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Old 05-13-2013, 06:38 PM   Top  -  End  -  #1
Hanuman
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Tagger ↓

LevelBABFortRefWill
Special
1st+0+0+2+0
Skates, Groove, Tag!, Tag Tricks
2nd+1+0+3+0
Bonus Skill Trick
3rd+2+1+3+1
Dash
4th+3+1+4+1
Rep
5th+3+1+4+1
Bonus Skill Trick, Slip
6th+4+2+5+2
Roof Walker
7th+5+2+5+2
Recovery
8th+6/+1+2+6+2
Carts
9th+6/+1+3+6+3
Bonus Skill Trick, Jive
10th+7/+2+3+7+3
Twin Tag
11th+8/+3+3+7+3
Dive
12th+9/+4+4+8+4
Power!
13th+9/+4+4+8+4
Solidarity
14th+10/+5+4+9+4
Underground
15th+11/+6/+1+5+9+5
Funk
16th+12/+7/+2+5+10+5
Scratch
17th+12/+7/+2+5+10+5
Clarity
18th+13/+8/+3+6+11+6 
19th+14/+9/+4+6+11+6 
20th+15/+10/+5+6+12+6 

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Alignment: Any
Hit Die: 1d6

Class Skills:
Acrobatics, Bluff (Cha), Climb (Str), Craft (Int), Decipher Script (Int), Diplomacy (Cha), Disable Device (Int), Disguise (Cha), Escape Artist (Dex), Forgery (Int), Gather Information (Cha), Knowledge(local) (Int), Open Lock (Dex), Perception (Wis), Perform (Cha), Sense Motive (Wis), Sleight of Hand (Dex), Stealth (Dex), Swim (Str), Use Magic Device (Cha).

Skill Points Per Level 4

Weapon and Armor Proficiency: Taggers are not proficient with any weapons or armor except for Sprayers.

Skates (Psi): When psionically focused as a swift action you may call or dismiss a pair of psionic skates. While called these skates grant an effect on you as if you had the Skate power on you, this effect fills your boots magic slot or replaces any effect currently in the slot for it's duration. Skates physically overlap any current boots you have similar to a psionic skin, allowing you to wear both skates and other boots.

Groove (Psi): Your psionic focus contains special properties, absorbing and unleashing inspiration:
When psionically focused you have a maximum groove pool equal to your class level (or 1/3rd that amount out of combat), whenever you complete or are subjected to an inspirational or awesome act you gain 1 groove. You may expend your psionic focus (as a swift action as a roll or a free action as a save or defensive check) to get an equal bonus on any one check, roll or save, expending your focus causes you to reset your groove pool. You may only do this once per encounter.
Some acts that could grant Groove:
-Being effected by a use of Bardic Performance
-Completing a movement skilltrick to avoid a hazard
-Succeeding a reflex save
-Exceptional teamwork with an ally


Tag! (Psi): When psionically focused as swift action you may call, change type, refill, dismiss a single psionic sprayer, you may only have one active at a time. When a psionic sprayer leaves your hand it is dismissed.
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Tag Tricks (Psi): By utilizing your psionic sprayer you may perform special abilities called Tag Tricks, these are separated into categories:
[Spray]: Sprays take a standard action, they use the sprayer to directly influence a creature or object using 1 sprayer charge. Sprays list a type of save and the DC is always Tagger Level + 10 + Misc.
[Mark]: A mark is an instant application of your sprayer on a surface, marks take a swift action and 1 sprayer charge to apply.
[Seal]: A seal is a complicated application of your sprayer on a surface, Seals take a full round action and 3 sprayer charges to apply.
[Boost]: A boost is an effect which is conjoined with another effect such as a spray, a mark, a stamp, or another action such a jump or acrobatics. Boosts require a move action and 1 sprayer charge.

When you call a sprayer you must designate it's "type", selecting from the types below (or feel free to homebrew types and post them), and you can only use tricks equal or lower level than your maximum Tag Trick level:

Class LevelMax Trick Level
1
1
3
2
5
3
7
4
9
5
11
6
13
7
15
8
17
9

Sprayer Type List
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1st Level Tag Tricks
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2nd Level Tag Tricks
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3rd Level Tag Tricks
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Bonus Skill Trick (Ex):
You gain a bonus movement skill trick (Complete Scoundrel pg. 82), you gain a Style Bonus to one of the skills that the skill trick requires equal to your charisma modifier.

