Whitefeather - OotS fancomic updated regularly

[[Insert Neat Username Here]]

Originally Posted by Mechafox

I have a tendency to not acknowledge posts that use the "" smiley. It really makes the poster look immature.

Does that statement include itself?

[Green-Shirt Q]

Listen, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to offend anyone. I was simpily stating my enthusyastic-ness that the comic will return, and my hope to have it return soon.

I just can't wait. (Well, I can wait, but I can't becase I want it to return. Even though I am physicaly capable of waiting.)

[Squark]

Also, Banjo probably can't be bothered to change the title.

[[Insert Neat Username Here]]

Originally Posted by Squark

Also, Banjo probably can't be bothered to change the title.

Titles can't be changed after 31 days.

[Ichneumon]

Yes, I love the irony in the title too.

[Keris]

I live!!!!one!

Comic 22 - Rated PG

Spoiler

With regards to scheduling, the comic will update regularly. I set myself the target of a comic a week, and six days after receiving the script, the comic is finished. I intend to update each monday, which will allow me to build up a buffer as well.

[Lyinginbedmon]

6 months? Cal was 3 months premature?

Well if that doesn't say "divinely touched kiddo" I'm not sure what does given the setting

[banjo1985]

Originally Posted by Lyinginbedmon

6 months? Cal was 3 months premature?

Well if that doesn't say "divinely touched kiddo" I'm not sure what does given the setting

Not really. She took two months to recover...then six months after that, she got Cale. Okay it's 8 months and not 9, but hardly impossibly premature

[Bayar]

8-9 months are OK. Try to give birth at 5 months...and the thing to suurvive...saw it on the news once...

[Krelon]

nice. with demonic pregnancies it can be anything between 1 day and several years, so she got lucky (ever seen Cordelia's pregnancies in Angel?)

@banjo: don't forget to put the newest strip in your first post

[Keris]

Are we even sure it was a demon?
I would have thought it was a half-fiend, and so Cal's a teifling, which would be more like a human pregnancy.

[banjo1985]

I had in fact forgotten to do that

I'll be sending the next script to Keris tomorrow, so I think we can say we're back to something near normality now folks

[Krelon]

well, ok, in D&D terms it could have been a devil as well (which is different from a demon) so what do you call it safely, fiend?

ahhh, regular updates (love the sound of it)

[Omicroncubed]

Alright! It's back! I have missed it a lot

[Green-Shirt Q]

Finally it's back!

*reads comic*

OH DEAR GODS!

*faints*

[banjo1985]

*attempts to revive the Q with some form of defilrilator*

"Damn it he's gone, get me 5000gp of diamonds, STAT!"

On a more serious note, I've sent the next script to Keris, and am planning to start sending them in advance. Hopefully we can get some kind of buffer built up.

[Fawkes]

*kicks Q's corpse*

[Dallas-Dakota]

Woot, new comic. And ohyeah, what type of file is the art uploaded in? It looks a little blurred(atleast its very noticable in the first strip)

And then.... Dun dun dunnnnn.....

[Green-Shirt Q]

Originally Posted by Mechafox

*kicks Q's corpse*

Hey, I aint dead yet! Punk!

*snaps fingers* *Mechafox disappers*

[Keris]

Originally Posted by dallas-dakota

Woot, new comic. And ohyeah, what type of file is the art uploaded in? It looks a little blurred(atleast its very noticable in the first strip)

And then.... Dun dun dunnnnn.....

The file is PNG, but the first and last panels are blurred because I export each panel individually before composing them into a comic. Panels one and six were exported at half the resolution as the rest, then Inkscape crashed, and I wasn't going to re-draw an entire scene.

[Fawkes]

Nope, still here. Try again.

[MR.PIXIE]

>sniff< Poor Jenna!

[MR.PIXIE]

happy valentines day!

[Fluff]

Originally Posted by Keris Rain

I live!!!!one!

Comic 22 - Rated PG

Spoiler

With regards to scheduling, the comic will update regularly. I set myself the target of a comic a week, and six days after receiving the script, the comic is finished. I intend to update each monday, which will allow me to build up a buffer as well.

I'm gone for 6 days.

SIX. DAYS.

When I get back, I expect nice example of Keris Rain's artistic ability. I get "that that". (Panel 6, Speech Bubble 1, Line 3, words 1-3) What the pfargtl is "that that"?!


*On topic*

Nice art, but do you think you could make it a little wider? It's a bit blocky and stuff. Try 734 pixels.

[Bayar]

you kinda say that...that, THAT THING ! when you are emotional...

[Green-Shirt Q]

Originally Posted by Fluff

...
I get "that that". (Panel 6, Speech Bubble 1, Line 3, words 1-3) What the pfargtl is "that that"?!
...

I think that might have been her studdering. I tend to studder when I cry and talk at the same time.

It seems like it was a pretty tramatic experience for poor Jen. You don't think her language would be 100% normal when explaining?

Give me a break. Or more acuretly, give Keris Rain a break.

Comic's (webcomic inpeticular) can be pretty complicated and hard to make. There's going to be some mistakes. Get over it.

[Felixaar]

yes, the "that that" is obviously a pause in her speech, but [utter bastard] it should be "that... that thing," rather than "that that... thing" [/utter bastard]

[Keris]

One letter! It should be "what that thing".
But one letter! Considering that speech bubble was written at 2 AM, consider yourself lucky there weren't more typos.

On another note, the next comic is likely to be slightly late, due to my own messed up sleep cycle. (I barely made it to work on time, despite it starting at 5PM.)

[Rayzin]

Before in certain plays or music, one mistake meant becoming broke, having your head chopped off ect.

[Green-Shirt Q]

Originally Posted by Rayzin

Before in certain plays or music, one mistake meant becoming broke, having your head chopped off ect.

Don't you mean: "etc." ?

OFF WITH YOUR HEAD!