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    Quote Originally Posted by Thor Person Guy View Post
    They're in the OP, under "Banners!"
    How do you add one to your sig?

    Also:

    The entire Hobgoblin army + The Snarl

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    Quote Originally Posted by ClericOfBelker View Post
    How do you add one to your sig?
    Look at the banners, decide which one you want, make note of who made it and how far down that person's list it is, quote the OP, find the person whose banner you want, count down however many, copy, paste, done.

    It's simpler than I made it sound, actually.

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    Hey I've got an idea. How about the winner of the Crack-pairing contest gets links to the winning story in the first post of the next thread. Is that an idea?
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    Alright this is my first try at a crack fic.

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    Xykon was annoyed. He was so close to achieving the goal he could smell it but what do you know it turns out you can only spend eight hours a day preforming the rituals to control a gate. Which meant that while Redcloak snoozed he had to find something to do.
    Striding into his tower's thrown room the lich asked, "Alright kids what's up for tonight's entertainment? One of the demon roaches replied, "For tonight's enterainment we have the wheel of torture!"
    A pair of ghouls rolled a large wheel made of human skin stretched over a into the room.
    "This should be fun." said Xykon, "Give it a whirl."
    Obediently one of the Ghouls heaved on the edge of the wheel setting it to spinning. After half a tense minute the arrow at the top of the wheel settled on...... "Geas enforced mating until death by exhaustion." announced the roach.
    "Hmm could be interesting." muttered Xykon as a pit in the floor opened up revealing the two unforunates who would be providing tonights entertainment.
    Lying in the pit were two members of the adventuring party he had defeated at the gate one was the red headed archer and the other was the human fighter "Blueblade I think his name was." pondered Xykon.

    Part two will be up later and will be told from Haley's point of view.
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    Hey, Lira?

    Can you please make it just Inkyrius instead of Inkyrius/Haley?
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    Quote Originally Posted by CheeseMuncher View Post
    Wow... That's just... really well-written. The only thing I don't like about this thread is that everyone else is so talented, I feel like a hack.
    I agree with you that it was well written--and fun to read--but I don't think you're a hack. You're a better writer than I am, certainly.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CheeseMuncher View Post
    Look at the banners, decide which one you want, make note of who made it and how far down that person's list it is, quote the OP, find the person whose banner you want, count down however many, copy, paste, done.

    It's simpler than I made it sound, actually.
    Actually...
    1. Right-click on the banner
    2. Click "Properties"
    3. Copy the URL
    4. Paste into signituare.
    5. ???
    6. Profit!
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    So Vaarsuvius is an Epic Whatsit now. "Whatsit". I think I like that term.

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    Ok, who is going to write a pairing for Durkon and the Date Palm from Strip 682 ?
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    Quote Originally Posted by lothos View Post
    Ok, who is going to write a pairing for Durkon and the Date Palm from Strip 682 ?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jackdaw View Post
    Very beautiful, very creepy. Now I'm kind of hungering for some sort of sequel, a story about Vaarsuvius' descent into total madness would be very interesting to read.
    Thank you.

    And I definitely intend to write more of this.
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    After reading this bit of epicness, I'm hooked. And because I'm twisted like that, can someone add me to the PM list? I'm over 18 etc.
    The DM has spoken.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ClericOfBelker View Post
    The really dangerous trap
    Out of curiosity - which really dangerous trap we are talking about here?
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    you guys actually need to tackle elan + camel, imo.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The DM View Post
    After reading this bit of epicness, I'm hooked. And because I'm twisted like that, can someone add me to the PM list? I'm over 18 etc.
    Unfortunately, I don't believe there is such a thing as a Crack Pairing PM list. It was an idea for a few weeks, but it never took off.

    If you wnat to be on the fanservice OPM list, that's something you'd have to take up in one of the fanservice threads.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Trixie View Post
    Um... I was ashamed to see so many pretty avatars lately...

    So, I wanted to try, too. Here's my very first attempt at creating OotS-style avatar:

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    I wonder if you can even see who is this supposed to be.

    Anyway, constructive criticism would be welcome.
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    I mean wow. Your first. God i feel bad about my writing. Now I will show my Speechlessnes in my own language
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    ...My god, this is so good, I mean really good. And this is your first drawing? All I can say is wow, If this is the first I can't wait to see the second.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Trixie View Post
    Out of curiosity - which really dangerous trap we are talking about here?
    This one.

    *fishes out brain bleach container and passes it to Trixie* Don't ask why I have so many of these.
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    Brilliant!

    My only nitpick is that the maximum size for images in signatures is 468x120, so you need to trim it a little bit.

    Other than that, I hope to see more of these in future.
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    Roy knew that the door was trapped. He knew that his Str. would be 0. He even knew that Durkon didn't have Cure Poison! But, he also knew that it would be worth it...so worth it.
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    It's fantastic stuff.

    Though I must say, I personally think the head of Roy would be even better with a bite bitten out of it. I look at that and it's all I can think of.

