Whitefeather - OotS fancomic updated regularly - Page 8

Ichneumon · 01-03-2008, 04:54 AM

Interesting. This as great and will keep following this.

Lyinginbedmon · 01-03-2008, 08:22 AM

Clearly the silhouette is of the hobgoblin leader, but the question here is who is Jenna seeing?

banjo1985 · 01-04-2008, 03:49 AM

I'll take the lack of comments to be due to the board going down

Anyhow, my creativeness lasted for the whole of yesterday, and I managed to get strip 19 completely done, so I'll post it now. 2 in 2 days, almost Salmonesque...or Lyingesque...depending on your comic of choice!

Strip 19 - Overkill?

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Gratuitous cartoon gore FTW!

As always any comments are welcome, as are any suggestions, or even pointing out my regular miss-types. Strip 20 should be up maybe Sunday evening, though if I can I'll try to get it up earlier, to make up for the long break over Christmas!

Ichneumon · 01-04-2008, 03:56 AM

Wait, wasn't there a BBEG in the first comic or something that looked like him?

banjo1985 · 01-04-2008, 03:59 AM

*whistles innocently*

Vortigern? Well it maybe looks a bit like him....but I'm not saying anything. All will be revealed in time

Lyinginbedmon · 01-04-2008, 04:31 AM

I'm going to wager it's Cal's father she thinks she saw, though I'm very much waiting for the in-story revelation to be certain.

Lex-Kat · 01-04-2008, 08:16 AM

Yeah!!! Two in two days. I'm happy, all my favorite comics are updating.

Great comics, Banjo.

Undertaker798 · 01-04-2008, 10:12 AM

Okay, so I'm a lurker. I lurk like a Crocodile Paladin who wears a stylish bowler hat. This comic is awesome!

"Whitefeather. The comic of large breasts."

banjo1985 · 01-04-2008, 10:17 AM

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Originally Posted by Undertaker798

Okay, so I'm a lurker. I lurk like a Crocodile Paladin who wears a stylish bowler hat. This comic is awesome!

"Whitefeather. The comic of large breasts."

I am officially stealing this tag-line

Jimor · 01-04-2008, 03:00 PM

Shouldn't the latest installment be called "Redfeather?"

Nazde Bahatur · 01-04-2008, 07:06 PM

Really nice one, bravo!
I really like them OotS thingies, I'm trying to make them for myself but inkscape's no good for me.
A little help here, the alter egos, the four guys your protagonists crossed at the bridge, in what races do they belong?
I know the last one is a drow, and the first one maybe a tiefling?
What about the other two?

Keep 'em coming!

banjo1985 · 01-05-2008, 10:54 AM

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Originally Posted by Nazde Bahatur

Really nice one, bravo!
I really like them OotS thingies, I'm trying to make them for myself but inkscape's no good for me.
A little help here, the alter egos, the four guys your protagonists crossed at the bridge, in what races do they belong?
I know the last one is a drow, and the first one maybe a tiefling?
What about the other two?

Thank you kindly sir

The guys who crossed the bridge were two tieflings at the front, then a bugbear, and the drow at the back. They may return...depends how my mind works

Jayngfet · 01-06-2008, 03:13 AM

very nice comic, the detail on the stick figures actually creates an interesting effect,.

mockingbyrd7 · 01-06-2008, 02:36 PM

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Originally Posted by banjo1985

Thank you kindly sir

The guys who crossed the bridge were two tieflings at the front, then a bugbear, and the drow at the back. They may return...depends how my mind works

Well, they WERE headed in the direction of the main characters' home town...

The latest installation was great, and I liked the last two panels, BUT: Since you said in the character bios that Drake has something of a crush on our little ranger, I thought it would have been just as (or more) appropriate if Drake had gone up to comfort her.

I eagerly await more... More, MORE!!!! BWAHAHA!

Jimor · 01-07-2008, 01:17 AM

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Originally Posted by mockingbyrd7

The latest installation was great, and I liked the last two panels, BUT: Since you said in the character bios that Drake has something of a crush on our little ranger, I thought it would have been just as (or more) appropriate if Drake had gone up to comfort her.

My take was that Beech is the only one of the other 3 who knows WHY she was freaking out and who she thought that was, since he does tell her "it's not him" as he goes to comfort her.

banjo1985 · 01-07-2008, 04:35 AM

Congratulations Mr Jimor, you win a coconut

Comic #20 will be delayed, as I made a rather nasty mess of my right wrist yesterday, which is making my progress on this strip rather slow. It doesn't help that I have to make quite a lot changes to colours and stuff in this one. I'll do my best to get it up as soon as possible, but with essentially one hand I'm not sure how quick that will be

Nexus-R.C._Mina · 01-07-2008, 07:14 AM

Get well, Banjo. Focus on yer own health first, then the comic. Don't overtax yerself over this.

Mr_Saturn · 01-07-2008, 10:31 AM

We forumites are always here. Don't kill yourself over updating the thread. Or you could post a filler strip! Or prepare some in advance.

Hmm, i should do that too.

banjo1985 · 01-07-2008, 10:43 AM

Meh, bad wrist or no bad wrist it doesn't seem to be stopping me

quick trip to the doctors shows it's just sprained and bruised. I'd love to be able to get a buffer of strips up, but to be honest I don't have enough time and don't work quick enough...having a full time job, a girlfriend and a RPG campaign to run stops me doing as much as I'd like to.

I've been working on strip 20,couldn't help myself. It is now finished!

Strip 20 - Plot Exposition Ahoy!

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As always comments are welcome, it's nice to know that there are still people reading this with the amount of good webcomics that are on here.

Lyinginbedmon · 01-07-2008, 10:44 AM

Humourous extras always help

The exposition looks to be a good show, so I'm very much in want to read it

Dallas-Dakota · 01-07-2008, 02:29 PM

Heheh, Beech had gone ahead, chasing squirrels

And Banjo, I will continue reading, even though I may not respond to all comics

Dihan · 01-07-2008, 03:12 PM

Whitefeather is in my top 4 favourite comics on this board. To be P.C., I won't tell you what's in what place though.

Undertaker798 · 01-07-2008, 03:14 PM

This comic gets better and better. Of course, if it gets any better. One would have to take lengths.

banjo1985 · 01-08-2008, 04:55 AM

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Originally Posted by Undertaker798

This comic gets better and better. Of course, if it gets any better. One would have to take lengths.

If you sic Gilph on me I'll have to bring out my pet Rust Monster

Undertaker798 · 01-08-2008, 05:20 AM

It's a bluff!

banjo1985 · 01-10-2008, 04:48 AM

A bluff? Well that remains to be seen...just keep that warforged away from me

Anyhow, the wrist is recovering, but I'm still not 100% so the art on this one might be a bit off. Anyhow, here's the next strip...wow we're up to #21!

Aw young Jenna

Strip 21 - Don't Go Down to the Woods Today...

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Comment away

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Lyinginbedmon · 01-10-2008, 05:06 AM

Nice twist on the title, I'm very much interested in seeing where this goes...

Nexus-R.C._Mina · 01-10-2008, 09:19 AM

Nnnniiiiiice!

Is she going to ask about the wages?

Surfing HalfOrc · 01-10-2008, 09:34 AM

That's actually kind of creepy. Reminds me of a Western I saw once with Tommy Lee Jones.

Fluff · 01-10-2008, 10:42 AM

Hey, in the character bios, for Beech,

" Beech has knwon Jenna all her life, and see's her as a kind of big sister, despite being six years her senior."

Shouldn't that be "known" not "knwon"?