Crispydave's comic of randomeness In non-OOTS style!!!(looking for honest opinions)

Crispy Dave · 01-21-2009, 05:22 PM

So until I can get a server up im going to post my comics here.

As the title says the comic is completely random much inspired by xkcd

Please post your opinion on the comic.

Spoiler

~~I am aware of the white space ~~above~~ below the comic I am working on this.~~ problem fixed

Dallas-Dakota · 01-21-2009, 05:27 PM

Get rid of all the white space above your comic.

Assassin89 · 01-21-2009, 05:27 PM

You might want to crop the image, because there is an excessive amount of white space. The comic is not that interesting because each panel looks like it was copy and pasted, but only the dialogue changes.

Crispy Dave · 01-21-2009, 05:33 PM

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Originally Posted by dallas-dakota

Get rid of all the white space above your comic.

I thought you were sneak

I am working on that until then just deal with it.

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The comic is not that interesting because each panel looks like it was copy and pasted, but only the dialogue changes.

since I am not a very good artist the comic will mostly be about the text and the pictures will be very basic.

Threeshades · 01-22-2009, 07:20 PM

I think you should at least get some more distinctive characters. Even if its only different colors. But also the worst artists could make more than just stick figures that dont even have joints, I mean come on. Either youre being extremely lazy or you are making these comics with your feet

Crispy Dave · 01-23-2009, 12:19 AM

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Originally Posted by Threeshades

I think you should at least get some more distinctive characters. Even if its only different colors. But also the worst artists could make more than just stick figures that dont even have joints, I mean come on. Either youre being extremely lazy or you are making these comics with your feet

I actually only use one foot.