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Barbarian in the Playground
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Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Fellow playgrounders, Maximum Zersk and Sahaar are proud to present:
The Shadow of Fire Webcomic!
A tale of two brave warriors who dare to take on a powerful Empire by themselves. Presented in OOTS-style format.
Thanks to Maximum Zersk for the art. Written by me.
Book 1
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1, Prologue
2, The bushes are a clue
3, Could be puberty
4, Share your WIS Modifier with us, oh great Tim
5, Believe it or not, there are Predator spoilers.
6, No food for you!
7, Not even if it was pretty with sugar on top
8, There's a joke hidden in here somewhere...
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Last edited by Sahaar : 12-24-2010 at 05:19 PM .
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Troll in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
...they banned fire, hm? Guess they're
that evil.
(Odd transition from panel 1 to panel 2. "Yeah everything's going well. Oh wait, now it doesn't.")
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Blame Zersk I take responsibilty for that. Oh, well. We're working on the next strips now, I promise they'll be at least slightly more interesting than the first one.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
I think an empire that banned both magic and fire would be a pretty quickly self-correcting problem.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Will watch.
Last edited by Jokasti : 06-06-2010 at 11:34 PM .
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Damn it, Sahaar. I was watching the Fancomic Sub-forum, waiting for you to put it up. And then you put it up here.
Yeah, I'm thinking about the fire thing. I sent him something about a whole bunch of things in the comic, so we'll see.
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#7
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
If it's OotS style, shouldn't it be in Fancomics?
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
If it isn't hosted anywhere else, it should be in Fancomics.
And don't mind the soldier in panel three holding the sword in a wierd way. He's actually a lumberjack.
"I never wanted to be a soldier. I wanted to be a lumberjack!"
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Don't forget to link in your signature
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Got it, thanks for reminding me.
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
But link it in a way that doesn't contain a "
&posted=1#post8643992 " in the URL.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
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But link it in a way that doesn't contain a "
&posted=1#post8643992 " in the URL.
Did it do that?
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Troll in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
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Did it do that?
Yes, that's exactly what you did. (And still do.)
Just remove that part from the URL and you're good.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
'Kay, fixed it.
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
'Kay, I finished page two.
Since it seems that Sahaar might not see it for a little, I'll post it here.
Page Two.
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Chapter 2 added to the Archive.
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Troll in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
"The path says to go through here" ...? The paper/parchment mayhaps?
So... yeah, at least the names are descriptive, that's always a good thing, right?
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Shouldn't there be MORE tombstones in panel 2, rather than less >_>?
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
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Shouldn't there be MORE tombstones in panel 2, rather than less >_>?
Those are houses, they have little roofs. Roofs? Is that the correct spelling?
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
No , yes it is.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Nice comic, i watch gladly to see where you take it
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
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Strip 3 is in the works.
Indeedly it is.
Sorry, I was gone for the past few weeks. Comic should up soon.
By the by, how would we go about moving the thread to fancomics? Using the report thingie, right?
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Troll in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
I think so, yes. But is it actually a fancomic because it uses stick-type art?
Last edited by Domochevsky : 08-01-2010 at 08:22 AM .
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Well, basically any comic that's hosted one the website needs to be in the fancomics section. We could keep it here, but we'd need to host it off-site. I could do that, but I'd need to see if Sahaar's okay with that.
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Looking good so far.
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
And page 3 is done.
Here it is!
So how is it?
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Great art.
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
Why thank you.
I'm going to try to fix the blur problem. Don't know why it's doing that.
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Thanks. I just happen to be a hug Grammar Nazi at times. Sorry if it bothers you at all.
Regardless of whether that was intentional or not, I think I love you.
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
And there goes the fourth wall. It's almost like it's a
thing on this website.
I like the writing. And the art.
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Re: Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic
I thank you :) Zersk does do good art, doesn't he?
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