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Old 02-18-2009, 01:27 PM   #1
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While this is running A Story of Death will not be updating, at least until I get some more free time.

My heterosexual life partner good friend and I have teamed up once again to bring you:


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This is an Oots style web-comic based on the D20 game; Mutants & Masterminds. Just in case you don’t know the game and you’re too lazy to click on the link, imagine Dungeons & Dragons but in a modern day setting and instead of playing adventurers, you play heroes and villains.

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The one thing I recommend is that you keep an eye on the background and on small details.

So, instead of boring you with “Issue soon to come” I’ll bore you with the first issue!

Just a warning, the comics are kinda screen stretchy.
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Holy screen stretching comic, Batman!

A good start, but it would probably be better if you added more sound, and perhaps some more pose variations for the characters. Right now it looks... quiet.
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[sarcasm] Wow, that back robber is a really good shot! I mean, he totally just capped a guy without even aiming his gun! [/sarcasm]

But yeah. It could be slightly more... dynamic. Right now it looks as though this is the bank lobotomy patients go to...
Of course, thinking on it, this could be one of those worlds where bank robberies are so common as to be completely ordinary ((not having played M&M myself)), I still expect a bit more from seeing people get y'know... shot.

Art looks good though, and the title got me laughing.

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Old 02-19-2009, 06:32 AM   #4
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A good start, but it would probably be better if you added more sound, and perhaps some more pose variations for the characters. Right now it looks... quiet.
Well, whenever I go into a bank they're generally very quiet. I was trying to get the atmosphere right.
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Well, whenever I go into a bank they're generally very quiet. I was trying to get the atmosphere right.
Yeah, but it seems 'quiet' even when a pair of masked robbers have blown a hole in the wall and shot someone.
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Old 02-19-2009, 06:38 AM   #6
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Yeah, but it seems 'quiet' even when a pair of masked robbers have blown a hole in the wall and shot someone.
Ah, I see what you mean,
Ok thanks.
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Old 02-19-2009, 07:12 AM   #7
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I just noticed something. The cracks at the end of the wall where it has broken off sort of makes it look as though the wall is tilted backwards, away from the viewer, instead of being vertical.
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I just noticed something. The cracks at the end of the wall where it has broken off sort of makes it look as though the wall is tilted backwards, away from the viewer, instead of being vertical.
Yes I know.
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Old 02-19-2009, 07:32 AM   #9
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*headdesk*
I just assumed that it was still connected at the ceiling or something, despite the fact that there is no ceiling in the shot. >.>
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Old 02-19-2009, 07:39 AM   #10
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*headdesk*
I just assumed that it was still connected at the ceiling or something, despite the fact that there is no ceiling in the shot. >.>
It's just the first issue, let the plot develop a bit.
Unlike with ASoD, I/we are a few comics ahead, so although there's a lot of confusion such as. "why does the guy with the long hair and the lady look so bored?" etc, they will actually be explained.
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Old 02-19-2009, 07:40 AM   #11
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HE DIES!!!!!!
OMG! NOOOO!
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off to a good start i'll be keeping a close eye on this
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It's just the first issue, let the plot develop a bit.
Unlike with ASoD, I/we are a few comics ahead, so although there's a lot of confusion such as. "why does the guy with the long hair and the lady look so bored?" etc, they will actually be explained.
. . .

Are you saying the bank has no ceiling? Well, it'd certainly help with the heroes and the flying in and the saving...
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Old 02-19-2009, 09:34 AM   #13
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Hmm. I'll keep an eye on this.
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Old 02-19-2009, 10:36 AM   #14
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Are you saying the bank has no ceiling? Well, it'd certainly help with the heroes and the flying in and the saving...
A bank with a ceiling... WHAT?!?

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Old 02-19-2009, 04:14 PM   #15
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Looks promising...
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Firstly it looks like it will be a really great comic, however where you've written words by Nameless and malfunctioned surely it would be better by writing script by nameless and malfunctioned, but that's just my opinion.

Also, I knew you and malfunctioned where friends in ABR but I didn't realise that was because you knew each other in real life.
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Firstly it looks like it will be a really great comic,
Thankyou.

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however where you've written words by Nameless and malfunctioned surely it would be better by writing script by nameless and malfunctioned, but that's just my opinion.
If you look at Erfworld, it say's the same thing. I think it's better to say "words" since we sit together working out what to put down for plots and issue's rather then write down an actual script.
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Old 02-19-2009, 07:06 PM   #18
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Seems good, I'll also keep an eye on this.
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Hmmm.... And why exactly are you dropping ASoD?
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Old 02-19-2009, 07:16 PM   #20
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Hmmm.... And why exactly are you dropping ASoD?
I found it hard to keep up with two comics and ABR occasionally along side college work, so I knew that if I wanted to start this, I would have to put one on hold for a while and I didn’t want it to be P’n’G. So I put ASoD on hold at least until I get some more free time perhaps during the holidays.
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Seems good, I'll also keep an eye on this.
Same here.
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Another slow one, but it's all for the good cause of plot development!

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Hmmm, seems Paleface found something unexpected?
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You guys commenting makes me happy.

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Huh, fake doors? Or something else? I am begining to be very curious about what happens next
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Fake doors? WHERE?!
No, Nameless Remus walked into the one room, saw her, then walked out and went into another.
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And these another doors goes "VNNNnnn"....firstly I though they are going to disapear, therefore they are not real, therefore they are fake....well I am not sure about that now
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And these another doors goes "VNNNnnn"....firstly I though they are going to disapear, therefore they are not real, therefore they are fake....well I am not sure about that now
I can assure you, It's not the Tardis.
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Good cuz that was starting to worry me.
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