By the way, for those who are confused by this, the party is as follows:
Sneaky Omadillo: Gnomish Thief/Illusionist
Serahk Destor: Human Thief turned Cleric of Fire
Ronak Ironham: Dwarf Cleric of Thor
Quedder: Elf Mage
Alphagon: Elf Druid
This is all being done in a homebrewed mash of first and second edition D&D. Just to confuse you (more).
It was funny, I'll grant you that and it sort of made sense.
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Yes, but that's Fred. He radiates awesomeness.
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What happened? Apparently there are plot holes the sizes of cats.
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The reason that the plot holes are so big is because this will be comic 100-and-some, and the javelin is the "lightning bolt of thor". It explodes in lightning, when it hits. and this really did happen in a D&D adventure (other than the fourth wall repairman)
Also, the other guy is another party member who nearly dies from one of the hobgoblin's swords going flying.
Re: Flacepant: The Adventures of a Real D&D Party in a Slightly Embellished World
"it really happened in a D&D adventure!"
... I guess we had to be there. Wait, we weren't. You might want to tell the story assuming this. For example, it's hilarious to you if your party's thief announces he's a powerful necromancer. To us, who have no idea what's actually on that character sheet, we don't know if the author is telling us that the guy is really a necromancer or not. It's confusing without the background.
So you need the magic of... exposition! To tell this story you need to figure out a way to tell the readers the background that will make the jokes funny, without being so obvious that you're telling us the background. Good luck!
Re: Flacepant: The Adventures of a Real D&D Party in a Slightly Embellished World
Person1123, change my character (ronak ironham) please, more facial hair and not so red please. Laso, he needs more color, and a bigger hammer. lastly, please show his magical tobaggon or however it is spelled and have characters say what they do in a white speech bubble.
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Re: Flacepant: The Adventures of a Real D&D Party in a Slightly Embellished World
Okay im slowly starting to see through what happened. In the first page the frog thig jumps over the raft, taking the necromancer with it in its mouth. And the blonde guy goes after it. (you should hae made a panel where you can actually see the necromancer get swallowed)
In the second page the necromancer nails the frogs insides while the archer shoots it from the outside, while that mage is still following the frog.
The necromancer breaks free and gets back on board. Then the mage still chases the frog and something goes sploosh next to the raft? That still doesnt make sense.
Re: Flacepant: The Adventures of a Real D&D Party in a Slightly Embellished World
Let's see the comics that your comic steals lines from.
8-bit theater - "I like swords"
Goblins - "I declare my dodge on you"
Order of the Stick
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