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Old 11-12-2012, 08:45 AM   Top  -  End  -  #91
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Angelika is showing the typical adventurer mindset here...

Drained of lifeforce to an inch of death:
Meh, I've had worse, nothing a little restoration can't handle, foe just doing its job, let's not take it personnaly...

Had all her swag stolen:
THE BASTARD! HOW DARE HE!! I'LL KILL HIM DEAD!!!
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Old 11-12-2012, 03:46 PM   Top  -  End  -  #92
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Is it just me, or has the dialogue in the last few strips been even clunkier than usual?
I think I kind of get what you mean, but I'm generally pretty tolerant about dialogue. As long as the general premise is still coming through, it's gotta be tough to write in six different characters' voices like he does.
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Old 11-12-2012, 10:13 PM   Top  -  End  -  #93
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That holds true for the overall storyline, true, but it's the humor that's really suffering. In a non-verbal medium, jokes have to flow smoothly, sound like something someone would actually say, as well as the usual requirement of being funny in the first place. In this case, yeah, the jokes sound like something someone would say, but they don't flow at all.

It kind of gives the impression that the whole party is made up of amateur comedians trying to one-up each other... Which I suppose is actually pretty funny. Just not as funny as well written jokes would be.
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Old 12-18-2012, 08:35 AM   Top  -  End  -  #94
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This thread has been buried way too long! We've seen a lot happen, and our favorite adventurers are on the cusp of more fights...

Jordie just summoned a halfling paladin-looking guy...any expectations for the comics ahead?
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