary in height and weight as humans do.

Jägermonsters speak a heavily accented Common.

Jägermonsters relish combat and tests of physical prowess, seeking out opportunities to put their abilities to good use. While they are fierce combatants, they are just as fiercely loyal to each other and to the Heterodyne family. Jägermonsters will follow orders of a Heterodyne, however much they disagree with those orders, and have a strong sense of honor and brotherhood.

Despite their ferocious reputation and love of battle, jägermonsters can (and enthusiastically do) mate with humans. The offspring of such a union is always a normal human.

Typically, jägermonsters live to 600-700 years.

COMBAT

Jägermonsters are proficient with all simple weapons, light armor, and two martial weapons, as jägerkin always begin “life” after their creation as hardy warriors. When jägermonsters receive training, they often become members of the fighter class, but some with barbarian and ranger class levels are not unheard of. Jägermonsters who are on long assignment, especially in wilderness areas, are far more likely to have ranger or barbarian levels. While jägermonsters tend to favor light or no armor and tend not to use shields because of their predilection to favor mobility, they will use heavier armor and shields if their orders call for it.

Jägerkin take to combat with abandon. While they will not do anything overtly suicidal unless they believe doing so serves the good of the Heterodynes, they are willing to take risks and like to show off their abilities.

Feats: All jägermonsters begin as Human fighters; they gain the bonus feats for being human and for being a fighter.

Great Act of Strength (Ex): Twice a day, a jägermonster can perform a great act of strength, which temporarily doubles his strength score for 2d4 minutes. Jägermonsters cannot apply this temporary strength bonus to attacks, but use it to carry great weights, after which they are fatigued. If a fatigued jägerkin uses a second great act of strength, he is instead exhausted.

Keen scent (Ex): Jägermonsters have a keen sense of smell, and gain the scent ability because of it. This functions in all ways like normal scent, but a jägerkin also has the ability to identify individuals it has previously encountered as well as a person’s major bloodline. A jägermonster who takes a standard action to smell an individual is able to identify that individual if they have previously met by making a Survival check, DC 10. If that individual is directly related or a descendant of someone the jägerkin has met, the jägerkin can identify the family line as well, at a DC of 15. Jägerkin receive a +2 bonus on such checks, and are able to take 10 by using a full round action.

Skills: Jägermonsters have a +4 racial bonus to Intimidate and apply their Strength bonus rather than Charisma bonus when using this skill.

JÄGERMONSTERS AS CHARACTERS
Jägermonster Traits (Ex): Jägerkin possess the following racial traits.
  • +4 Strength, +4 Constitution, Intelligence –2, Wisdom -2. Jägerkin are physically capable, being far stronger and tougher than a normal human. However, jägerkin typically lack foresight and planning abilities, causing them to be rash and often acting without thinking of the consequences first.
  • As Augmented Humans, Jägermonsters begin with an extra feat.
  • +2 Natural Armor. Jägerkin have extremely resilient skin that resists blows.
  • A jägermonster's base land speed is 30 feet.
  • Jägermonsters have a +4 racial bonus to Intimidate
  • Low-light vision.
  • Keen scent: Jägermonsters have the scent ability, as well as keen powers of identification using it. This ability to identify individuals allows a jägerkin to take a standard action to make a Survival check against DC 10. Jägerkin receive a +2 bonus to this check.
  • Great Act of Strength: Jägermonsters can lift items at double their strength twice per day for 2d4 minutes after which they are fatigued.
  • Jägermonsters are proficient with light armor, simple weapons, and any two martial weapons.
  • Jägermonsters have natural weapons, 2 claws that deal 1d4 points of damage.
  • Automatic Languages: Common.
  • Favored Class: Fighter.
  • Level Adjustment: +1

Designer Notes: the jägermonster presented here had the following ability scores before racial adjustments (elite array): Str 15, Dex 13, Con 14, Int 10, Wis 12, Cha 8. It had 10 skill points. 4 points were put in Climb and Swim and 2 points were put in Intimidate. It has a bonus feat for being human and a second bonus feat for being a fighter.
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