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Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
D&D has a long and honourable legacy of mixing two animals into one. Be it the well-known Owlbear or the more obscure Squark, the fearsome Wolfspider or the humble Duckbunny, few things say "D&D" like the "Owlephants and spiderhorses" does. And so, to celebrate the spirit of the Tarantubat and the Gorillabear, I'm restarting my old Fleshweaver project.
How does this work?
I will homebrew new hybrid animals with your help. I will put up a list of animal groups to vote, from which two can be selected in a 48 hour public vote. Then, we will hold a second vote, further refining those animal votes and, if necessary, a third time, until we are down to two animals.
I will then combine those two animals into one, give it D&D 3.5 stats, a short text on ecology and behaviour and, using my questionable skills at pencil sketching, a picture.
Sounds like fun? Then please vote! If you give me any especially weird and/or awesome ideas, I might also do them right away.
Animal groups: Arthropod (Spiders, Scorpions, Lobsters, Crabs, Insects, Millipedes, etc.) IV Amphibian (Frogs, toads, salamanders) Bird (You know those. They taste like chicken.) V Echinoderm (Starfish. And only starfish.) III Fish (They swim. They might be sharks.) II Mammal (Everything from mice to elephants and naked molerats in between. Also monotremes, for purposes of this thread) V Mollusc (Slimey things. Snails, squids, octopodes, mussles, clams) II Reptile (Crocodiles. Lizards. Snakes.) I
A note: while I'm a biologist, I'm not going by precise phylogenic definitions.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
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Originally Posted by zetsu1919
reptile and birds, because i want a winged serpent that is natural, dammit, not highly magical outsider
This one's on the house. A quickie. No way I'm drawing all those scales. I also couldn't get my scanner working, so there's a bad photo of the sketch instead.
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Viperhawk
Tiny Animal (Reptilian) HD 1/4 d8 (1 HP) Speed 10 ft. (2 squares); Fly 60 ft. (average) Init: +7 AC 17; touch 15; flat-footed 14
(+2 size, +3 dex, +2 natural) BAB +0; Grp -11 Attack Bite +5 (1 plus poison) Full-Attack Bite +5 (1 plus poison) Space 2.5 ft.; Reach 0 ft. Special Attacks Poison Special Qualities Scent, Low-light vision Saves Fort +2 Ref +5 Will +1 Abilities Str 5, Dex 17, Con 10, Int 2, Wis 13, Cha 4 Skills Spot +13 (+8 racial bonus), Hide +7 (+4 racial bonus) Feats Weapon Finesse [b], Improved Initiative Environment Temperare Forests Organization Solitary or pair Challenge Rating 1/2 Treasure Viperhawk Skin (~10 GP) Alignment Neutral Advancement 1 HD (small), 2 HD (medium), 3 -5 HD (large), 6-13 HD (huge)
Poison (ex): Fortitude DC 10 (1d6/1d6 constitution)
Anatomy
The Vyperhawk is believed to be either a missing evolutionary link between bird and snake or, as others think, a mundane creature from which the mighty Couatl is merely an ascended form, hatching from the spirits of slain vyperhawks in some arcane way.
While most of its body resembles a snake, there are several modifications in the body plan other than just the obvious, and quite large wings: along the back, it has a bony crest, mirrored by a massive, crested sternum on the chest, serving as anchor points for the massive flight muscles.
The tongue and scent organs are, compared to most snakes much reduced, as the creature relies on its eyesight for hunting.
Along the back and chest, there is a gradual change from scale to feather: the back scales become gradually thinner and more elongated first, then notched and finally hairlike, becoming feathers. The entire creature has a light brown colour, but with darker, almost black stripes, most likely to break up its form and create a camouflage pattern.
Ecology
The Vyperhawk is an aerial ambush predator that uses its camouflage and superior eyesight to either hide in trees or circle high in the sky, spotting prey, mostly small rodents. The prey is swallowed whole. For digestion, the Viperhawk retreats in its cave nest, sometimes for several days.
The long, venomous fangs of the Vyperhawk serve mainly for self-defence against superpredators like the Mongdor and the Badger Eagle. When hunting prey, they are flipped into the mouth on a small joint at their top, to make swallowing easier.
Vyperhawks are solitary, only rarely meeting up for mating, after which the male will build a small nest of twigs in a cave, in which the female will lay 3-5 hard-shelled eggs.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
These things should be Magical Beasts, not Animals (see Owlbear). In any case, I vote for Mammal/Fish. because otter-sunfish would be cute.
Debby
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Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
I don't really see the reason for that. They aren't intelligent, and they have no magical abilities. But then, I also always thought Owlbears should be animals, too. "Exists in the real world" really shouldn't be a criterion in a fantasy world.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
Whenever you say "a wizard created one of these" it implies magical beast. It doesn't have to have magical abilities to be a magical beast.
