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Old 06-27-2011, 04:15 PM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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Old 06-28-2011, 08:58 PM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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First Post! Also; You should probably put the actual images in the thread, if you're allowed. Also; Very happy that it's up :D
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Old 06-28-2011, 09:08 PM   Top  -  End  -  #3
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Issue 4: You wouldn't be related to Ogor Ogrebreath, would you?
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its about time this shows up, and a question from the outer thread, do you have 2 months of free time? just asking
and my bet is still on the ogre
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Old 06-29-2011, 12:13 PM   Top  -  End  -  #5
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its about time this shows up, and a question from the outer thread, do you have 2 months of free time? just asking
and my bet is still on the ogre
Around 2 months of free time

My bet is on Maxios
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Old 06-29-2011, 01:18 PM   Top  -  End  -  #6
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The new strip is nearly done
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Old 06-29-2011, 01:43 PM   Top  -  End  -  #7
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Issue 7: Grlump gets punted (Alternate title: A Critical Attack)
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Old 06-29-2011, 01:45 PM   Top  -  End  -  #8
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I am pathetic! Get in there, lil' me!
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Old 06-29-2011, 01:47 PM   Top  -  End  -  #9
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Your guy will rejoin the battle soon. He just needs to find a tree-branch he can use as a club.
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Did he drop his swords?
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Old 06-29-2011, 01:58 PM   Top  -  End  -  #11
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Did he drop his swords?
Yeah. When Crimson Angel and Blue Ghost encountered the Ogre in the forest, Crimson Angel dropped them the first time the Ogre whacked him with his club. The two proceeded to run away from the Ogre before Crimson Angel got the chance to pick up the swords.
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Stuff like that shouldn't happen off-screen. S'bad story telling.
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When Crimson Angel recounts the story to Maxios and the others, it will be on-screen
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Maybe a flashback? Although I recommend following the age old trick of Show Don't Tell.
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Nice.

I like the bit where Grlump's axe goes from being double headed to single headed
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Old 06-29-2011, 03:29 PM   Top  -  End  -  #16
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Nice.

I like the bit where Grlump's axe goes from being double headed to single headed
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We'll just consider it an in-game glitch, as in, not my fault
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Well, I know which one I'm going to use
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where?
here?
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The new comic will be up, very soon.
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the ogre will win, obviosly
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Will he win? Will the PCs win? Or will the battle end with no winners?
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Here's a full recap of the on-screen battle:
The Ogre whacks Blue Ghost with his club. Because of his high melee bonus damage, and the fact that he also hit Blue Ghost in the forest, Blue Ghost gets knocked out instantly.
Grlump rushes forwards and attacks the Ogre with his greataxe. Grlump gets a critical hit, causing triple damage. The attack seriously lowers the Ogre's health. The Ogre, enraged, kicks Grlump causing a lot of damage and knocking Grlump in the air. Grlump smashes back into the ground, causing more damage. Grlump get's knocked out.
The Lord of Shadows fires a Ray of Burning at the Ogre. Although it didn't do a lot of damage, combined with Grlump's earlier attack, it lowers the Ogre's health to 1/4 of it's normal amount. The Ogre's self-preservation AI kicks in, and the Ogre surrenders.
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Why does the ray of burning cut through him and not, like, burn him?
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It burned through him.
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THAT, is dark magic, magic that diractly damage the opponet, and not creating somthing that harms the opponet, for say, orb of frost
a ray that burns through the opponet? nice.

Dark magic includes spells like: burning blood, implosion , brain damageing spells, Etc.
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So basically Lord of shadows can shoot Laser beams from his hands. That's cool I guess.
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The spell was originally going to be called Ray of Lasers, but I decided Ray of Burning sounded better
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I prefer Ray of Lasers, myself. Also, you might want to include the cool pointy thingys that show who's talking. Also, you might want to show a ka-pow thingy or burny thingy for the ray. Also, the color looks kinda... strange. Maybe make it a little thicker? Also, maybe you should put some kind of beginning burst to show where the ray starts? Also, this is alot of alsos.
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I'll work on the issues mentioned. Also, the next strip will be up very soon.
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