Re: [Power] Can you feel the knife you stuck between his ribs?
You might want to clarify the exact duration of the spell. It's permanent, yet it lasts a set number of rounds?
Personally, I'd drop the permanent effect and change it to the continuous non-lethal damage and dazed effect. That way, they either succumb to the damage and fall unconscious (for flavor you could say they retain the memory) or they outlast the duration, still standing but slightly traumatized.
Reminds me of Tsukuyomi from Naruto.
Yotsubatar by Dr. Bath
Last edited by Catch : 06-27-2007 at 12:10 PM.