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Old 12-01-2007, 02:42 PM   Top  -  End  -  #151
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I refuse to continue reading this strip until you conform to the American way of dating updates! I keep thinking that there can't possibly be a month 30 in a year...
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Old 12-01-2007, 02:58 PM   Top  -  End  -  #152
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I refuse to continue reading this strip until you conform to the American way of dating updates! I keep thinking that there can't possibly be a month 30 in a year...
Banjo is British. Bite our historical, cultural, military, and diplomatic superiority

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Old 12-01-2007, 03:06 PM   Top  -  End  -  #153
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(if britain would was superior it would still have most part of North america as an colony?)
Bite Dutchies cultural, historical and military superiority!
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Old 12-01-2007, 03:17 PM   Top  -  End  -  #154
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Britan, Britan, Britan!
Opened by the queen in 1972, Britan now attracts hindreds of visitores each year. But why do they come? Not just to discovor how chicken nuggets should really tast, or to take part in the great tredition of dogging... NO!
They come in their droves to meet the people of Britan! And it is them what we now here look at now today!

LET US ROCK!
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Old 12-03-2007, 04:00 AM   Top  -  End  -  #155
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I refuse to continue reading this strip until you conform to the American way of dating updates! I keep thinking that there can't possibly be a month 30 in a year...
This comes from a country that spells colour and aluminium wrong, and replaces all s's with z's! I think I'll stick with the British way, what with being English and all

New comic has been started, and will be up tomorrow if all goes well.
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Old 12-03-2007, 04:27 AM   Top  -  End  -  #156
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Brits of the boards! Unite!
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Old 12-03-2007, 04:53 AM   Top  -  End  -  #157
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Hay, I only live here... and talk like one... and have a british sence of humer... and look british... shut up...
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Old 12-03-2007, 09:40 AM   Top  -  End  -  #158
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I'm going to have to annoy Hyperfreak again, he's going to think I last updated in March

Anyhow, this strip hasn't took me as long as I thought, so I'm going to post it straight away. 4 comics in 8 days...boy I'm not going to be able to keep this up!

Anyhow, this is the first combat strip so far, the first chance you get to see how effective the team are etc. Now, one thing I've never been able to do very well is the sensation of movement, such as when someone is makes an attack or get's knocked back etc. I think I've managed to this to an extent in this comic, but any tips on how to do it better would be appreciated.

Anyway, here it is:

Strip 14 - Fight Scene: Take One
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As always any comments, conjecture or criticism is welcome. It would be good to hear how people are getting used to the new art style, or whether it still hurts your eyes

Anyway...hope you enjoy, next strip will be up Thursday probably, could be earier but based on my track record I'm not saying so!
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Old 12-03-2007, 10:06 AM   Top  -  End  -  #159
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I can't wait for the update, Fight Scene number 2-enter the goldfish!

SoD that...brilliant.
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Old 12-03-2007, 10:10 AM   Top  -  End  -  #160
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I can't wait for the update, Fight Scene number 2-enter the goldfish!

SoD that...brilliant.
It's a Koi!
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Old 12-03-2007, 11:44 AM   Top  -  End  -  #161
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I bet Jaws will take this opportunity to run away...

what ya wanna bet?
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Old 12-03-2007, 12:06 PM   Top  -  End  -  #162
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Go Team Gold-Fish!

Great comic
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Old 12-03-2007, 01:14 PM   Top  -  End  -  #163
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I bet Jaws will take this opportunity to run away...

what ya wanna bet?
I'll bet the bag it leaves behind!
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Old 12-05-2007, 01:54 AM   Top  -  End  -  #164
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I like the way you date your updates. It's always made more sense, in my opinion, to put the day before the month. To avoid confusion (I'm american), I usually write out the month though (3Dec07).

Also, you should always do what is easiest for you, before pandering to any one person. Anyone who truly enjoys the comic will stay as long as you don't stray too far from what originally got our attention in the first place. Even then some may stay, if the change is good for them.

So basically, keep up the good work. I love it so far.
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Old 12-05-2007, 07:21 AM   Top  -  End  -  #165
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KNOCKOUT

This is Bob here with my co-worker!
This round we have a special round! Aquatic!
In the left corner we have have stand- oh woops I mean swimming, KOI! And in the right corner! The big scary bigger octopus monster!

K.O.

KOI wins!

