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Barbarian in the Playground
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Vengeance Rising, the comic
Hello, this is the thread for the
Vengeance Rising comic. It is a webcomic based of OOTS and has a similar arts syle. I am the writer and CrimsonAngel is the guy who draws everything. I cannot do this without him an vice versa. please comment and have your critism
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Comic 9: Thank you captain obvious!
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Last edited by icastflare! : 05-16-2010 at 03:52 PM .
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Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: Vengeance Rising, the comic
That is so cute... The first comic to come out from the comic lab. It almost makes me feel like some sort of fan comic godfather
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Orc in the Playground
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very nice looking forward to more
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Ogre in the Playground
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Beatboxing golems would be epic.
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Re: Vengeance Rising, the comic
Well, you can normally tell a lot about a comic from its first joke. Yeah, the sight of beatboxing golems would be pretty ridiculous, so as a gag, it works well. What I want to talk about, though, is the characters. Yeah, it's the first comic, but please remember that the characters (or, at least the PC's) are exactly that; characters, and not devices (save that for NPC's).
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What is beatboxing, anyway?
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What is beatboxing, anyway?
Making spitting noises and turning them into a catchy rhythm.
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Barbarian in the Playground
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What is beatboxing, anyway?
I can show you a really cool korn vid with some epic beatboxing if we ever decide to have beatboxing golems
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i hearbuy approve of beatboxing golems, hip-hop dragons, thriller zombies, Rap gobnlins, polka hobgoblins, and most of all: tango bugbears.
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i hearbuy approve of beatboxing golems, hip-hop dragons, thriller zombies, Rap gobnlins, polka hobgoblins, and most of all: tango bugbears.
mind If I sig quote that?
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Wow, a 1d4 facepalm damage joke... :|
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Bayar
Wow, a 1d4 facepalm damage joke... :|
lemme guess, been done already.
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icastflare!
lemme guess, been done already.
In just about every D&D comic ever, yes.
That said, the rest of it was nice. Not too cliché. I may continue reading this.
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In just about every D&D comic ever, yes.
if we ever become cliche, notify me, so I can slap myself and make a joke of it in the next comic
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icastflare!
lemme guess, been done already.
Yeah, like everybody did it. Including me (back in 2008).
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Troll in the Playground
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Re: Vengeance Rising, the comic
How long has the new comic been there, i've been waiting for this to update all day.
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art tip:
when flipping the faces and bodies always remember the correct side of the injuries, tattoos and scars.
Nice comic
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Bugbear in the Playground
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Why does he scream "Aah, my eyes!" when he tripps?
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MAJOR SPOILERS. Seriously!
The last panel will be...
Don't say I didn't warn you.
I won a thread. Am I pathetic to list that in my signture? Yes. Of course I am.
Awesome avatar is awesome. And made by yldenfrei.
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Troll in the Playground
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Why does he scream "Aah, my eyes!" when he tripps?
A golem shone a light in his eyes in the first panel.
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Bugbear in the Playground
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No, the golem isn't doing any visible magic in that panel. Isn't the light coming form the druid's magic?
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MAJOR SPOILERS. Seriously!
The last panel will be...
Don't say I didn't warn you.
I won a thread. Am I pathetic to list that in my signture? Yes. Of course I am.
Awesome avatar is awesome. And made by yldenfrei.
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This comic makes me realize how much important to dwarves beards are to me since I constantly have to remind myself Led Stone is a beardless dwarf, not a gnome.
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Cizak
No, the golem isn't doing any visible magic in that panel. Isn't the light coming form the druid's magic?
Looks like it's reflecting off the sword.
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Troll in the Playground
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Re: Vengeance Rising, the comic
I like the disign, too. The light source will always come from werever she points it, as I am NOT changing the reflections every panel.
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#24
Troll in the Playground
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I can double post, right? I own half the comic.
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Vengeance Rising, the comic
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CrimsonAngel
I can double post, right? I own half the comic.
its more like 75 percent because This story would probably suck on paper. So ya your extremely important in the workings of this comic
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Bugbear in the Playground
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Um... what the hell is going on in panel 2?
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MAJOR SPOILERS. Seriously!
The last panel will be...
Don't say I didn't warn you.
I won a thread. Am I pathetic to list that in my signture? Yes. Of course I am.
Awesome avatar is awesome. And made by yldenfrei.
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Um... what the hell is going on in panel 2?
malfuctioning that apparently defies gravity
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Ogre in the Playground
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I'm gonna guess breakdancing.
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Bravo Szilard. Bravo!
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And Szilard, great job! You make me proud!
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Barbarian in the Playground
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by the way, nice new avatar crimson
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Troll in the Playground
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Thank you.
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