Here is how I would have presented your viperhawk (edited a bit too).
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Viperhawk
Tiny Magical Beast
Hit Dice: Ľd10 (1 hp)
Speed: 10 ft. (2 squares); Fly 60 ft. (average)
Initiative: +7
Armor Class: 17(+2 size, +3 Dex, +2 natural); touch 15; flat-footed 14
BAB/Grapple: +1/ -10
Attack: Bite +6 melee (1 plus poison)
Full Attack: Bite +6 melee (1 plus poison) and talons +1 melee (1d4-3)
Space/Reach: 2˝ ft./ 0 ft.
Special Attacks: Poison
Special Qualities: Darkvision 60 ft., low-light vision, scent
Saves: Fort +2 Ref +5 Will +1
Abilities: Str 5, Dex 17, Con 10, Int 2, Wis 13, Cha 4
Skills: Spot +13*, Hide +11
Feats: Weapon FinesseB , Improved Initiative
Environment: Temperate Forests
Organization: Solitary or pair
Challenge Rating: 1/2
Treasure: None
Alignment: Always Neutral
Advancement: 1-2 HD (Small), 3-4 HD (Medium)
The viperhawk is believed to be either a missing evolutionary link between bird and snake or a mundane creature from which the mighty couatl is an ascended form, hatching from the spirits of slain viperhawks in some arcane way.
While most of its body resembles a snake, there are several modifications in its body plan other than just the obvious and quite large wings. Along its back, it has a bony crest, mirrored by a massive, crested sternum on the chest, serving as anchor points for the massive flight muscles.
The tongue and scent organs are, compared to most snakes much reduced, as the creature relies on its eyesight for hunting.
Along the back and chest, there is a gradual change from scale to feather. Its back scales become gradually thinner and more elongated first, then notched, and finally becoming feathers. The entire creature has a light brown color, but with darker, almost black stripes, most likely to break up its form and create a camouflage pattern.
Viperhawks are solitary, only rarely meeting up for mating, after which the male will build a small nest of twigs in a cave, in which the female will lay 3-5 hard-shelled eggs.
Intact viperhawk skins sell for 10 gp.
Combat
The viperhawk is an aerial ambush predator that uses its camouflage and superior eyesight to either hide in trees or circle high in the sky, spotting prey, mostly small rodents. The prey is swallowed whole. For digestion, the viperhawk retreats in its cave nest, sometimes for several days.
The long, venomous fangs of the viperhawk serve mainly for self-defense against superpredators like the mongdor and badger eagle. When a viperhawk hunts, its prey is flipped into its mouth on a small joint at their top, to make swallowing easier.
Poison (Ex): Fortitude DC 10 (1d6/1d6 constitution)
Skills: Viperhawks have a +8 racial bonus on Spot checks.
Note: I couldn't tell how many ranks you put into each skill. Hide has a +8 size modifier +3 Dex so it should be at least +11. If you put all ranks into Spot it has +4 ranks +1 Wisdom +8 racial = +13.
Debby
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P.E.A.C.H. Please Evaluate And Critique Honestly. Being nicer and kinder doesn't hurt either.
Please, please, please when using non-core material, cite to the books. There are too many books to wade through to find the one with the feat, special ability or spell you use.
Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
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Originally Posted by Eldan
I don't really see the reason for that. They aren't intelligent, and they have no magical abilities. But then, I also always thought Owlbears should be animals, too. "Exists in the real world" really shouldn't be a criterion in a fantasy world.
I largely agree with you, but I still think that these hybrids should probably be Magical Beasts. From the SRD:
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Originally Posted by Magical Beast Type
Magical beasts are similar to animals but can have Intelligence scores higher than 2. Magical beasts usually have supernatural or extraordinary abilities, but sometimes are merely bizarre in appearance or habits.
In my opinion, things that absolutely would not occur if not for magical intervention (such as owlbears, howler wasps, and, yes, even octocrows), should be Magical Beasts at the very least, maybe even Aberrations depending on how crazy they are. Animals don't have to be real-world creatures (see Dark Sun), but they should be naturally occurring. In my opinion.
All that said, I totally love and support this idea. I vote Arthropod and Mammal. I love long limbs, chitin, and too many legs in any combination. That and there's just so much awesome you can do with it, due to the insane variety in each group.
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Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
See, we have much, much weirder animals than that in the real world. If an Octopus is an animal, I don't really see why a feathered snake shouldn't be. They are much farther away from a standard vertebrate body plan.
I'm not saying none of these should be magical beasts or aberrations. The octocrows are. But the Viperhawk, to me, is just too normal for that. Feathers and scales are relatively closely related, anatomically speaking. Now, snakes may be far away from those dinosaurs who eventually became birds in our world, but this is a fantasy world.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
In my opinion, as it is described, the Viperhawk is an animal : no supernatural abilities, not really disturbing or alien in form, animal intelligence, and no references to it being created by some lunatic.
