I admit it: I'm speechless about this comic. Speechless as in 'I don't know what to say; why don't I know; why?!' sort of speechless. It's not a bad speechless, nor a good one.
I just don't know what to think of your comic, I guess.
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Well this has been the worst month of my life. Write it down, guys. May, 2013. It's historic.
Seriously, though, what are the odds a cop will shoot me if I taunt him enough?
Red eyes, how can he not notice those red eyes? Eh, right... he ain't looking at her eyes.
Are you referring to the cover?
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I admit it: I'm speechless about this comic. Speechless as in 'I don't know what to say; why don't I know; why?!' sort of speechless. It's not a bad speechless, nor a good one.
I just don't know what to think of your comic, I guess.
We're only 2 comics in. Nothing has even happened yet. I can understand why you don't have any thing to say.
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2 comics at the same time? Bold move Asdflove.
But sure, I could use a change of scenery, Let's see what comes of it
Oh, and most importantly - never forget the shameless advertising! It's the best part of running multiple online things at once!
Yeah, I must be crazy, but since I was able to update them both within a day of each other, I think I can handle it.
Nay, to the smoked mackerels with orange recipe!
*cough* Anyway, yeah, the cover. Just an harmless joke.
I figured it was a joke, I just had to be sure that was what you were referring to.
If you're curious, he's really more of "why is she taking off my cloak!" then actually paying attention to what she looks like, whether it be her eyes or her other *cough* assets.
My honest critique? I think it's a neat idea, but red TNR on black is really hard to read. I caught next to nothing from the first page, and want to know what her suggestion was on the second
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Often in the Lord of the Rings, if people need a Deus ex Machina: Gandalf. But if Gandalf needs a Deus ex Machina: eagles. And if the eagles need a Deus ex Machina, then you should probably just pledge undying loyalty to Sauron right there and save yourself the trouble.
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Everyone knows frying pans are actually weapons that people repurpose for cooking
My honest critique? I think it's a neat idea, but red TNR on black is really hard to read. I caught next to nothing from the first page, and want to know what her suggestion was on the second
I based the red-on black off of Quarr.
And what is TNR? It bugs me when people use acronyms I don't know.
The suggestion was, "Turn back around and pretend you never saw me."
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I see. Still, not looking into a woman's eyes again proves to be an extremely dangerous (hilarious tho) thing to do.
At any rate, you got me following, let's see where this leads. It looks interesting.
And what is TNR? It bugs me when people use acronyms I don't know.
Times New Roman. I don't know for a fact it's the font you used, most serif fonts just look the same to me. Point is, I'd advise switching to a different font without to many narrow strokes. Try Ariel or *gasp* Comic Sans
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Often in the Lord of the Rings, if people need a Deus ex Machina: Gandalf. But if Gandalf needs a Deus ex Machina: eagles. And if the eagles need a Deus ex Machina, then you should probably just pledge undying loyalty to Sauron right there and save yourself the trouble.
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Everyone knows frying pans are actually weapons that people repurpose for cooking
Times New Roman. I don't know for a fact it's the font you used, most serif fonts just look the same to me. Point is, I'd advise switching to a different font without to many narrow strokes. Try Ariel or *gasp* Comic Sans
Inkscape just calls it... Serif. No seriously, it's just serif.
I'll consider switching.
This is pretty good. I look forward to seeing more. I like the way the paladin woman was clearly getting jealous.
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Oooh, she's having doubts... Can't wait for the next update! Oh, and you forgot to change the number of the current strip spoiler.
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