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    Indeed it's an awesome picture. :D

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    The feathered fedora makes that pic, I'm tellin' ya... Seriously, great banner!
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    I don't know of another good crack. :( I feel the ElanxRoy was the best one I've got.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyronea View Post
    I agree with you that it was well written--and fun to read--but I don't think you're a hack. You're a better writer than I am, certainly.
    Awww... Thank you. *hug*

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    The concept is good and you followed the OotS style well, but it's the little details that make it great, the red trim on Celia's wings, the polka dots on Belkar's headband...I'm guessing they bought those chalices with money from Roy's life insurance.

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    Here we are: Vx ...Haerta?

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    This was not how things were meant to happen.

    The book in front of me seemed to blur; for once in my long life, the arcane texts held no appeal. The words and sigils I had so long ago scrawled eagerly across its pages seemed diminished; a useless memento of a past life that had been mine. A life I was forced to leave behind: I snapped the book shut, and the muffled thump sounded an ultimatum in the darkness.

    My familiar - Blackwing - was asleep, nesting in my bundled up cloak in the corner of the tent, and not wishing to wake him I left the garment behind as I crawled out into the night. It was cold - the desert at night - and I wrapped my arms around myself, watching my breath mist in front of me. The stars were bright tonight – even without my superior elven vision it would have been enough to get about by. But of course, I could see even better than that; I could see the dunes stretching in every direction like a frozen sea, and for a moment I thought I could could see them churning, hear the roar of the ocean. I shook my head. This was not an ocean. By definition of being a desert it lacked water. The roar was my own blood, the sound as it coursed through my veins immense in the utter silence.

    “It’s beautiful, isn’t it?” a voice said.

    “It is.” I replied, and the idea that the voice should know what I was thinking seemed laughable. So I did, a small sound that may have only been in my head. But so was the voice so it didn’t matter.

    It is. What is? “What is?” I asked, and I wasn’t sure whether I wanted an answer. The question seemed to be amusing, because someone giggled slightly. It might have been me, but I couldn’t be sure.

    “Many things are beautiful.”The reply came. “Places, people, feelings. Even the ones most people shun. Fear is beautiful. You know the fear you saw in your mate’s eyes? Even that was beautiful.”

    “It was not.” I replied, shivering.

    “You disliked it because of what you thought it meant; that you would never be able to see your mate again. Never be able to talk to him, touch him, lie together under the stars. You disliked it because you though it meant you could no longer love him.”

    “Inkyrius hates me now.” I protested.

    “So? If you love him, why should that matter? It never bothered me.” Another laugh.

    “You’re evil. You can’t love.” I told the necromancer. She laughed again, and this time I knew it was not my own voice, although for some reason I yearned to join in.

    “Oh, don’t confuse goodness and love. Admit it: if you could see that fear again, and the only other option was never seeing him at all, you’d take the first choice.”

    “I don’t enjoy the pain of others.” I said, but without much enthusiasm. There seemed little point in arguing.

    She laughed again, and this time I joined in. Suddenly insubstantial fingers wrapped themselves around my neck, twisted painfully in my hair, and Haerta’s voice hissed in my ear: “I know what you’re really like, elf. You can’t deny that the idea didn’t cross your mind, hasn’t occurred to you every day since. You wouldn’t have signed away your marriage so emotionlessly if you didn’t think you could take it back as soon as this was over. By force if need be.”

    “N-no.” I choked. The imagined hand on my throat made it hard to breathe, and each breath of freezing air burnt my lungs.

    “And why not?” She continued. “He’s just a baker. You? You’re a powerful master of the arcane, the laws of reality bow before you and so should he.”

    I felt that I should protest this, but I wasn’t sure I wanted to. In some ways, admitting to someone the darker thoughts my mind had begun to stray to recently would be something of a relief. Especially if that someone wouldn’t be horrified the way my other companions would be. They already believed me to be insane. “It’s... appealing.” I admitted to myself. The voice chuckled softly, and then Haerta pressed her lips to mine. I kissed back; the odd taste on her lips was intoxicating, the scent of destruction – smoke and blood and decay – clung to her robes even now. We tumbled down onto the soft sand, still locked in an embrace, hands clutching, nails cutting painfully into soft flesh. I was laughing now, laughing and screaming out of pure, unchecked exuberance and pain and-

    “V?”

    Miss Starshine was standing a few feet away, staring at me lying there in the sand. I slowly uncurled, wincing as the small cuts my nails had left in my skin began to smart. The laughter had gone, because now I was silent.

    “...Vaarsuvius?” Haley looked more than concerned. She didn’t understand.

    “My gods, what are you doing out here? I thought someone was being attacked!”

    I stared at her blankly. She couldn’t understand. She was scared of me; I could see the fear in her eyes.

    It was beautiful.
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    The ABD was sneaking through the sewers.
    She had been brought back to life by means unknown to her and had decided that she might as well take the opportunity to get her vengeance.
    Those damned elves would be going down HARD when she was done.
    She was going to assemble a small army of elite minions before swooping across the elven homelands in a blaze of fury, and they would all pay, every one of them.
    And what better minions than her own offspring? Not only would they be loyal but they would also gain additonal strenght from being part dragon.

