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11-20-2007, 03:21 PM
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#61
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
He's not Death at the moment, he's just a mage.
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11-20-2007, 04:29 PM
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#62
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
Bleehhhhhh, Here's Issue 8, my first Fireworks comic, it took me hours to do, hopefully as I get better, it'll take less time. I hope you like:
(For some reason, photobucket has decided to make the writing a bit blury)
Thoughts?
EDIT: Oh, and BedMon... I uhhh... Kinda coppied your table... sorry... It was kind'a sub-contious...
EDIT... Again...: Oh cripe nuggets... I forgot to give him his little beard...
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11-21-2007, 08:12 AM
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#63
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
I saaaaaiiiiidddd.... THOUGHTS?!?!?!?
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11-21-2007, 08:14 AM
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#64
Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: A Story Of Death
Thoughts? I'd like a tasty sammich.
Oh, you mean about the comic? It looks much better in Fireworks
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11-21-2007, 08:15 AM
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#65
Ettin in the Playground
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Re: A Story Of Death
Certainly more smooth corners and curves than with Paint.
I suppose it's possible that there was a wall around the city prior to the Remember period that was knocked down, but the present wall is a dark blue colour.
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11-21-2007, 08:20 AM
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#66
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
Yeah, the original was white
Also, sorry about the no colour where the grass should be... and the speach bubbles... I'm still trying to figure it all out.
Most likly by the time I do figure it all out, my free trial will end.
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11-21-2007, 02:46 PM
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#67
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
A short Issue 9:
EDIT: THe speach bubble came out... ****e... Couldn't be botherd to eddit it 'cos I'm lazy.
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11-21-2007, 05:19 PM
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#68
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
Well.... Slamon has a Banner... and so Does BedMon... and ABR... so it's only natural that I
steal their idea make one too!
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11-21-2007, 07:14 PM
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#69
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Re: A Story Of Death
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Well.... Slamon has a Banner... and so Does BedMon... and ABR... so it's only natural that I
steal their idea make one too!
Hey thats a good idea! I should make one for my comic.
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11-22-2007, 01:12 PM
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#70
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
Lol
Anyways here's Issue 10
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DUN DUN DUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!
I'm starting to get the hang of Fireworks now, maybe I'll be able to improve my drawings... hopefully
before my free trial runs out...
EDIT: Okay from here on things should
hopefully start to get a bit more interesting, sorry that the comics are so short.
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11-22-2007, 02:01 PM
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#71
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Re: A Story Of Death
*Gasp* Oh my god! They killed Tyler! You bastards!
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11-22-2007, 02:08 PM
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#72
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
I blame communism!
EDIT: I also blame them for my lack of correct spellings.
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Last edited by Nameless : 11-22-2007 at 02:09 PM .
11-23-2007, 10:06 AM
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#73
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
That was the the last Issue of Chapter I, Part 1...
Now for Chapter I, part 2
(Chapters are kind of like books and parts are like the chapters in a book. Each chapter is split into to however many parts and each part is split into however many Issues.)
EDIT: A new
chapter will begine
if when a new thread starts
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11-23-2007, 11:35 AM
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#74
Ettin in the Playground
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Re: A Story Of Death
Books? How many trends am I setting...
11-23-2007, 12:11 PM
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#75
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
Alright sorry, I'll say... story? That better? What about episode? It doesn't matter anyway, it's called a chapter... CHAPTER I SAY! I was just trying to explain what I meant buy "Chapter I, Part 2" Because chapters arn't usually split into parts.
EDIT: I didn't even realise that yours were called books untill just now, so uhh, sorry...
The whole under attack story thing, I've had planned for a while, I havent really bothered making one because I didn't really think it was necessery, When you started making your one, I thought that If I made my basic idea for a story into a prelude of your one, it would fit togethor quite well. If you don't want me to, I'll happely sepporate it.
Anyway Part 2 is basectly set 2 later... Heh, get it... 2 years... part 2... heh...
CONGRATUALTIONS NAMELESS, YOU WIN FIRST PLACE FOR WORST GAG EVER!
-> (stolen from Nevermind the buzzcocks)
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Last edited by Nameless : 11-23-2007 at 12:37 PM .
11-23-2007, 05:15 PM
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#76
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
Here are some of the new Charictors for Part 2:
The Earth, water fire and wind elementalists.
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11-23-2007, 05:35 PM
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#77
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Avatar references ahoy...
11-23-2007, 06:03 PM
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#78
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Re: A Story Of Death
Wonder why fire has straight hair...
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11-24-2007, 02:23 AM
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#79
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
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Avatar references ahoy...
Exactly ...
I have no idea what he means buy that...
@Bayar: why
doesn't he have straight hair...?
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11-24-2007, 05:32 AM
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#80
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Re: A Story Of Death
usually fire is all over the place, with spikes and stuff...
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11-24-2007, 06:16 AM
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#81
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
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usually fire is all over the place, with spikes and stuff...
Now now Bayar... That's completely besides the point.
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11-24-2007, 06:32 AM
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#82
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
Issue 11:
Oh cripe... I forgot to finish the speach bubble on pannle 6... sorry...
EDIT: It's a bit hard to read, but the bit in black say's: "Arcania- 2 years after the siege:"
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11-24-2007, 06:48 AM
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#83
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Re: A Story Of Death
I'm worried Arcania is going to have a reputation for falling with bravado, but this looks good
11-24-2007, 06:58 AM
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#84
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
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I'm worried Arcania is going to have a reputation for falling with bravado, but this looks good
Thanks
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11-25-2007, 09:38 AM
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#85
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Re: A Story Of Death
Thoughts? This is a good strip, lots of potential. Aside from the "occasional" spelling error, the only other thing I could suggest is moving all of the strips to the first post on page one.
Keep it up. Please. (Weird... My keyboard shifted into Dvorak mode for no reason.)
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11-25-2007, 04:33 PM
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#86
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Re: A Story Of Death
Sooo. all of part 1 is some sort of flashback?
Bad way to put it in dude.
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11-25-2007, 04:39 PM
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#87
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Re: A Story Of Death
It's only bad if the rest is terrible.
@V The entire story is a flashback! It's getting so much use because it generally works
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11-25-2007, 05:15 PM
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#88
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Re: A Story Of Death
huh?
no, its jest that all the "flashback" thingy is getting quite common these days, everybody is doing it.
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11-25-2007, 06:49 PM
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#89
Titan in the Playground
Re: A Story Of Death
The only flashback I've used up untill now is in issue 11...
And thanks
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11-25-2007, 07:25 PM
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#90
Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: A Story Of Death
He wakes up and it was all a dream..
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