Dash (Ex):
As a swift action you may increase the speed of your psionic skates by 10' until the end of the round, during this time you gain 5% concealment per 3 levels.

Skate-Fu (Ex):
Your skill with using the skate ability becomes it's own martial style.
While you are assisted by the Skate power or Psi-Like ability you are considered having the Improved Unarmed Strike feat and gain a bonus vs offensive combat maneuvers used against you equal to your Dexterity modifier.

Rep (Ex):
Your reputation precedes you. You gain a number of contacts (Cityscape pg. 57) equal to your charisma modifier. You take -10 on disguise checks and your leadership positive scores are multiplied by 1.5 and your negative scores are multiplied by 2.

Slip (Ex):
Your physical ability allows you to evade detection.
You gain a +2 insight bonus to Stealth, Escape Artist and Climb checks.

Roof Walker (Ex):
You gain the Roof Walker feat (Cityscape pg. 63), this need not apply to just rooftops.

Recovery (Ex):
When you fail a jump, become grapple, tripple, ensnared or any other form of movement impairment you could apply your groove to as a free action you may opt to use your groove without expending your psionic focus, as an instantaneous action to try and prevent the failure. If you succeed you gain half your groove back, this is called a "Recovery". You can now do both one Groove and one Recovery per encounter.

Carts (Ex):
You have the option of calling an empty psionic sprayer into a hand that is already holding a container of liquid, the sprayer materializes around the container and attempts to open and empty the container as if it was internally aided by an unseen servant, the liquid is then pressurized to be released like a normal sprayer would be able to except it only takes a swift or move action to use. If the container cannot be opened the liquid cannot be used and furthermore once a sprayer is dismissed the full or empty container drops out of it.

Jive (Psi):
When rolling initiative you may fully expend your groove pool on Jive, you gain a bonus to initiative equal to the amount of groove expended, if your groove was at maximum charge you create Jive's bonus effect:
All party members who are placed in initiative order above the first enemy movement, or any party members who have an action readied for initiative gain +10' base-speed and an additional +1AC vs attacks of opportunity, this bonus effect is accompanied by a burst of psionic music which is heard clearly up to 100' away.

Twin Tag (Ex):
The maximum number of psionic sprayers you may have called increases by one, and you may hold two active at the same time and activate both separately.

Dive (Ex):
You may activate your groove in a special way called a "dive".
When activating a dive you add your charisma modifier to your current groove pool as a swift action and you may freely use your groove 3 times as an immediate action until the end of your turn, each use draws from the same groove pool in any division you wish.
You can now do one Groove, one Recovery and one Dive.

Power! (Psi):
Your gain +10' base-speed when you are effected by the Skates power or Skates psi-like ability, even while flying. While your skates psi-like ability is active you gain a power similar to the Elocater's Scorn Earth ability, with the exception that Power! also functions over flat liquid surfaces as well, that it only brings you 6" off the ground, and that hovering effect temporarily stops functioning when you raise more than 6" off the ground and resumes once you return to that height. Because your skates now produce their own thrust, lift and torque your Skate-Fu becomes devastating, you gain a bonus to offensive combat maneuvers equal to your dexterity modifier.

Solidarity (Ex):
You gain a bonus vs gas effects (including your own) equal to your current groove and at any time as an immediate action you may expend 1 groove to evade 1 point of damage (if possible to evade) or heal 2 points from your nonlethal damage pool.
Due to your experience you become highly resistant to fear, discouragements and attempts to control you and thus gain a +4 bonus to saves against fear effects, mind compulsions and negative morale.