    Off course, to achieve that she needed to gather "Materials"

    And thus she was going through the Azure city sewers on a little "Goblin hunt"
    It was also an added bonus that Goblins made a darn fine meal...mmmm tasty.




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    That is so not going to end well.

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    The ABD was sneaking through the sewers.
    She had been brought back to life by means unknown to her and had decided that she might as well take the opportunity to get her vengeance.
    Those damned elves would be going down HARD when she was done.
    She was going to assemble a small army of elite minions before swooping across the elven homelands in a blaze of fury, and they would all pay, every one of them.
    And what better minions than her own offspring? Not only would they be loyal but they would also gain additonal strenght from being part dragon.

    Off course, to achieve that she needed to gather "Materials"

    And thus she was going through the Azure city sewers on a little "Goblin hunt"
    It was also an added bonus that Goblins made a darn fine meal...mmmm tasty.




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    That is so not going to end well.
    Those poor Goblins...

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    Belkar Bitterleaf had cried exactly twice in his life. The first had been at the age of three. Loathing vegetables in all shapes and sizes, he had been a precocious child and was already aware of the fact that stabbing was the solution to all problems. Taking his mother’s kitchen knife, he’d laid siege on the vegetable crisper, eviscerating onions, which made him cry.

    The second had been the result of a crushing despair spell cast on him by the elf.

    The goddamned elf. The source of all his problems. His sworn enemy. He’d have killed it many times over if he wasn’t afraid of Roy.

    Vaarsuvius was trancing at the other end of the tent, a look of relative calm on hir face. Tomorrow they faced the Snarl and Xykon, and Belkar was conflicted.

    He felt three things at once. He was sad, sad that V might not survive. Mad at V for making him sad, and something else, something he’d never felt before. It was as though someone had stabbed him with a burning sword, warm and sick at the same time. Every time he looked at hit tranquil, trancing face, the feelings intensified, writhing and twisting.

    What was it? The feeling was almost lust, but not quite. It was more like happiness, a feeling he’d never felt out of the context of killing things. Whatever it was, it was confusing and angering him further. And when Belkar was angry, he made snap choices, and never looked back.

    Haltingly, he took a single step towards the trancing elf. When they didn’t stir, he took it as a sign, and half walked, half jumped into V’s arms, awkwardly mashing their lips together. That woke V up. Startled, V stood, but Belkar’s weight caused them to fall backwards.

    V choked half of “Meteor Swarm!” But to their eternal dismay, it didn’t even seem to have occurred to Belkar that there might be people who didn’t want to make out with him. One very uncomfortable minute later, Belkar broke this kiss, smiling slightly, only for V to knee him very hard between the legs.

    “What in the name of the great elven gods do you think you were doing?” Vaarsuvius asked angrily, rising to their full height of 5 feet, 5 inches.

    Belkar was stunned. It had never occurred to him that the elf wouldn’t return his feelings, whatever those feelings were. For the second time in his life, he struggled to form a response, and failed. Like the only other time he’d been rendered speechless, he told the truth. “I... I think I love you.” He said it so softly, he barely heard himself.

    “I love you. I... I... I love you, Ears. I always have. I always will. And... And I realised tonight might be the very last chance I’ll ever have to tell you... And... I love you.”

    V’s face briefly flashed something like lust and pity at the same time, and then froze in a mask of practiced disdain. “I do not return your sentiments. I cannot share a tent with someone who would take advantage of my trance to force a kiss on me. I wish you as well as you deserve. Good-bye, Belkar Bitterleaf.”

    Vaarsuvius turned on their heel, and strode out of the tent, nose in the air. As they grew smaller and smaller in the still desert air, Belkar Bitterleaf cried for the third time in his life.

    ...And that is how I met your father.

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    Finished!

    What do you think?

    Again, criticism would be welcome.
    *Cautiously walks into the den which I've imagined makes the HoH look like the House of Happiness*

    Critique? sure. ^^
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    It's quite well done, and extremely well done for a first try.
    But I think I can find some things to nit-pick about...
    Celias left arm seem to sit a bit far down on the body, it shouldn't be attached at the head thou.
    The lines look a bit thin, I think it wouldn't hurt to add 0,1-0,2 there (but not more).
    Roys X's seem to be just a bit to far apart.
    Hands could be a bit larger.
    Belkars cape could have shown on the front too.

    Posing and expressions gets full marks, and I really like the way you made the pointed teeth-smile.

    So in short, a bit of polish and it would be excellent.

    So would you be so kind to put on these so I could drag you to the Arts and Crafts?

    EDIT:
    I think I was unclear.
    I thought the arm should be attached at a higher point, not as far up as the head thou. (oh, and I meant her left arm)
    And what I mean with the cape showing on the front is just the trim going down being attached around the head by a needle or buckle or smth.
    Last edited by Elder Tsofu; 2009-10-03 at 12:27 PM.

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