Hello everyone, I'm here to present my OotS-style webcomic, The Prestige!
About (General):
At first I was thinking about calling this webcomic an aH-style webcomic instead of a OosT-wecomic. Why? Some time ago I went to the "extras" at the anti-HEROS page and I've seen a guest comic by Q where he said, and I quote:
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"Because you set the bar too high!"
What I'm trying to say is that I intend in keep the quality of this comic high, and I'm talking about art AND plot. The first issue doesn't count, ok? Wait until issue 4 or 5 before you say the art and the plot sucks!
All next sections will be under SPOILERS tags, so now you can jump to the comic and be happy.
About (Updates):
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Real life is being cruel lately, so the updates are current set as "irregular".
About (Comic):
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The Prestige is based and inspired on Dungeons & Dragons. We reserve as our right to create classes, places, spells, characters, and other things that do not belong to D&D in order to have a rich, fun and creative webcomic.
The Prestige is a webcomic about a group of characters that decided to make a prestige class as important as their base class, none of the main characters will have only a base class. (For example, there are good chances you will never see a character that is only a bard in the main group.)
About (General):
At first I was thinking about calling this webcomic an aH-style webcomic instead of a OosT-wecomic. Why? Some time ago I went to the "extras" at the anti-HEROS page and I've seen a guest comic by Q where he said, and I quote:
In comic #1, panel 9: It's always helpful if you have the speech bubble that is ment to be read first on top, because thats how you read a comic (and books), from top to bottom. So in panel 9 , when I read, they talk in the wrong order, and that can sometimes be a lttle frustrating to read.
Otherwise, it's good. :)
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MAJOR SPOILERS. Seriously!
The last panel will be...
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Black. 'The End' in white text.
Don't say I didn't warn you.
I won a thread. Am I pathetic to list that in my signture? Yes. Of course I am.
In comic #1, panel 9: It's always helpful if you have the speech bubble that is ment to be read first on top, because thats how you read a comic (and books), from top to bottom. So in panel 9 , when I read, they talk in the wrong order, and that can sometimes be a lttle frustrating to read.
Otherwise, it's good. :)
Thanks =)
I'll keep that in mind.
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Great comic, small nitpick though. Comic 5 panel 9 should say give, not gave, and it would make more sense overall if it said "Did... Did you just slap me?" instead of "Did.. Did you just give me a slap?"
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Great comic, small nitpick though. Comic 5 panel 9 should say give, not gave, and it would make more sense overall if it said "Did... Did you just slap me?" instead of "Did.. Did you just give me a slap?"
Thanks :)
Thinking about it now.. Shouldn't it be "Did... Did you just slapped me?"?
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Well, "did you just slap me?" sounds better than "did you just slapped me?" The first is introducing something in the past as if it was the present, while the latter is just weird and uber-past.
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Well, "did you just slap me?" sounds better than "did you just slapped me?" The first is introducing something in the past as if it was the present, while the latter is just weird and uber-past.
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