Whitefeather - OotS fancomic updated regularly

[Ichneumon]

Great Comic, very funny and I like your mutant cows so very much.

Personally I think it looks better with the imageshack, but I am not so very sure anymore.

Keep it up, I am so going to read all of them.

[Omicroncubed]

It DOES look a lot better now.

At first it wouldn't load it, but now I can fully see it. This is awesome

[Gez]

It's funny how the horses on the banner are when they arrive, and then after having seen how well Nature Girl fares.

[Dragor]

Keep up the good work- Strip 9 funniest so far.

I love your style and the detail on the characters, and most of all your sense of humour. This is most definately bookmarked.

[Joracy]

Lol the way you make not pictures in the background react to whats going on is really funny! and about not being able to ride horses...Hopefully she can track thing if they end up needing to :)

[Felixaar]

Nice. Strip nine very good, Jenna is really cool.

[Surfing HalfOrc]

Coming along quite nicely. Keep up the good work!

[Klerik]

This comic is great! Can't wait to see more from you.

bookmarked for sure!

[[Insert Neat Username Here]]

Great! I bookmarked it, and hope more is coming soon.

[banjo1985]

Thank you all for your positive comments, I'm glad there are people enjoying this!

Just thought I'd post a quick update, I've had a very busy last few days and haven't had chance to start the next strip. However, the dialogue is all written and I hope to make a start later today. Expect the next one Tuesday, though I might be able to get it out by late Monday if I'm lucky...

Another couple of strips will finish off the first part of the story. When this happens I'll probably post these on another site and put a link here, but I'll continue to post new strips up in magically spoilerized form here!

Thanks all

Banjo

[banjo1985]

Right scratch that last message, I've finished the next strip for posting right now! It took less time than I though because it didn't require much in the way of movement or changes of scenery. In a few strips time the party will begin their journey, at this point I may slow down slightly as I'm going to have to practice battle scenes!

Strip 10 - Creative Marketing

Spoiler

As always all comments and dicussion are welcome! I'm amazed this has been popular enough to last 10 strips, but hey the worlds full of surprises...

Cheers all

Banjo

[Omicroncubed]

This is one of the best strips so far!

Nice job

(Huzzah! first to post)

[Nexus-R.C._Mina]

Ha-harr! Good one! Sooo, Sid's a dig at various <Forum-Rules-political-censoring> unscrupulous merchants?

[theterran]

Sushi , that made me chuckle.

[Mad Scientist]

"It's a koi not a goldfish" Hee hee!

[Jimor]

Hee, can't wait to see how Jaws ends up being used down the line.

And it could be worse. In one of the submissions I had at my webzine, the character ended up with a tapeworm as his familiar.

[Gez]

The dog seemed to be a real blink dog, that said...

[Flynnarrel]

"...you're secretly a merman..."

I enjoy seeing the creativity. There are a few parts where the details are a teensy bit off. ... the broken window in Jenna's parent's house, the pattern of breakage changed. I know it's difficult in such a complex piece of art... (oots and its dissapearing arrows, for instance).

Just thought it worth a mention.

[Gez]

Originally Posted by Flynnarrel

(oots and its dissapearing arrows, for instance)

I thought those were arrows launched by the hobgoblins, and missing their target; not arrows stuck in the hull.

[banjo1985]

Ye the broken window wasn't right, but I'd like to think my arts got a bit better since the really early strips...

As for strip 11, the week from hell is delaying me doing it, but the dialogue is done now, and it should be up sometime on Saturday at the latest.

Edit - Thanks for the warning Ichy, I've changed it to a generic title, from now on, the new strip alert will just have to be my sig!

[Ichneumon]

*still great comics...*

You might want to change your title as you can't change it anymore after 30 days, I have had to pm a moderator to ask him to remove it for me.

[chorpler]

Originally Posted by Gez

I thought those were arrows launched by the hobgoblins, and missing their target; not arrows stuck in the hull.

They were. See my post here.

[theterran]

Saturday came and went...and I cried a little w/o the new comic

Been two days since someone posted on this thread...so I'll *bump* I reckon...hopefully this hasn't been forgotten

[banjo1985]

Not forgotten, just.....on hiatus. I've started a new job which gives me much less time to do the comic, and to be honest I'm having issues with the dialogue, my ideas aren't appealing to me at the minute.

So I'm leaving this for a short time, and hopefully I'll come back with some better ideas!

Sorry everyone....I guess I'm struggling a little

[theterran]

No worries. GL with your new job.

Writers block can be such a pain...

[mockingbyrd7]

I like this strip, but I have a couple things I would change:

1. The Females' Expressions - The eyes are a bit large and the hairlines are low, and its hard to tell what expression the women are making.

2. The Word Balloons - The dialogue is good but a bit bland. Also, since 99% of everyone reads left to right, top to bottom, many conversations can be hard to follow (especially this latest one and Strip 5).

One more thing: I love the names Drake and Jenna Church, but I feel like "Beech" and "Ailish" are a little uninspired. Nothing you can do about this though.

Overall I like where this is headed and I am eager to see more. Keep going!

[Midnight Son]

Any update on the updates? I've been enjoying this strip so far and would not like to see it fall into obscurity.

[The Ninja]

*Places defibulator on thread*
"CLEAR!"
*Jolts thread back to life*
"Bad thread, don't die and make me have to break out the necromancy kit."

On topic though, any updates in the foreseeable future? I've enjoyed this comic and I hope it continues, but this defibulator only has a few thousand more volts left in it...

[[Insert Neat Username Here]]

It's dead, Jim . . .
I'll pay for 500 GP of the diamond dust, and not a copper more! Any other donations?

Current: 500/5000

[Dallas-Dakota]

Its dead.
Ahh, I'l be the caster and do my art and part as a cleric, I sure have 'nough levels.
*prepares : Animate Comic*