I believe the Owlbear is explicitly the creation of a wizard : it is, therefore, a Magical Beast.
The one I can't understand is the Hippogriff, which looks fairly natural to me.
By the way, Eldan, you seem to use both "vyperhawk" and "viperhawk". Are those two official spellings?
Back on topic, I'm going to vote for Arthropod (make that one with claws) and Bird.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
Calling it now. It's not quite 48 hours yet, but the start was made in the middle of the night.
So, it is a Mammal Bird (Avemammalia).
Vote for one each:
Once again, these groups are sometimes based more on what the creature looks like than any actual phylogeny. I also just eliminated some of the less well known groups, especially with the birds. If you especially love a group of species not on the list (say, a Sandgrouse), feel free to suggest it.
What kind of bird:
This one I had to trim down massively. even if I just went out and eliminated everything I didn't know myself, there's still just too many groups of birds left.
Waterfowl (Ducks, geese, swans, grebes)
Fowl (Turkeys, chickens, pheasants)
Gulls and waders (snipes, gulls, terns, puffins, plovers)
Albatrosses and petrels
Penguins
Pelican-likes: Pelicans, frigatebirds, cormorants I
Stork-likes: storks, herons, ibises
Vultures: vultures, condors
Flamingoes
Raptors: hawks, eagles, kites, buzzards, ospreys I
Doves and pigeons
Parrots: cockatoos, parrots, lorikeets, budgies
Cuculiformes: cuckoos, roadrunners, hoatzin, turacos
Owls I
Apodiformes: swifts and hummingbirds
Kingfishers: kingfishers, bee-eaters, hornbills
Woodpeckers
Songbirds (non-corvid passerines, pretty much, for this contest)
Corvids
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Fatigue makes me wax philosophic and/or babble. If I've posted something strange and tangential, that is probably the cause. This entry would be an example.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Fatigue makes me wax philosophic and/or babble. If I've posted something strange and tangential, that is probably the cause. This entry would be an example.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.
Re: Revenge of the Fleshweaver! [Vote up a Hybrid Creature]
I've taken the liberty of formating your lists into nice, neat tables, Eldan. No offense is intended, but feel free to use them if you like. Note, however, that they've not been updated from the OP/Post 19, and so will likely need to be modified.
Tables inside:
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Animal Groups:
Category
Example Creatures
Votes
Arthropod
Spiders, scorpions, lobsters, crabs, insects, millipedes, etc.
4
Amphibian
Frogs, toads, salamanders.
0
Bird
You know those. They taste like chicken.
5
Echinoderm
Starfish. And only starfish.
3
Fish
They swim. They might be sharks.
2
Mammal
Mice, elephants, monotremes, and everything in between.
What kind of Bird:
This one I had to trim down massively. Even if I just went out and eliminated everything I didn't know myself, there's still just too many groups of birds left.
Category
Example Creatures
Votes
Waterfowl
Ducks, geese, swans, grebes.
0
Fowl
Turkeys, chickens, pheasants.
0
Gulls & Waders
Snipes, gulls, terns, puffins, plovers.
0
Procellariiforms
Albatrosses and petrels.
0
Penguins
You know these.
0
Pelican-likes
Pelicans, frigatebirds, cormorants.
1
Stork-likes
Storks, herons, ibises.
0
Vultures
Vultures, condors.
0
Flamingos
These, too.
0
Raptors
Hawks, eagles, kites, buzzards, ospreys.
1
Pigeons
Pigeons, doves.
0
Parrots
Cockatoos, parrots, lorikeets, budgies.
0
Cuculiformes
Cuckoos, roadrunners, hoatzin, turacos
0
Owls
True and barn.
1
Apodiformes
Swifts and hummingbirds.
0
Kingfishers
Kingfishers, bee-eaters, hornbills.
0
Woodpeckers
Come on, now.
0
Songbirds
Non-corvid passerines, pretty much, for this contest.
0
Corvids
Ravens, choughs, jays, magpies.
0
I'll cast my vote for Rodents and Ratites. I know, they're not on the list. They should be.
If you feel like both adding ratites and using the tables, here's an entry for them that you can copy/paste into the list:
Ratites | Ostriches, emus, cassowaries, rheas, and kiwis. | [center]1[/center]
I'm hardly an expert, but if you ever need anything, feel free to PM me. Build advice, homebrew advice,
elaboration of a post I made, explanation of/for my homebrew, my Social Security number, or a friendly ear.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse,” I said, sounding calm, probably inaudible in the midst of the screaming. “Inevitable. Wasn’t that how she put it? I told them. Warned them.”
-Taylor Hebert. Yes, I'm a proud Skittle.