(love it)
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Old 12-05-2007, 03:15 PM   Top  -  End  -  #166
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This comes from a country that spells colour and aluminium wrong, and replaces all s's with z's! I think I'll stick with the British way, what with being English and all
*clearing throat* Ahem... (Insert Bardic Knowledge Check here)

Aluminum

1812, coined by Sir Humphry Davy (1778-1829), from L. alumen "alum" (see alum). Davy originally called it alumium (1808), then amended this to aluminum, which remains the U.S. word, but British editors in 1812 further amended it to aluminium, the modern preferred British form, to better harmonize with other element names (sodium, potassium, etc.).

"Aluminium, for so we shall take the liberty of writing the word, in preference to aluminum, which has a less classical sound." -"Quarterly Review," 1812

Seems to me it was just a matter of wanting to sound grandiose, neh?

As far as Jaws is concerned, I suspect a rather nifty Familiar-Delivered Touch Attack spell might be in the works. At least, that is what I would do...

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Old 12-05-2007, 03:27 PM   Top  -  End  -  #167
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You have alot of detail in your comic. Nice work. =)
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Old 12-06-2007, 10:57 AM   Top  -  End  -  #168
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Wow a compliment from teh esteemed Mr Saturn, that has genuinely made my day.

Next strip is finished, just about on time!

Strip 15 - Time for Plan B
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Not much detail underwater unfortunately, but as the majority of next strip is underwater I'm going to work on improving it for then.

As always all comments are welcome.

Next strip might be up Sunday if I get the time, that will make 6 strips in 14 days, not bad going for me!
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Old 12-06-2007, 11:07 AM   Top  -  End  -  #169
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It's NOT a Koi, it's a Betta! And it's gonna kick that octopus-thing's BUTT!

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Old 12-06-2007, 11:14 AM   Top  -  End  -  #170
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It's a true classic!

Goldfish bought by moron
Goldfish carried around in bag by moron
Goldfish released into river by moron
Goldfish eaten by massive octopus moron thinks he can take...
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Old 12-06-2007, 11:15 AM   Top  -  End  -  #171
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I really start to like the non-oots style parts of this comic. I love the plot development.
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Old 12-06-2007, 11:31 AM   Top  -  End  -  #172
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hehe, cant wait to see the fight scene...it should be shocking to say the least. Also, american FTW !!! I find british english much more uptight...compare british english and american english like...paladin and bard...or something like that...
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Old 12-06-2007, 12:25 PM   Top  -  End  -  #173
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Yes, well, we actually had The Bard
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Old 12-06-2007, 02:19 PM   Top  -  End  -  #174
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Yes, and it seems to me to be more a paladin vs. barbarian. One of them misses some of the more colourful letters out.

Oh, and to keep on topic: brilliant comic, I put 11gp on the fish!
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Old 12-06-2007, 02:35 PM   Top  -  End  -  #175
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Yes, and it seems to me to be more a paladin vs. barbarian. One of them misses some of the more colourful letters out.

Oh, and to keep on topic: brilliant comic, I put 11gp on the fish!
actually, I first wrote barbarian, but backspaced since I thought "Nah, it is not that bad..."
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Old 12-06-2007, 04:06 PM   Top  -  End  -  #176
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This comes from a country that spells colour and aluminium wrong, and replaces all s's with z's! I think I'll stick with the British way, what with being English and all

New comic has been started, and will be up tomorrow if all goes well.
According to the Firefox zpell-checker, lookz like you're zpelling them wrong.
And we don't replace our s'z with z'z. We're not French.

Alzo, what'z up with Jawz'z eyez?
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Old 12-06-2007, 04:15 PM   Top  -  End  -  #177
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Old 12-07-2007, 04:48 AM   Top  -  End  -  #178
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According to the Firefox zpell-checker, lookz like you're zpelling them wrong.
And we don't replace our s'z with z'z. We're not French.

Alzo, what'z up with Jawz'z eyez?
Oui? Je suis la gar?

Jaws is just a little over-excited, maybe his eyes will calm down a little in the next strip (i.e. I drew him ages ago and just expanded the picture, forgetting to spruce him up a bit )
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Old 12-07-2007, 08:47 PM   Top  -  End  -  #179
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Oooh, lookz like I zparked a debate! And Banjo updated again!

In June?! What the hell?! Have I been in a coma?! What happened to my family?!

NOOOOOOO!!!!!

Now look what you've done.

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Banjo is British. Bite our historical, cultural, military, and diplomatic superiority
Military? I thought we owned you...meh.

Also, I'm not zure if that'z a real , zo I want you to know that I waz kidding. I already knew that Banjo waz British (Britizh ).

P.S. Hey, Banjo! I take French in zkool!
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Old 12-07-2007, 09:26 PM   Top  -  End  -  #180
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Oui? Je suis la gar?
What? You're a train station?
And I never knew...
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