Underground (Ex):
Your physical and psionic ability allows you to travel freely.
You gain a +6 insight bonus to diplomacy with underground communities, saves and checks against detection whether it be sensory, magical or psionic, and you suppress all vision on you except the base 5 senses (Touch, Sight, Hearing, Smell and Taste)

Funk (Psi):
While psionically focused you may create a psionic music field centered around you with a range of 100', the field senses intentionally beneficial and hostile sound actions and works beneficial effects into the field while denying hostile ones. This simultaneously functions like the bard's Countersong bardic music with the exception that the save DC is 10 + Current Groove + Cha Modifier.
You may choose to "carry" sounds, that means that while a beneficial musical effect is effecting you that you may broadcast it with your psionic music field therefore extending it's range (now also centered on you as well as it's normal source) and granting it a bonus vs dispelling, countersong and other such measures equal to your Charisma modifier.
Finally, while broadcasting this psionic music field in combat the ease of which your groove charges is enhanced, each round that you make use of one of your class features or do something entertaining or stylize you gain one groove point, the music lasts until you wipe-out, do not gain a groove point in a round, lose psionic focus or end an encounter. You may only have Funk active once per encounter.

Scratch (Psi):
While you have your psionic music field active you may expend 10 groove as an immediate action to allow an ally within 100' to re-roll her die before the outcome is determined.

Clarity (Psi):
You gain the ability to cut through both sensory and mental impairments to see the truth in-focus, you gain a bonus equal to half your groove to saves on effects that Blind, Confuse, Daze, Dazzle, Deafen, Fascinate or Stun.
Furthermore as a swift action you may expend groove to trigger additional effect, each effect ends when it's duration expires and all effects end if you lose psionic focus.
  • Gain a +(X*2) bonus to Perception for (X) rounds: Cost (X) Groove
  • See through smoke and fog for 10 rounds: Cost 1 Groove
  • Gain blindsight for 5 rounds: Cost 2 Groove
  • Gain (X*15') Darkvision for (X*3) rounds: Cost (X) Groove
  • Gain See Invisibility (Sp) Effect for 5 rounds: Cost 2 Groove
  • Gain True Seeing (Sp) Effect for 3 rounds: Cost 5 Groove
  • Gain the Dread Wraith's Lifesense (Su) for 3 rounds: Cost 5 Groove
  • Gain Aura Sight (Psi) for 5 rounds: Cost 3 Groove
  • Gain the Danger Sense (Psi) for 5 rounds: Cost 5 Groove
  • Gain the Find the Path (Psi) for 5 rounds: Cost 2 Groove
  • Gain Divination (Psi) with a 10 minute range: Cost 2 Groove

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Interesting, I'm going to keep my eye on this one.
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I love the idea, and only ever heard good things about the game! A few initial questions and comments:

Why did you choose psionics as a flavor? This seems, at first glance, to be a cool take on the Bard -- sort of a mobility based bard. Groove could just be a mechanic that grants minor bonuses (say +2 to a d20 check, save, or AC) and can be recharged when awesome happens.

I would remove the psionic skates and just add a straight speed buff and the benefits of the skate power. You can brew an item that looks like rollerblades and buffs skates even more. A pure speed/mobility bonus will make the class more appealing to folks who are more interested in the mechanics rather than the fluff.

If you stick with Psionics as a powerset, I would advise making fewer effects reliant on psionic focus. Focus is really designed to be spent, and it seems like your class would benefit from some uses of psionic focus. On that note, also add the ability to maintain two focuses at higher levels (15 looks good).

I feel like allowing light armor isnt a bad thing for the class, because that can often look like clothing of some kind. If you don't like that, why not allow the class to add CHA to AC? Either way, the class needs an AC bump in addition to all that. You can either go the monk route and grant a flat bonus, but i think the Scout option is better -- add a bonus similar to skirmish.

Jive isn't numerically significant enough or easy to trigger to really be that useful. It sounds like its intended to grant actions -- maybe the maxed out effect could grant an out-of-initiative move action that doesn't trigger aoo's.

You seem to want to create full-caster effects for this class, but it feels like a 4/9 or 6/9 caster to me. The abilities you have created seem really cool. I'd tackle summoning via Yggdratecture next, as the image of a tagger zooming by in a cloud of spraypaint, only for it to clear and a barbarian queen riding a polar bear to attack your enemies is too awesome to even describe!

Oh, also spellcraft/psycraft should be added to the skill list. I can understand not adding concentration with this particular class, but most casters have it.

Great start. If you are looking for power ideas, let me know!
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